Tokyo Painter Will Not Meet Musical Girl

If the main plot is comics, currently only 2 or 3 of the 20 chapters have anything to do with comics. Not even as many words and details as a college party, is that reasonable? If it is love, then the description of the heroine is not as much as a college party. If you like socializing and parties so much, why should you develop comics? Wouldn't it be more suitable for Gold Finger to go in another direction?

It's the plot and troubles of the male protagonist Asasi again, I'm tired of watching it. Moreover, the climax is not very high, and a typical person plagiarizes his work. But the article is relatively smooth. If you like this kind of article, you can read it.

There are too many plots of falling in love and fighting, so comics should be the main line. I can only say that the reading experience is not good. I hope the author can make adjustments and reduce the romance by nine-tenths. There should be more cartoonists to promote the main line. I came here to draw comics. There are only a few chapters in the comics. I hope the outline can be adjusted.

Regardless of priority, Nosy has forty chapters, most of which are boring plot threads that have not been developed.

Copying is not exciting enough, love is not sweet enough

One update a day is too few. Can I add more updates?

Very good, a little scattered, the story would be better if it were more compact