A Certain Magician Professor at Hogwarts

I generally don't read fanfics at Qidian. Even some famous Mugen-liu movies involve works that I like and I can't bear to discard them. This is because the male protagonists with many Qidian fans will look down at the original characters in a condescending manner, be directly hostile or controlling, etc... There is absolutely no problem with this character. When solving difficult problems It's fun when I'm watching, but if it's a work or character that I like very much, I can't stand it, and I can't wait to jump in and help the character to fuck the protagonist together... I was recommended by the author when I was reading an article on the Green Station next door, because she always tweets and writes with assurance. The more I read, the more I liked it. The author's writing is careful. Felix has been steadily getting stronger, but he is not arrogant, and he is not even tainted with the problem of belittling one of the lions and snakes that HP fans often have. It can be seen that many characters are accurately described. The plot logic is also very good, with detailed research and no conflict with the original work. At the same time, it also develops the independent story of the protagonist. At the same time, it solves many regrets of the original work in this way. For me personally, a fanfic of this level will not insist on update speed at all (whether there is a female protagonist is even more trivial, I don't care), but since the author is a V novel, he must consider other things, and there are some readers who can only post a book review and say that they don't care about this.

Recently, I have become obsessed with HP setting articles, but there are too few serious ones that suit my taste. Today, I suddenly discovered this fairy grass book. Although I have just written the beginning, it is not poisonous at all and it won my heart. I was very surprised. Looking forward to what kind of education method the author will use for the protagonist in this work and the setting of the magic text system. Personally, I also want to see more plots about the protagonist's fame in making the children in the snake courtyard stop crying during school, and how he will cause trouble after that. Fortunately for me, I have now come across a rare and wonderful HP book. Unfortunately, I fell in love with it not long after I opened the book. The stock was too small, and I fell into a hopeless life of chasing updates from the beginning. (Btw, for example, apart from this book, among all the HP fans I have met so far, the only ones I like in the starting point are: From Azkaban to Hogwarts, Hogwarts Family, and Hogwarts: The Dark Side. Haha, I think I am very discerning. By the way, I love non-CP. There are not many good writers nowadays.

Professor Mowen is the best HP fanfic I have ever read. Even if compared among all online novels, it is impeccably excellent. Before this novel, I have read three HP fanfics, including A Certain Magical Hogwarts, Bloodline Wizard, and Everything Is Three (also known as The Invincible Academic Master). In terms of story completion and novelty of the plot, these three novels can all be considered good, such as the thousand-year love between Allen and Ravenclaw in Everything Is Three, William's expanded world view of Death in Certain Magic, Ivan's "Dark Lord" journey in Blood Wizard, etc. However, the three novels all have their own small problems or many regrets (from the reader's perspective), including the fact that the plot is forced to follow the original context, which results in some plots being obviously dull, including the harem, including the three little animals' stiff growth, the supporting characters' facial makeup, including the darkening of Dumbledore and Ron, and the indispensable lack of boring literature (the above shortcomings are extracted from the three novels, and do not mean that these problems exist in all three novels). Later, when there was a book shortage, I searched for excellent HP fan works on the Internet, and saw someone recommending the work Professor Mowen, so I started reading with the attitude of giving up the book if it didn't work. Unexpectedly, I fell deeply into it as soon as I read it, so it took me two weeks and 3609 minutes to read it from beginning to end. After reading it, I still want to leave some thoughts, so I will write a book review. Let me summarize some of my thoughts after reading this work. 1. There is no forced matching of the plot of the original work, and no forced intelligence reduction Although this work sets the protagonist who does not know the complete plot of the original work after traveling through time, it does not follow the rhythm of the original work in telling the story. Haipu is never vague about his abilities and responsibilities, and he never beeps when he can do it. Therefore, the Chamber of Secrets from the beginning is out of context of the original work (especially the scene where Harry stood at the door of the secret room and thought about being cautious but was startled by Myrtle and fell straight in, which made him laugh). The subsequent third grade (Prisoner) and fourth grade (Goblet of Fire) were just a change of bird and appearance. The same timeline but a completely different story, and even the important prop of the Horcrux was greatly weakened later on. In the original work, the plot behind the death of Cedric in the Goblet of Fire was a gray tone as a whole; in this work, it completely got rid of the original plot after the Goblet of Fire, and has always maintained a bright and pleasant tone. The plot of this work can be said to be extremely self-consistent, highly logical, and highly readable. For other HP fanfics, there is a problem of relying more or less on the original work in terms of plot. Some even forcibly reduce their intelligence in order to fit in with the original plot, as if they don't know how to proceed without the original plot. This is almost non-existent in this work. It is worth mentioning that the writing style of this work is very good, and the style is similar to the original work and has Chinese characteristics. The world view is also an expansion of the HP world view. So during the reading process, my subconscious often told me: This is Hogwarts, this is just a parallel world with the same origin as Harry Potter! 2. The protagonist's growth is traceable At the beginning, Hep was an exquisite egoist, the Slytherin among Slytherins, as if the world had nothing to do with him - as long as you don't mess with him - he just pursued the true meaning of magic, was wary of his surroundings (related to his school experience), and lacked sincerity or love. This was clearly reflected in the use of Occlumency in the initial job interview. However, by the end of the game, Haipu has fans all over the world, has become the all-powerful "big devil" in the eyes of Xiu Xiu, a reliable husband in the eyes of his wife, a trustworthy leader in the hearts of his friends, and the spiritual leader of the wizarding world, but it is not unexpected at all, because all of this is traceable. From an environmental perspective, the sweet and warm memories of the director and friends in the orphanage, the opportunities and occasional teachings given by Dumbledore due to his reflection (on Voldemort), Snape's seven years of care and trust as a colleague, the simple-minded professors such as McGonagall and Flitwick The atmosphere of home given to him, and the constant addition of many "bonds" such as Sniff Valen, assistant Hermione, Harry, Sirius, and Lu Ping, etc., Haipu's environment does not lack positive factors, and Haipu is also willing to accept them. Many of the above have also prevented Haipu from continuing on the road to darkness. And some key points have transformed Haipu. For example, Neville's magic riot incident made him realize the huge role of the emotion of "love" in magic; for example, sniffing Valen's company gradually made him more humane; for example, the final choices of Dumbledore and Grindelwald - one for love and the other for career - stimulated him to complete the final transformation of his mind. Responsibility, "humanity", and love were placed on himself like shackles, preventing him from becoming a complete magical creature or a god. 3. The plot of the three little ones is complete and the supporting characters are vivid The description of the three little ones and the supporting characters in this work is very brilliant. The characters of the supporting characters continue from the original work, but have their own different sublimations. Dumbledore's wisdom and perseverance are further reflected in this work, and it is full of details, which also allows readers to easily understand the choices he makes when facing various problems, unlike the original work, which is sometimes cloudy and foggy. The three little ones occupy a lot of space in this work, and they are closely related to the plot of this work from beginning to end. The growth of the three little animals is also seen in the eyes of the readers. Their abilities have improved several levels compared to the original work. The most important thing is that the growth of their character makes readers feel happy. They know that they should ask the professor for help when they encounter problems. They know how to fight instead of just using the disarming spell from beginning to end. They know that the adults are fighting outside without shouting because it is for their own good. They know that they should do what they can instead of yelling and making trouble for the adults. This work does not darken Dumbledore and Ron like other fans do. Ron, in particular, is very similar to the original work. He has his own little thoughts, pride and inferiority, but he never lacks courage and responsibility. At the same time, he follows the protagonist group to grow up and achieve his own achievements. He does not develop into a hysterical clown like other works. Other supporting characters, such as the twins, Snape, Malfoy and his son, Grindelwald, Sirius, Lupin, Ginny, Astoria, the snake-ridden snake in the world, and the German family, are also plump and stunning, and each play an important role in advancing the plot. It's a pity that the description of Voldemort's Death Eaters is a bit cliché, but it has little impact. 4. Warm daily details, compact plot As an online novel, this work also has "water injection" plots - that is, plots that do not affect the development of the story, but these "water injections" often make readers talk about it, including the "research" of the self-created path of magic text, which is very logical and full of the author's thinking; including It includes detailed descriptions of magic classes, dueling classes, practical classes and other courses, which are full of fun and fascinating; it also includes Xiu Xiu Valen's warm daily life, and readers have said that they should write more if they can; including the interactions between professors and classmates, it is informative and entertaining. These "water-filled" plots did not make readers irritated and wanted to skip them, and greatly filled the content gaps between the major plots. In addition, there are many foreshadowings in this work, but they are basically recycled. It can be said that the traces of grass and snakes are buried thousands of miles away, which reflects the author's strong ability to control the plot; the regrets in the original work have also been naturally complemented in this work; the connection between the plot and the plot and the expansion of the world view are perfectly coherent and logically consistent. It is also hearty to read. I think this is an important cornerstone of the success of this work. 5. Profound thinking, close connection with reality This is a magical novel, and it is also a novel that reflects the author's deep thinking about the world, outlook on life, and values. In some immortality novels and fantasy novels, they often focus on the description of the power system. The scenes pass by one after another, the supporting characters rotate, and in the end only the invincible and lonely one is left. How does the world develop after leaving the protagonist? How does society work? How do latecomers move forward? Very few works are involved. It is undoubtedly difficult to think about three perspectives while creating a plot, and to integrate the results of thinking into the plot. Fortunately the author accomplished this feat and gave us an excellent novel. It is reflected in this work that Haipu has been thinking about the integration of the wizarding world and the Muggle world from the beginning and has made arrangements in advance, such as the answer to Dumbledore's question during the interview, such as the establishment of Future World Company, such as the concern for Litsky, such as the guidance of the American Revolutionary Association (unfortunately, this line was basically abandoned later), such as the invention and creation of the magic text series, etc. When the plot of Voldemort began to come to an end, the plot surrounding the "Act of Secrecy" was introduced through the key figure of Grindelwald, and the fusion of the two worlds of Uman and Ma was finally completed. We are honored to see such a perfect ending. Both the Wu and Ma worlds have benefited from the prosperous times, and all the supporting characters have completed their growth and sublimation; and for the future, the energetic next generation has begun to grow (tune) strong (skin) into (pound) grow (egg). At this point, we have every reason to believe that a beautiful future can be safely envisioned. In the end, this is a warm work and an excellent work. Thanks to the author.

Written in front: Discussions are welcome, but quarrels are not accepted. Please look elsewhere for disagreements. As we all know, fan fiction has always been easy to write and difficult to master, especially for long-form works: first, the initial readers often come because of the original work, and naturally hope that the characters can match their original characteristics; second, the story becomes more and more deviated from the original plot in the later stages, and how to continue to maintain attraction becomes a top priority. There has always been an endless stream of Harry Potter fans from Qidian. Some are close to the original work, some are unique, some are self-indulgent, and some are just for fun... Among these various novels, Lao Han's "A Certain Magical Professor of Magic" is undoubtedly the most outstanding one. Even after jumping out of Qidian, it is not inferior to other fans at home and abroad. It is not the most faithful to the original work - fans who are short and concise or sketch fragments are undoubtedly more advantaged in this regard - nor is it the most unreasonable - not to mention the deviant "The Way of Reason" and the playful and angry "Joking with Mary Sue", even among the Qidian fans there are many with wild imaginations. The best thing about the book "Professor of Magic Literature", in my humble opinion, is that it achieves an excellent balance between character restoration, plot development and commercial needs. From the perspective of characters, it is undoubtedly unrealistic for Harry Potter fans to be able to meet the needs of every reader: some readers only read the novels, some Harry Potter fans watch the movies alone, some fans read both works, and there are many who only read the fans... In order to maximize satisfaction To meet the expectations of readers, Lao Han has undoubtedly found a very suitable path: using the novel as the basis, supplemented by movie settings, and at the same time, under the position of the protagonist as a teacher who teaches and solves doubts, the main characters can accelerate their growth, refine and purify, and "rebirth" into a better version of themselves. Whether it is the visible improvement in skills of Hermione, Harry and others, the personal growth of students such as Ron and Draco, or the combination and even unexpectedness of Neville, they all show us the possibility that the "children" in the books can do better. As for the adults who have completed their shaping, Felix is ​​solving puzzles and resolving worries so that they can "go gently into that good night." It can be said that the protagonist of Lao Han is worthy of the name "helper", and he conscientiously serves as the "form of gold" in the alchemy process. He can be renamed "accelerator" (dense fog). In terms of plot, whether it is the completion of the shortcomings of the original work, the gray lines of the original plot, or the filling of corner details, they all demonstrate the increasing proficiency of Lao Han's writing skills. Hep's calmness in the face of several mutations, the orderly way Harry, Ron, and Hermione fight individually or in teams, the twists and turns of Neville's magic riot, and the restrained sketch of Sirius' master and servant going to the cave together, every scene is vivid and vivid on the page. The moving aspects of these scenes are naturally inseparable from the author's grasp of the characters: Harry is bold and careful (although sometimes he misses a step by mistake), Ron is loyal but brave, Hermione makes plans before taking action, and Neville is perseverant... It is the complementation of the characters and the plot that makes both of them more moving. In business, although the division of spell levels is a bit old-fashioned, it is still simple and easy to understand. Changing the magical world is also a common main line besides defeating Voldemort. It's not unique, but it's the icing on the cake. I have said a lot of praises, so let me talk about the shortcomings of this work in my opinion. Maybe it's because Han is "more timid when he's close to home". While the original character shines, as a lover of the original novel, I have to admit that Felix Heap, the protagonist of this work, did not perform well at the two high tides (suppressing Umbridge's hundreds of dementors, and fighting Voldemort in the cemetery), and was a little thin and simple. Perhaps more positive descriptions here would make the story more balanced and better to watch. Just a family comment. In any case, "A Certain Magical Magic Professor" is still an excellent fanfic that is worth reading by almost all readers. Regardless of whether you are a reader of the original novel, a movie viewer, a fan of the novel, or a stranger, I believe everyone will get fun from this work. I hope this rough review can resonate with you who have read it and make you curious if you have not read it. Ciao~

I have read half of the book. To be honest, the author has written very well. I feel very good after reading it. If I were not disgusted by what Zhang said about the heaven-defying people, the experience would probably be better. I recommend reading it, but I recommend you to block this chapter. Every time I describe Hermione, I can see a group of people who are against the heavens arguing about the so-called heroine and CP. It is very meaningless. Every time I look at it, it is a waste of your mood and time. It is really disgusting.

I really like the plot of Classroom No. 7 In Chapter 367, which is even more exciting than the innovative plots of the male protagonist in the magic text class. After reading a lot of fan fiction, you will find that some protagonists always look at the original text from an overhead perspective, rewriting the character's fate like a savior with a bit of unconscious arrogance; the worse protagonists are just soulless puppets who are coerced through the original plot, and their only contribution is to fall in love. As of now, this article can be said to have broken away from many old-fashioned frameworks. Although at first I was dissatisfied with why the male protagonist did not know much about the original work, and I also complained about whether the author wanted to water the plot, the subsequent development made me willing to be slapped in the face. Whether it is the magic text class, starting a company, or this time establishing Classroom No. 7, There is a sense of surprise that shines before my eyes. It's not that these plots are very novel. After all, even more outrageous plots have been written by HP fans. The rare author has described all kinds of details, which is full of immersion, and the male protagonist has also unknowingly integrated into the interaction with students and other professors. "He looks just like the character in the original work, but cooler!" This is my favorite direction of fandom. It is not a crude bomb dropped on the original work, but a steady stream of living water is injected into it, blending into it, and unknowingly changing everything.

Starting point HP fan I would like to call you the strongest

When I was a child, my favorite thing about Harry Potter novels was the descriptions of all kinds of wonderful magic in the wizarding world. This novel also achieves this. After reading it, I really felt like I was lost and unfinished.

When I was reading "The Pacifist Necromancer of Hogwarts", I was in a book shortage due to the author's inability to update it. Later, I opened this book on the recommendation of a book friend in the book review section. It's too late to meet you! I haven't read many fanfics, so I dare not say this book is the best, but it really meets my expectations and gives me a lot of comfort. This book makes up for many of the regrets in the original work that made people vomit blood and made it difficult to understand. It also writes a very exciting and reasonable new plot. I am very grateful to the author for his tenderness in the fate of each character. Looking forward to the new book. Looking forward to the author's early return.

I feel that the behavior of the protagonist in the latest chapter is still within the scope of my understanding of the protagonist. First of all, his attitude towards Nick changes. Rather than saying that he would have this attitude towards Nick, he would have this attitude towards everyone, including Dumbledore and even Hermione. If he wanted to restrict him, he would have this attitude. We feel that the protagonist is a "good person". In fact, the good things the protagonist does along the way are motivated by profit. As the book says, no one has really entered the protagonist's heart. Including when the protagonist encounters that permanent parting, the person he confides in is his long-dead friend. He did everything on his own, from entering Hogwarts to now as a professor. The protagonist's final acceptance of Nico was within my acceptable range. Nico made a lot of foreshadowing this time, including the ongoing exchanges and the death of Nico's wife. Nico is the person who created the Philosopher's Stone and is someone who can really resist death. His acceptance of death is undoubtedly the most believable in the book.

This is the magical world. The Harry Potter written by Rowling only set up Voldemort and a story, but she could not write a richer magical world. After watching the movie, I can't see any combat operations. Western magic can only be written by Easterners. Many foreigners are now obsessed with Chinese fantasy novels. The author can try to export this novel abroad. If the method is formal, the profit will not be small, because the copyright is stricter. I just don't know if this kind of fandom is infringement and legal in Europe.

In fact, Slytherin did not die, but after quarreling with Gryffindor, he traveled across the ocean to China incognito. That's right, it's you, Ouyang Feng! Did you think he was just holding a cane? It was a magic wand. Western Poison Ouyang Feng comes from the far west, and this far west is England. This wave is a dream linkage

Excellent Harry Potter fanfic, fun and with some depth. The protagonist is a typical Slytherin, but not annoying, and even changed the image of Slytherin in my mind. Recommendation: five stars (40 experience points, here I come)

I haven't read the original books and only watched the movies when I was a kid, so I don't know much about the plot of Harry Potter. But I felt very good after reading the whole book. The characters in it are not torn apart from the movie characters I know, and they basically make choices and dialogues that are consistent with their original characters. There is no such thing as the protagonist's deity coming down to earth and causing the separation of the spectrum. Basically, the séance is just to make some original regrets come true. There are also plenty of daily group scenes. Conversations with people passing by may not necessarily advance the plot, but they give you a sense of reality. This is a Harry Potter fanfic worth reading.

A very good book that I am willing to spend money to buy and read again and again. The plot arrangement does not follow the original work, and the new plot I designed is also very exciting. In fact, when I saw Miss Jane, I guessed it was Hermione, and I also understood the reason why the main text did not include too much, but as a Haihe party, it is really a pity that the extra chapter did not include more interactions between them! I also hope that the author will publish a new book soon ~

A very good Harry fanfic. I don't like to read cool novels. For me, the advantage of this novel is the amount of focus on Harry. To be honest, I never read fanfics to see what the time traveler (my substitute character) does, but to follow the trajectory of the original characters. I saw a better and brighter growth that was different from the original work, and I also gained an understanding and affection for the protagonist, which almost made up for all my regrets about the original work. Generally speaking, when I read fanfics, I don't read CPs. This one is special. Firstly, the plot development is reasonable. Secondly, I think the emotional line between Hermione and Ron in the original novel is indeed a bit abrupt. Thirdly, this article actually doesn't pay much attention to it. Therefore, I understand the author's decision and think this is a good fanfic. This is my favorite Harry fanfic (even though it's a bit boring near the end). [The above is purely a personal opinion and a purely subjective opinion. ]

Seeing this, I felt that Lao Gai was indeed Lao Gai! ! Voldemort is so different! ! ! Congratulations to the author! The characters are drawn so well! !

I really like the character of the protagonist in this book. After all, we are all social people, so we can't be too kind (*￣rǒ￣)

An extremely excellent HP fanfic. Among the many HP fanfics I have read, it can be ranked in the top three. Come on, author, it doesn't matter if the update is a little slow, but the quality must be guaranteed.

I think the protagonist should help the Slytherins more, because where did the protagonist come from? Why don't you make some small efforts for them? I want to see more scenes between the protagonist and Malfoy, the author would like to thank you 😁😁😁😁

Why can't I buy new chapters? It shows that the online environment is dangerous. This is the only book like this.

Great book, top Harry Potter fanfic, and the first fanfic I paid to read.

The four houses of Hogwarts are Gryffindor, Ravenclaw, Hufflepuff, and Slytherin. The specific introduction of the four houses is as follows: 1. Gryffindor House represents fire, the house spirit is bravery, vitality, and chivalry, and the house emblem is a lion; 2. Ravenclaw House represents air, and the house spirit is agility, wit, and erudition. The emblem is the eagle; 3. Hufflepuff House represents earth, and the house spirit is integrity, loyalty, honesty, and not afraid of hardships. The house emblem is the badger; 4. Slytherin House represents water, and the house spirit is bloodline by any means necessary to achieve the goal. The house emblem is the snake.

What a pity, this is another Harry Potter fanfic that I haven't finished yet. I must have read about five books, big and small, but haven't finished them all. The reason may be that when I was a child, I only watched the first few Harry Potter movies, and I lost interest in the scenes of the battle of wits with Voldemort starting from the end of Goblet of Fire. What attracted me from beginning to end was the wonderful magic and the fun-filled adventures of the protagonist. This book is undoubtedly very well done. It kept me going until chapter 500, let's just stop at this wonderful number! No more, no less! I will read it again if I have a chance in the future, but I probably won't open it again, because I turn off all comments when I read, and I don't want to disturb my reading atmosphere. I also enjoy the soul-trembling feeling of combining my own imagination with the author's whimsical ideas. When I decided to stop reading this book for now, I opened the comments and I got some bad news. Later Professor Hap and Hermione were together. It's so uncomfortable. Unfortunately, there is a serious mismatch between the author's thoughts and my thoughts, which have always been intoxicated by the pure love between two teachers and students. I am trying to understand that the author may think that a professor who has experienced a dark student experience can be cured if he meets Hermione, a wonderful girl like an elf! The foregoing is indeed paving the way. Our self-righteous professor is slowly learning to love through our lovely Sniffing Valen. However, I still can't agree with the final setting, it's too bad. As an elder, he participated in the growth of the children, but in the end they were together. Oh my God! I'm still looking forward to our professor meeting a better choice, or spending time immersed in the magic text, accompanied by knowledge. Anyway, this is an excellent Harry Potter fan work. Showing a powerful and interesting magic text professor. What a wonderful magical world.

Tied, super nice

Added a new protagonist: This is the sixth level magic - the Great Fire Sword!

The professor in my mind/ This is my first production. Recently, there are too many pictures of big-breasted cute girls, and men are extremely uncomfortable... My favorite thing is to post some garbage pictures in the middle of the night that no one will read

Let me report the results first. The collection of this book is about to exceed 3,000. The author is very happy and has reached another milestone. But suddenly he found himself being criticized. Hey, he is a little autistic. In fact, if you think about it, unlike the author, readers have an overall and clear understanding of the book, so misunderstandings are inevitable. So I opened this post to talk about the issue above the title—— Writing Style The style of this book can basically be summarized with three keywords: reasonable direction, original style, and foreshadowing flow. It's all pretty easy to understand, so I won't explain it in detail. Plot Let's talk about the early plot: It is difficult to write professorial articles. A big reason is how to reasonably participate in and influence the plot. Because more than 90% of the plot of the original work is directly related to the trio, if it is not written well, it will become a nanny story or a dog-licking story. The author's idea is to establish a friendship with one of them and participate in the plot appropriately. Considering the character of the protagonist, the other two scumbags are really not suitable. So Hermione became the assistant. She is a relatively important character, especially in the early stage. On the one hand, it leads to the setting of the magic text system, and on the other hand, it indirectly affects many people through her. For example, Harry knew in advance that he was a Parseltongue, Ginny threw away the diary in advance, Malfoy was punished by copying books... This is how the plot changed little by little. Another example is the girl wearing toad glasses in Chapter 47, which is also to pave the way for Luna's official appearance later. Personally, I still prefer the writing methods of "Gray threads of grass and snakes spreading for thousands of miles" and "Butterfly Effect", using events to string out the characters, and using details to change the direction of the plot. Analysis of characters in the original work I love the characters in the original work very much, so I will not deliberately criticize a certain character. This is also a manifestation of the "reasonable direction" and "original work style" mentioned above. Harry, Ron and Hermione actually all have many shortcomings, which are also the shortcomings of many readers, but it is undeniable that they also have rare advantages. And as the plot develops, the protagonist's influence will continue to expand, directly and indirectly affecting their choices. Perhaps this is also a fun part of teaching articles? Teach, educate people. So each of the threesome is very important, but their "glory moment" has not been written yet. Other original characters have similar ideas. The heroine problem This is the direct reason why I wrote this post, but I feel a bit short of writing this alone, so I came up with the above content... I have been writing an outline recently, and I have been revising it repeatedly, which gives me a headache. The outline is connected by what the protagonist does, so when I wrote it, I didn't consider the female protagonist. It's not a big problem if there are any. After all, the story has just begun. It will be fine if you add it later. The author's previous ideas can be classified as: no CP or single female protagonist. Alternative heroines are very common, Hermione, Luna, Penelope, Fleur, etc. These people are either too young or have no intersection, so there is definitely no emotional line in the early stage. But the interaction still needs to be, um, very pure. Many readers think Hermione is the heroine. The big reason is that she has more roles. This reason is explained above. Afterwards, Luna will also officially appear and interact with the protagonist. Could it be said that the protagonist plans to open a harem? Shivering... The protagonist is not lsp, well, neither is the author. Wow, I wrote a thousand words without realizing it. It's better to add it temporarily (dog head).

Newcomers look here. If you are a newcomer, you basically don't need to read any comments when reading books now, and they have little reference value. Brainless boasting and brainless blackmail only have the effect of disgusting people. Just take your time and read a dozen or twenty chapters. If you're interested, continue. If you find it boring, leave. There is no need to give opinions. I haven't seen a few constructive ones, and most of them are due to excessive self-awareness. I have always been disgusted with the so-called "crowd-funded book writing". Even if it is a fan, I want to see the story constructed by the author from his heart, not the self-righteous and messy thoughts of "book friends". I have always believed that as a reader, the only useful opinion is to point out the loopholes and unreasonable aspects of the author's writing, rather than directly commanding the author - "I want you to write like this." In my opinion, this is the most basic etiquette of reading books and the most basic respect for the author. An old man who has been writing online for 10 years expressed his feelings.

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