Starting from the Fist Wish, the World Will Explode!

Collect it first. There are too many messy worlds in the introduction. Fighting novels can just be played in the fighting world. There's no point in going to that completely unrelated world to gain popularity.

Some people are really stupid. Say that I don't write Hibiki's power, and I don't write Hibiki to play the game. Isn't this their expectation in vain? I want to say something. Hibiki's strength is abnormal in itself. When strong, he can knock away sandbags and break iron chains with one punch. But sometimes she couldn't even do a few barbell bench presses or hold a plank for long. With such a sound, I really don't know why I have to write about her power. I must write if others write? Not necessarily. I wrote the body of Jie Xiongmingzao and the body of Julius. Isn't this enough? Which of these two people can compare? I really don't understand what some people are thinking. Another problem is the start of the game. How can a person transform from an ordinary high school student into a boxing fighter regardless of life and death in one year? You know, her family lives a prosperous life, and she should be the kind who has not experienced any hardships. I love eating delicious food, watching movies, and handsome guys. I can't even keep exercising for any length of time. For such a person, if you let him cheat like the protagonist, isn't it a joke to become a fighter in one year? Okay, she can really endure hardship and see blood! We just want to fight and become the strong one. Hibiki's big stomach king, strange strength talent, coupled with a top fighting talent. What can you do in one year? Kanai Cosmos has been fighting since he was a child. He also learned joint techniques from Mu Shi for several years, and was a sparring partner arranged by a top security company like Xipinji Security. He participated in boxing competitions for four years, and then used the plug-in given to him by Yabazi. Just like that, he barely reached the top eight. You must know that Xiao Universe is also a big eater, a fighting genius, and has much better resources. But even if this is the case, his true strength ranking may not be enough to enter the top ten. How should I write a message in this case? Should I give him Yamashita's plug-in? Also, some people say that since you don't write about it, why don't you just write about boxing wishes instead of fitness girls. I just want to say, Li Dapu, these comics are a world apart. Except that the timeline of seeking truth is in the front and Omega is in the back. Fist wishes Asura, sweat it out, fitness girl, win a thousand gold. The timelines of these three movies are basically the same, with One Wins a Thousand Gold going a little further back. It can be said that the timelines of Fist Asura and Sweat Bar Fitness Girls overlap a lot. And in essence, Sweat Fitness Girl is a drama about fitness and relaxation. There's really no need to add some fighting scenes to it. Interacting with plot characters and having interesting things happen, isn't this a good way of writing?

It is recommended not to go to Harry Potter. Although Harry Potter has high traffic, it is too inconsistent with the nature of the protagonist.

He was still trying to suppress his fighting power. He defeated Wu Leian in reality, so why couldn't he defeat him in his dream? You are Zhu Tianwen, and there are a lot of copies waiting for you to write, but as a result, everyone has written a hundred or dozens of chapters and has not yet started to enter the main plot of the Boxing Conference? How many more chapters do you have to write after writing the second part of "Fist Wish", Shin Moo Ryong? The simulation in the dream is too long, and the benefits are getting lower and lower. There is no need to cram in the word count like this.

It can be seen that there was some design and thinking in the first few chapters. After 1v100 in Chapter 34, the overall quality began to decline. It is basically: Get to know people → make friends/humiliate → fight. This set of processes, although others are like this, but the author lacks foreshadowing, lacks clever design, is too direct, and obviously increases the enjoyment and entertainment plot. It doesn't match the character setting, the strength has not increased, people have swelled first, There is also the golden finger, the sense of existence decreases as you go on, more than 50 chapters, a total of three talents have been copied, and they are all used as auxiliary talents. You have to practice them all by yourself, forget about practicing, you haven't gained much experience, you haven't upgraded, and you haven't defeated Himuro in the end. Why do you say you are bloated? What are you proud of?

The original opening was so well written, but now it's all simulation and daily life, with no plot advancement at all, and a good hand of cards is a mess.

The writing is good, not like a newcomer, but the pace is too slow, and if the plug-ins are turned on too much, the combat effectiveness will be suppressed. If you don't just write about one world, why do you write upgrading exercises in such detail? After copying the talent of the Muscular God, he still had to upgrade step by step and still suffered a lot.

If you could write most of the worlds in the introduction, it would really be worth reading. The premise is that it doesn't end badly. It's too many books to write about a bunch of worlds in the introduction and end up with only two or three in the end.

To translate, in the world of Asura, don't go out and fantasize about blowing up the heavens.

Looking at the introduction, it turns out that Japanese comics are just Japanese comics, and it's pretty good. Suddenly, I came across a Chinese comic! Withdraw, withdraw

So you're going to write about one person winning a thousand gold? I admit that I have sexual fantasies about You8

I've been going around for a long time and can't kill anyone. It's been over a hundred chapters. You've been writing about the heavens, but now you can't even kill the executioner.

It's been over 160 chapters, why are we still in the initial world? Isn't it Zhu Tianwen?

Boxing and sweating are the same world.

It's a bit procrastinating, and fanfics don't need to spend too much time on leveling up.

It's been over 100 chapters, where are the heavens?

A body fat rate of 8% is already very thin. The person who fights in martial arts has a body fat rate no higher than this. He is not participating in some fitness competition, so there is no need to keep the body fat rate so low.

If you write about fighting, specialize in fighting. If you write about extraordinary, don't just focus on fighting in the early stage.

Drive high and go low, man-machine, he must have run out of inspiration and can't make a living.

Isn't a punch worth a thousand pieces of gold? He and Quan are willing to share the same world view.

Wu Leian wanted to kill the protagonist, but the author did not write Wu Leian to death

After reading the introduction, I think it should be good.

Was it because he was hit by Zanjiro that he awakened the female in his heart? 🤣🤣 If yes, where is the author's women's clothing? 🤪🤪

I have read Chapter 100 so far, let me tell you my opinion. The advantage is that writing about fighting has certain technical support, or I have checked relevant information. At least it will feel very professional to someone like me who doesn't know much about fighting. The disadvantage is that except for the fighting part, the content is very dry, very dry. From my understanding, it is impossible to write about fighting from beginning to end in this kind of fighting article. It must be mixed with some exercise, training, study or daily interactions. The exercise part is okay, but the daily life is extremely boring. I don't know if the author is doing it for a change or something. The way of writing the daily part is that I especially like to write about getting along with a few girls, but to be honest, this part of the description is very It's very dry, just what this person said, what the other said, and what the protagonist said. To be honest, after reading so many chapters, I didn't feel the unique characteristics of any character. What one person said moved to another person's mouth, or she said it or didn't say it. Moreover, the author especially likes to give a large paragraph of text that looks like Baidu Encyclopedia when meeting new characters. To be honest, this is a novel. It is really annoying to see such a character summary in one chapter that is the same as copied and pasted from Baidu. The key is to read every one. It is foreseeable that there will be many more later. Another problem is that the description of the battle in the virtual space is really not necessary to be so lengthy. It is not a formal battle, just like training. Only people can describe how the first training was, and it is impossible to mention it again and again. I saw you write about how a character fought from 40%, and after a while, you talked about how to fight at 80%, and finally how to win at 100%. I really couldn't stand it. In short, I personally understand that this kind of fighting article is mainly reflected in the positive cycle of training, growth, and defeating powerful enemies. It is supplemented by interesting daily life and some distinctive supporting characters to add color to the article. I think the part of training to defeat powerful enemies is good, and the process of acquiring new abilities is also simple and clear without delay. It would be better if the daily part can be more vigorous, and there will be less character overviews and virtual space descriptions.

If you don't have a lot of talent, you'll be evenly matched with everyone else.

The content of Boxing Wish is worse than reading comics

Carefully write about Yuujiro. The worldview of Saba is about the protagonist group being more powerful than the whole world. The ancient people are not as good as them, so let them become weaker people as experience packs. The result of resurrecting Sengoku Musashi is too awesome. They can't accept it and force him to go offline. Japanese sumo wrestling was also destroyed by them, so Yujiro in the protagonist group is set to be a super boss. As for the character of ss, I have seen many people write about Sabagi after writing Kenshu. The result is that the things the protagonist obtained in Kenshu are put into Yujiro. It is a different kind of Saba. No matter what, it is not as good as Norma's blood. They all think that Yujiro's move stops the earthquake with one punch, and they feel that Yujiro is invincible. There is a feeling that the strongest of Kenshu is like a weak chicken.

Why is it that Quan Yuan fans are always tj?

How should I put it? It's a bit boring. I only know that the protagonist practices and then fights. However, the fighting scenes are not passionate and graphic enough. It should be more of a comic exaggeration, but there are no too bloody incidents. This is really good.

😭Is it cold?