Rebirth Becomes a Waste, Tianhu Laoliu Leads Me to Win

This book sparks innovation in the framework of cultivating immortals, and the setting of Tianhu mecha and token fragments is refreshing. The author controls the rhythm accurately, and the suspense hook at the end of each chapter (such as the father's poisoning, the Black Sea crisis) creates a strong attraction for reading. If the emotional bonds between the characters can be deepened and the plotting lines of the power game can be refined, it is expected to become a phenomenal fairy tale. Looking forward to Zhongtian gathering all the Ember Crystal Tokens and revealing the final chapter of the truth about the Ember Crystal Sea!

To be honest, the writing is not good. I don't know the title of the book, and I don't even understand what the highlights are, or what kind of story you want to write. The introduction is a mess, and the paragraphs are not well done. The content layout is also not good. How can modern online articles be so densely written? Moreover, the story was too lame, with no highlights, and the setting was boring, which did not arouse my interest. The level of visa rejection at a glance. But I am also a veteran, so I will give you a few recommendation votes.