Journey to the Mysterious World

Sure enough, it collapsed. It changed from a weird novel to a dog food novel. I changed the setting and background several times in the middle, and I knew that the author was definitely going to write it.

At present, I have read 57% I would like to make some comments First of all, overall, the book is very good I will list the advantages 1. The various exercises and secret techniques written by the author in the early stage, from practice to use, have their own characteristics, and at the same time they all have a good classical fairy tale feel. What's more important is that each secret technique is often used several times to solve different crises. It gives people a feeling that they learned nothing in vain. Compared with some books that write a lot of skills, when learning, they are all "learned over time". As a result, some of them are only used when learning, and some are even used. It makes people feel that the difference between skills is damage +1, +10, +100. It is a good thing 2. Knowledge in worldly affairs is knowledge, and understanding of people is an article. The author's description of interpersonal interactions is quite good, and it is definitely a highlight in the early and middle stages, especially the Lotus Monk and the little princess. The characterization is very good 3. The author can write weird things, the author can write weird mysteries, construct a full and curious world, and describe the war in a very realistic way. Of course, as a "professional troll", how can I not "spray"? Now, let me pick a few bones in the egg 1. The character image of the little princess, let's talk about the Lotus Monk first. He is a very rich man, with a romantic and poisonous tongue, but also affectionate and righteous, and caring for the people. In the early stage of The Little Princess, an innocent and cute little girl was well portrayed. But as the first heroine in this book, she is innocent every time she appears. Although the author has good writing skills and is rarely poisonous, the thin image and the repeatedly reinforced innocence will make people a little tired in the middle of reading 2 The main character is full of bugs (this reminds me of Guangxin). First of all, the pig's feet are 8 years old, brother. You let him run around the world and experience danger everywhere, which makes people feel very inconsistent. Of course, this may be a necessary prerequisite for Pig's feet to soak up the little princess, but you mentioned it a few times when Pig's feet went out to perform tasks, in case we can't remember it, right? Think about it, why do Pig's feet in many books start to gain strength in their teens? Also, regarding the character design of the pig's foot, I understand that you want to give the main character a dog-like character, but this may cause two problems. First, it is difficult to advance the plot. There is no way, the dog is too low-key. I have seen two ways for the author to advance the plot. First, Involuntarily and involuntarily refers to the fact that Pig's Foot is very weak in the early stage and often gets involved in various incidents involuntarily when performing tasks. However, this method is not easy to use after Pig's Foot takes off. The second one is greed for money. In the article, Pig's Foot is poor and often resolutely gets involved in some things for some money. This reason only needs to be used a few times. If you use it too much, you still won't be able to write down the specific effect of the money. Every time Pig's Feet originally didn't want to agree to it, but Pig's Feet immediately changes its mind when someone else spends money, which will make us inexplicably doubt Pig's Feet's brain. The second question is that the persona may collapse, and it is best to maintain a persona. I remember a passage in the book where Pig's Foot returned to Mahakala. In a city, Pig's Foot was thinking that the golden body could not defeat the three saints on the other side, so he used his verbal attacks and used his magic foot power to dodge the opponent's attacks, just pretending to be cool. There is no benefit but he makes enemies, the scolding is not enough, and the other person is still very angry. This makes me want to express condolences to Pigfoot's parents. In fact, there is no contradiction between being stubborn and being sentient and having righteousness. Isn't it true that the Lotus Monk doesn't follow his heart? He can be very stubborn sometimes, but when faced with problems like Blood Lotus, he still rushes forward resolutely. In the book, you can also see that he has many like-minded friends, and friendship still flows among them. On the other hand, I'm halfway through reading Pig's Knuckle and haven't seen that he has any good friends besides the little princess and his senior brothers. How you advance further depends on your own control and money! 3 Stalks and Humor One of the wonderful things about this book in the early stage is that various humors can relieve the depression of the dark world, but I don't recommend using the same stalk all the time. We will get bored if we use too many of the same stalk. What's more, some memes should be moderate, such as cuckoldry. The advantage of this meme is that it is highly irritating to readers and can arouse interest in reading (and bring a lot of comments by the way). However, cheating itself is a very serious matter, so remember to never go too far, especially if it is wrong. Another question is why there are more and more memes and humor in reading. While you were laying out a world view of war, chaos, disappearance of gods and demons, and a world full of darkness and secrets, you thought you could write a glorious epic of struggle. However, you ended up adding more and more humorous parts to the life part of the article, and I didn't feel it had any good effect. What's more, humor and jokes are often in the early stages of the book. Generally, in the middle of the book, they often become serious, using various emotions, such as fearlessness to resist the evil god, etc., To achieve an emotional and moving effect. All in all, the author's writing skills are very good. The first and middle stages of this book are still very good (I haven't read the second part yet), and there are less poisonous points. The shortcoming may be that after reading the book, you will gradually lose your passion and feel a little aesthetic fatigue. I still recommend it very much, at least it will probably not poison you.

A novel that is boring to eat and a pity to discard may as well be finished in time.

Why do you books with hundreds of monthly subscriptions have better writing? I don't know if it's your own fault for books with a few hundred dollars. The writing is poor and there are many errors in the plot, but they are still popular.

Four refuges: refuge in the Sangha, refuge in the Dharma, refuge in the Buddha, refuge in the beautiful girl 🙂

See the introduction to the four refuges, taking refuge in the Buddha, taking refuge in the Dharma, taking refuge in the Sangha, taking refuge in the beautiful girl...

Rebirth through Time Travel The original body was pushed off the cliff and reborn through the corpse. The family has been wiped out, and there are powerful enemies outside. The boss, Daniel, cannot defeat him and can only live in obscurity. By chance, the little princess came to give me a "big gift" (it would be better to take poison pills). Cultivation of spiritual roots has attracted evil spirits into the body (still conscious), but the host does not know yet. . . When the spiritual root enters the body, the bad boy's father comes to ask for money and is forced to go into debt! Practice hard but it's useless and you can't get in. He knows the great realm but has no way to build the road! Going out with the host, he was confused, and the host was stuck on the wall. Sending a letter to Yang Lou, he almost died. He learned that the evil spirit root (which is conscious and becomes more dangerous the more he cultivates it), met a "loli" and was arranged to plot against him. I have always been frustrated, always stubborn, and always timid. No wonder the monk is easily possessed by the devil.

If you do not save the world for the true Buddha, you will perish yourself for the evil Buddha. Thus I hear, the Tathagata sees me, I see the Tathagata. It is the mind that is the Buddha, not the mind that is the Buddha. Killing is to protect lives, killing karma is not to take advantage of others. Buddhas, demons, monsters, monks, monks, and ghosts are everywhere.

When I read this book, I read 100 chapters because the main character was still rubbish in chapter 100. I didn't expect it to end in chapter 500. I thought I had to write 10,000 chapters. After reading the early part, I knew it was going to collapse

Author, you update at least one extra chapter a day.

Instead of writing a bunch of crap, I might as well come back and rewrite this.

Look what I found

I've finished reading it, it's gone. The whole book was wonderful in the early stage, but in the middle and later stages, it was tasteless and a pity to throw away. The appraisal is complete.

Even the deacon couldn't get there after subscribing…

After reading about seventy chapters, I can read it, but I feel that the opportunities the protagonist encounters and the benefits he gets are too blunt, and most of them are given by female characters, and these female characters either have a loli next to them, or they are loli themselves...😥

After reading the first 100 chapters, and then looking at the word count at the end, there is no doubt that the author will collapse in the later period. If this book is completed with about 3 million words, and the first 500,000 to 800,000 words are about the story of Yingchoujian, the protagonist should have reached the Guiyi realm and gone to the Eastern Tang Dynasty. This is quite reasonable. As a result, the author wrote 100 chapters for the protagonist Jiu Xuan Second Level. If the original estimate was based on the normal progress of 3 million words, the protagonist would touch the edge of the Six Emperors. If the book is completed with 1 million words, the protagonist will probably touch the Three Saints. The author feels that he may have an outline to know what story to write, but the story is written on the outline. There is no detailed outline to control the progress or the outline has collapsed, and he is completely unsure of the protagonist's strength and progress. It is like some immortal novels about cultivating qi from the first level to the ninth level, writing millions of words, but at the end, the water has stopped, and the story can be written. The plot was basically written during the qi training period, and writing later would inevitably be repetitive, so I just wrote it with a stroke of a pen. It used to be hundreds of thousands of words to improve one level of qi training, and now it is a chapter of foundation building, three chapters of golden elixir, five chapters of Nascent Soul, and finally ascending to the fairy world. It is completed quickly. The progress in the early stage is slow, and the mechanical deity in the later stage. Most of these books rely on defense.

This is. . . Finished? ! ! !

I read a book a long time ago, and it did fall apart in the later stages, but that doesn't mean I can't read it. Now that I think about it, the plot is like a weird dream, and it's quite good.

I am confused after reading more than 40 chapters, so whether Prince Teng was cheated on or not, and whether the daughter is his 🤔🤔

In reality, you may encounter countless things and you can't see the beginning or end of them, but you can't write novels like this all the time. How many things the protagonist encounters pass without beginning and end, and then it's as if these things never happened. Then why did you write it, author, just for the sake of subscribing? The key point is that your story writing is not very good.

Take refuge in the Buddha, take refuge in the Dharma, take refuge in the Sangha, take refuge in... Xiu Niang

There is too much foreshadowing in the early stage, and it is finished in a hurry later, which is a bit like looking at the flowers in the clouds.

What is this new book about? It's a brainless novel disguised as a brainless novel. I can't read it even before it's on the shelves. This one is better.

This book is a cult book and cannot be read carefully

I will definitely come back to this book in the future to read the beginning, it is so well written. It's just crappy except for the beginning.

It's a pity, the background setting is okay and the language is okay. But the plot is not very good, I saw chapter 400. 1. The motivation to promote the plot is not very good. Every time I offend someone, I run out of the Buddhist temple. 2. The general situation of the world is only described in detail by three forces, and the overall situation is not well written. 3. The male protagonist in Chapter 400 is only 11 years old. 4. Some of the enemies you encounter cannot be beaten and run away directly, and then there is no follow-up. 5. Some things are not detailed. This plot should cost at least 3 million.

I followed hundreds of chapters before, but I gave up because I don't remember why.

Is the author still writing books? I followed the catalogs of several new books and found them.😰

Well, the epidemic is so severe now that the author can't go out anyway, so I might as well just add two more pages 😁

Just a transcendent Blessed One Tathagata. A saint? In heaven? In earth? Hongjun is dead? A disciple of Sancun Mountain can escape. How could he, who was so powerful in the prehistoric times, be completely plotted by a Tathagata? It's a bit prehistoric. The protagonist has gone outside, and if he cannot round up these powerful words, it is equivalent to writing in vain. If there is internal fighting in Lingshan, it is okay to say that a lot of people will die. However, the heaven is covered by Hongjun, and the Jade Emperor is Hongjun's Taoist boy. Lingshan can be destroyed by Tathagata? Those two Western saints don't have the guts! It is impossible for all saints and great powers to die, and the world will still exist. You can still practice.