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He is considered a great writer, but the emotional drama he wrote is really hard to watch. Don't write about things you're not good at. It's like a book that gets out of the way. The woman is hacked to death within three chapters. It's quite exciting to finish it all!

Martial arts is martial arts, and the live broadcast is here. I really wonder if it's me who can't stand it.

The feeling of watching Baili Qingfeng is that of caution and madness. I really enjoyed watching this contrast. But looking at Ji Fuyou now, I feel like I have low self-esteem and cowardice, and I also have a heavy filter on capital. Although Ji Fuyou has the ruthlessness of a small person, it is really uncomfortable to watch him in such a portrait. Maybe it can be refreshing to watch Ji Fuyou being so ruthless. But this is really frustrating to watch every day. When I see a beautiful woman, my second brother takes over my brain, and when I make money, I feel uneasy. What's the saying, "If you want to wear a crown, you must bear its weight." Obviously this money does not fall from the sky, but is earned by wearing your head in your belt. I know that the author wanted to write about a sense of transformation from the bottom to the top, and by the way promote the transformation of spiritual power, but the way you write it really disgusts old readers. Your first suppression and then promotion is really bad. I originally planned to read the cool article, but it turned out that it gave me a feeling of abuse of the mainstream, a feeling of low self-esteem and mental distortion.

If you don't know how to write about love, don't write about it. He sleeps with someone like a little fish every day. He doesn't give a stone but gives it to his sister. No matter how bad a person is, he can't do such a thing.

The protagonist sister and Xiaoyu both disappeared in the later stage and basically had no scenes. The funniest thing is that the parents are only mentioned in two sentences. If you are not good at writing this, can you just cut it off? It's unnecessary.

The world will face a natural disaster in more than three years. I am determined to save the entire earth. The most important thing now is to train my sister, who has low qualifications, into a strong person who can stand alone😫😫

I can't help but feel uncomfortable. I just saw the trial in the temple. According to the settings written by the author, it should be a personal trial! You can kill others to gain points. I don't understand what kind of mentality the author has in writing about team combat.

What kind of weird brain circuit does the author have? ? Do you have to be loyal to your girlfriend? ? If you don't throw the trash can to your girlfriend, why would you sleep with her every day? Still pregnant? I really can't accept this setting. Abandoned by poison.

It would have been better without this relationship scene. My sister told my brother in the early stage that my best friend doesn't like you, but she actually said she doesn't like you. I was very curious. My best friend doesn't like your brother. You tell your brother to let it go. Your best friend likes your brother, so you start to tie your brother with a chain to your best friend. Come on, author, I will withdraw first.

As a long-time reader, the emotional drama is really the biggest failure. Can the author explain why he wrote it this way?