Zhutian: Starting from Lin Ping's Father

Do you have so many manuscripts saved?😆

My brother, please stop being obsessed with being a father. The last thing I could not accept was He Daqing from Siheyuan. His face at that age makes me uncomfortable even thinking about it. Although it is great for an uncle to seduce a young girl, there is really no need to become a father right away.

Brother Tao is still too ahead of his time

Write more urban ones, the period ones are not interesting.

Why doesn't the author post a free chapter notification behind the old book?

Author, the urban dramas you write are better.

Just don't keep making original characters

It would be quite interesting if the protagonist were Duan Yu and his father Duan Zhengchun, but He Daqing in Siheyuan would look like he wanted to vomit🤮. This book can be used to write an old paragraph

Why are they all plots about being a father? Although the first book is titled "Happy to Be a Dad", it mainly focuses on the plot of the protagonist and the heroines. This one focuses on the three aspects of the pimp and Lao Yu Lao Yue.

Let's use the name of the protagonist Lin Zhennan. Don't use Wu Jing. What fan fiction wants is a sense of immersion, mainly the reader's sense of immersion.

The two chapters will not be released together, but they will be neither better nor worse if read separately.

This book will definitely be a hit. The previous book frequently fed readers shit.

I don't understand, this plug-in is inexplicable...

I won't write it anymore. Why don't you just post it all at once?

Is the author going to cut it off? It's probably because he's not sexy enough and has lost readers 🙂

It's better to specialize in one book, otherwise the plot will be meaningless except for the plot. If your courtyard explodes and you can't write a thrilling plot, you can consider recruiting Jia Zhang, Aunt Yi, Er, San, etc., It will definitely explode 😄

​​The characters in the first half of the book can basically stand up. At least after reading it, you will know which character has what personality. The second half of the book is really fun to watch when they are doing things. However, none of the female characters can stand up. I feel that the facial makeup is too serious and I can't watch it at all. This book is all about facial expressions from the very beginning. The way of speaking, tone and attitude do not establish the image of any female character. Even if the narration can describe a person's image, the content of the dialogue is almost the same. It would not be inconsistent if you change the name to another heroine.

Continue to write the new book well, Xiao Huanxi has ordered all of them

Zhutian: Isn't it better to start by becoming Lin Pingzhi's father

This sexy book must be updated and subscribed!

You just gave me the monthly ticket and are you ready to have the abortion? 😰

Can you continue writing this book?

After finishing The Swordsman, should I write about the Divine Eagle or the Eight Steps of the Heavenly Dragon?

Brother Tao, come back to the city! What's there to write about about ancient martial arts costumes?

The author is really particular about it, and he will finish it as soon as he finishes it.

Sixty or seventy chapters of a world are enough, there is no need for more than a hundred chapters

Ai is not easy to use and not as beautiful as me

This is written by a woman, very feminine.

😡You guys have so many saved manuscripts and don't want to send them out to us