My Ordinary Path of Cultivating Immortality Should Not Be Cut Off Here.

The plot is actually quite good, but the villain, Shrimp Head, keeps jumping around, there are people who want the protagonist dead one after another, and there are all kinds of conspiracies and tricks, but it's just that this is already sixty chapters, and not a single enemy has been killed! ! ! Although I also know that all the enemies have backgrounds, and they are often immortals, but the villains written by the author are too stupid, and the protagonist always seems to be resigned. It's like you messed with me before I started practicing, and I have broken through, and you can still mess with me, so my training is not in vain? Everything else is okay, I look forward to a big killing spree later! But I feel that at least you have to be at the level of Dao Lord to kill the enemy. Otherwise, you will become an immortal at every turn, and it will be of no use to improve the protagonist's cultivation in the mortal world.

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I have read three books by the author, Female Channel Cannon Fodder, A Puddle of Demonic Cultivators, and the current one, and I have some thoughts First of all, the female channel's book, in fact, it was very exciting in the early stage, with mediocre writing, mediocre cultivation, and inadvertently surpassing everyone else. The calmness and calmness are the biggest joys (including the following "A Puddle of Demonic Cultivators"), but the biggest failure is the inexplicable female protagonist, not to mention that the protagonist has cultivated to a transcendental level. The concept of the world, and you are still relying on the heroine. If you write the heroine's character very plump, similar to the image of a teacher, it is fine, but every time you write about this heroine, you will interfere with her. The atmosphere of cultivating immortality you created before completely disappears, and there is a very strong sense of separation. Everyone comes to see the protagonist. You always weaken the protagonist's sense of existence in front of the heroine, but the image of the heroine is completely unworthy of this kind of treatment. It is really overwhelming. The reason why the second book, Demonic Cultivation, is better than the previous one, Female Channel Cannon Fodder, is that the female protagonist has less roles. I think the author has reviewed the previous book, so a long chapter focuses on describing the protagonist's own cultivation. , And the image of the heroine is a little more likable than the previous one (she won't call her mom for no reason) The last one is the current one, it has an inexplicable heroine, the boss returns, and the protagonist, and the protagonist is inexplicably bound to the heroine, It's really huge and blunt, even worse than the one written by the female channel cannon fodder (why is the author always obsessed with calling mom or being called mom), the impression is really bad. After these few books, author, don't you know where your advantage is? You can rest easy Just focus on the protagonist. To be honest, the heroine you wrote is really boring. It's just that your writing is good in other aspects, so I don't want to give up the book, but it's really tiring to read like this I hope the author can refer to my opinion as a young reader Sincerely

It's obviously a cool article, so why do people who seek revenge always have to give everything they have, and they may not win? Instead, those clowns and despicable villains can jump repeatedly? (The possessed Su, to put it bluntly, is the chess piece that the author uses to kill people, and then the protagonist comes to the rescue)

Why is this beginning not as good as the beginning of the female channel Cultivation to Immortality? Have you really watched too many female channels?

Every generation is trying to control the fairy clan, but each generation has no effect. It just takes advantage of the popularity of the previous game, and the fairy king of the previous game looks like a clown. We really can't engage in some underworld and barbaric immortality. The realm and combat are obviously very fairy-like, but we always stay in the comfort zone, and the updates are slow.

If you don't take the Enlightenment Pill, why are you pretending? 😅

After reading six chapters, I feel that this book is very petty.

There is a problem. With things like cultivating immortals, your talents should not be optimized as your level increases. Well, for example, a person's swordsmanship talent is initially 10, and a person's swordsmanship talent is initially 5. Assume that both parties have reached the same level. If you have a talent of ten, you have improved a lot. You have improved to 100. I have a talent of five. I may not be able to improve to 100, but it is no problem to have sixty, seventy or even 80. There is no reason. It is still the same as before. You are an ordinary person. The more you use your brain, the smarter you will be. , Because on the whole, cultivating immortality is a process of its own evolution from imperfection to perfection. So I feel that some settings in some novels about cultivating immortals are good, but after reaching a certain realm, qualifications are not of much use. One method can apply to all methods

The author's writing style has not improved much after all this time. The shadow of cannon fodder is too heavy

Why does this author mark the chapter title as "two in one" every day? Is it deceptive? If the title of "two in one" means two chapters are combined into one? The word count simply doesn't meet the two-chapter standard, I'm just lazy, it went from two chapters to one.

This protagonist will only be passively beaten? Those sects formed groups to kill him at every turn, so why not exterminate those sects? You are such a great saint

Describe in detail when you are being made difficult. Once you are about to show off, the audience just happens to have a reason to leave. It's not satisfying enough.

Now I can't understand what the author wants to write at all, and I don't know what the protagonist is going to do. Every time a big scene is about to happen, he just ends it and changes the map. I can't understand it.

The author relies entirely on settings to write stories, following interesting settings one by one, rather than setting up plots. So you will enjoy reading this book, just like that short play. But the author can only write very slowly, stepping on the watermelon rind and sliding wherever he goes. Maybe he didn't have an outline or he had an outline, but he just threw it away as he had an interesting setting in his mind.

I saw that the male protagonist is still single. Is it an impotence article? Traveling through the world of immortality, don't you know that fairies are human beings?

The characters in this book, one after another, were all born

Still no heroine? In the last book, Ning really popped up out of nowhere. The protagonist somehow insisted on getting involved with this Ning. After the inexplicable withdrawal, there was no more description and the ending suddenly ended. I looked confused⊙(◇)?

Record the reason why the fourth picture was disgusted (=_=) The protagonist is new and not very good, so he can't completely give up. He still wants to pretend to be an expert, but others slap him in the face while pretending to be an expert, crushing the identity plate, ugh, and then leaves with a few bad words (´△｀) I feel a bit like Mei Yige.

This author has written more than a dozen books with a maximum of 1 million words, and there are also many eunuchs. Where did you get this level 5 🤔

That person surnamed Ling, he should be killed when he should be killed, and he would retaliate again and again out of boredom 😅

How can there be no idioms about Solitaire? Let me start with the beginning: Creation of the world

... The following, shortcuts, whoring, and detachment, these have begun to change the soup without changing the medicine. They are completely repeated back and forth for sixty times, which is meaningless... Author, if you are going to die, why don't you finish it and start a new book quickly?

Come on

It has depth and connotation. Good books pick readers and help each other achieve success. Here's to the bookworm of 20 years! 🙏

Raise for four days, five minutes. Somewhat abstract

Next, there are two endings. It doesn't matter if there is no resurrection on Easter, either way is fine.

Author, can't you be more diligent? 🙂

The male and female protagonists of these recent books are all the same person

The book should be almost finished. The protagonist feels alive or not.