Heavenly Ranking

This writer is supposed to be a top-tier author, but the romance is just unbearable. If you're not good at something, you shouldn't write it. Like in Gun Kai's books, the female lead is killed off within three chapters – that's pretty exciting!

Martial arts is martial arts, and now they're even doing a live stream? I seriously doubt if it's really the person in the video. I can't believe it!

Watching Baili Qingfeng evokes a sense of caution and madness, and I really enjoyed the contrast. But now, Ji Fuyou seems insecure and cowardly, and his biases towards capital are very strong. Although Ji Fuyou has a kind of ruthlessness like a small person, it's really hard to watch this kind of portrayal. Maybe it's satisfying to see Ji Fuyou go all out, but his daily life is really frustrating.

If you can't write about dating, then don't write about it. You sleep with Xiaoyu every day, but you don't give her a single stone; you give it all to her sister. Even the worst person wouldn't do something like that.

The main character's older sister and Xiaoyu disappear from the story later on, with virtually no screen time. The funniest part is that the parents are only mentioned twice. If you're not good at writing this, why not just cut it out? It's unnecessary.

With a natural disaster looming over three years away, I'm determined to save the entire planet. My most pressing task now is to train my less-than-ideal older sister into a capable and independent individual. 😫😫

I just had to get this off my chest. I just read about the Temple Trial, and based on the author's description, it should be a personal trial! You can even kill others to gain points. I don't understand what the author's mindset was in writing it as a team-based battle.

What kind of bizarre thought process does the author have? Why is he so stingy with his girlfriend? He won't even give her money if he throws it in the trash, yet he sleeps with her every day? And she gets pregnant? I just can't accept this setup. I'm giving up.

It would have been so much better without this romantic subplot. The older sister told her brother early on that her best friend didn't like him—and she actually said she didn't! I'm so curious. If your best friend doesn't like your brother, you tell him to forget it. But now that your best friend likes your brother, you start chaining him up and handing him over to her. Good luck, author! I'm outta here.

As a long-time reader, I can only say that the romance is the biggest flaw. Could the author explain why they wrote it this way?