
Fixing the Universe, Starting by Practicing Getting Beaten
整顿宇宙,从练习挨打开始
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I think it's watchable, but don't think it's bad because of the flaws I picked out.
I came from the previous book. Sometimes I feel uncomfortable while reading this book. I thought about it carefully and understood. Suppose you have two children, and you think one of the two children is the son of destiny. You will give him the best martial arts and the best knowledge. The other child begs his grandfather and grandma to serve you, so you only give him some superficial knowledge. You are merciful. I think a normal person would be jealous and mentally unbalanced. The most difficult thing for me to comment on is that some readers commented that Master Dog is okay, because the protagonist is just an accidental addition, and the protagonist should be grateful. If the protagonist does not help Master Dog, he can still find someone to take over the role of the protagonist. I finally understood how the villain in the previous novels felt because his master passed down his master's martial arts skills to other juniors, and he looked down upon the villain and left the villain a hand. The villain had an unbalanced mentality and betrayed the master, and how uncomfortable it was to be expelled from the family. After that, I would also like to say that you have to be grateful. The master could have taught you nothing. He taught you more and taught you less. That was your master and he didn't owe you anything. If you think about it carefully, it is indeed like this. The master does not owe you anything, but it is just psychologically uncomfortable!
The original name is "The Fairy of the Stars", hereby certify it 🙂
It was fun and interesting to watch earlier and had a lot of sass, but I felt very unhappy when I saw that the dog master recognized the apprentice he wanted, Zhang, and abandoned the protagonist. Especially when the previous happiness accumulated and the plot suddenly collapsed, the emotional contrast became even more serious. So, what will happen to Zhang in the end?
Absent from words, very arrogant
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Bad end ·A Single HusbandPart 2
(Please read "Bad end · "Du Fu" Part 1 and 2" before reading this article) "Xiaofu, wake up!" Niu Jingjia's voice came to Zhao Chengfu's ears. "Sister?" In the office, Zhao Chengfu seemed to be in a daze. When he came back to his senses, he heard this sweet voice, looked at Niu Jingjia's worried expression, and for some reason felt a sense of joy in his heart. "Sister, what were you talking about just now? I didn't hear clearly. Can you tell me again, mouth to mouth?" Zhao Chengfu made a dirty joke as usual, but found that Niu Jingjia was not as blushing and embarrassed as before. "Xiaohu, you must wake up, you must live!" All the scenery around him seemed to be stretched, and he saw Niu Jingjia's figure gradually blurring, leaving only Niu Jingjia's worried instructions in his ears. "Sister, where are you going? If you don't like my jokes, I will never joke with you again, sister?!" Zhao Chengfu shouted anxiously, and everything in front of him disappeared, leaving only himself in darkness. , he is actually awake!' A familiar voice came to his ears. Zhao Chengfu opened his eyes and saw the white ceiling in front of him. He wanted to twist his neck and look around, but found that he could not move anywhere except his eyelids. A burst of concise and powerful footsteps came: "Little brother, you are awake, how do you feel? Don't worry, you are safe now." He saw the faceless man talking to him, and a snowflake flashed in his vision. "Fifth Master... My sister, have you seen my sister? Her name is Niu Jingjia, and she is the director of the Ninggu Junsheng Shuttle Station!" Zhao Chengfu, who had not yet fully recovered his mind, wanted to ask anxiously, but found that he could only spit out a strange tone, like the noise coming from an unstable TV signal. Wang Wu and the monk stood next to Zhao Chengfu and looked at each other, seemingly shocked by his sobriety. He couldn't hear clearly in the noisy voices, and he heard the rustling background noise of electronic signals passing through his head. "Ah -" Suddenly, Zhao Chengfu felt a heartbreaking pain in his mind, like dense fine needles traveling through the brain tissue. With the pain, he finally recalled everything that had happened before. He thought of Zhang Bolin's dog-like smile, the heartbreaking pain of Zhao Moyu's sharp teeth biting his body, and Niu Jingjia's lost eyes... "Isn't Dr. Hua here yet? Little brother, hold on, the doctor will be here soon!" In my ears, I could hear Wang Wu's voice, noisy footsteps, the beeping sound of the instrument... And the squeaking sound of the deepest electrical signal. The voices were mixed together, and Zhao Chengfu finally fell into coma again. One month later. "It's a complete miracle. 40% Of the brain tissue is destroyed, limbs are missing, and only a heart, half a lung and a part of the liver are left in the internal organs. The spine is broken into three sections, and you are thrown out of the river. When I picked it up, I just tried to put it together with Wang Wu's spare parts, but I didn't expect you to survive. What kind of secrets does your body hide?" The middle-aged man in a white coat wearing gold glasses said with interest. "Haven't you studied it many times in the past month? If you don't know, then of course I can't give an answer." Zhao Chengfu's electronic throat made a sound: "If you have to say, drive The driving force that keeps me alive is probably hatred. " "Is it possible for a miracle caused by human will? It's a pity that I am not very knowledgeable and cannot understand the principle." The white coat turned over the inspection report in his hand and continued. "You said you are going to the place where precision machinery design is the most developed in the Galaxy? I remember, didn't Wang Wu arrange a good place for you in the capital of the New Dynasty? You really need a good rest, right?" "Thank you I will definitely keep this kindness in my heart. However, I may not be able to stop until the hatred in my heart is extinguished, and this body may not be able to support me in making a difference, so I want to make this body more durable." Zhao Chengfu moved the arm composed of steel and hydraulic rods, and the metal friction made a harsh sound. "With all due respect, your body is currently in a precarious and delicate balance. If you want to modify it randomly, the probability of death on the spot is 99%." The white coat had to remind him. "Please rest assured that before repaying my kindness and taking revenge, I will definitely treat this body with caution, caution, and caution." Zhao Chengfu said, inserting a chip recording mechanical design skills into the slot of his temple, and the two electronic eyes passively glowed red due to the knowledge download. "Okay, I won't disturb you anymore. By the way, Wang Wu forged a false identity for you, a Yingguo AI clan named Yingshan Shigeo. The specific information about the identity is here." With that, the white coat gave out a chip and went straight out. "Thank you and Mr. Wu again, thank you, Doctor Hua." Zhao Chengfu took the chip, and the sound of Doctor Hua closing the door was heard in his ears. He sat alone in the empty room again. I am afraid no one could guess that this guy wrapped in iron could once be a healthy human being. Now he cannot and does not need to eat. Fifty milliliters of nutrient solution per month can satisfy the physiological activities of his remaining organs. The electricity that drives the mechanical body has become the key to his activities. Why can he still maintain relatively normal thinking and intelligence after losing part of his brain tissue and almost all his organs? How can he still endure the phantom limb pain all over his body and the incompatibility between mechanical parts and flesh and blood so calmly? He reached into the drawer, took out a piece of paper, and awkwardly folded a paper crown with his mechanical fingers. The electronic eye received the signal and reported the news to him: [A month ago, a vicious safety incident occurred at the Ninggu Junsheng shuttle station. After investigation, it was confirmed that Zhao Chengfu, the compliance and risk control director of the station, was actually an undercover agent for the "Star Alliance". On the day of the incident, Zhao Chengfu hijacked a shuttle and kidnapped the station manager Niu Jingjia and fled the Junsheng shuttle station on the spot. During the escape, the shuttle accidentally crashed and Niu Jingjia was killed on the spot. Zhao Chengfu took advantage of the chaos to escape. His current whereabouts are unknown. Zhao Chengfu took out the paper crowns he had folded before from the drawer and put them together into an emperor's flower. He seemed to be smiling, but the metal face was not equipped with such a useless function. The red light in his electronic eyes went out, and Zhao Chengfu remained motionless, as if he was lost in thought. The thinking assistance system entered a dormant state, and silence enveloped him. Listening carefully, he seemed to hear the bottom noise like ocean waves. * Many years later. Outside the customs... Ah no, the name here now is Emperor Diva. Viewed from space, the Imperial Star has now turned completely silver, with hub floating cities revolving around its orbit and connected to the surface of the planet through space elevators. Looking from a distance, it looks like a silver dandelion. On the Imperial Star, the supreme ruler of the entire galaxy, the "Emperor", listens to the prayers of every citizen spread across his vast territory in Ning Valley. Everyone believes that only by bathing in the sacred light of the "Emperor" will this galaxy not go astray. His mobile angels guard every citizen of the galaxy. He unified all races and established a galactic empire without borders, classes, or discrimination. The empire integrated many institutional advantages, with society responsible for education and elderly care, wealth publicly shared, and technology promoting production. This starry sky has truly reached the unity of the world at this moment. Even so, the rebel forces headed by the Peace Academy are still persistent. These black sheep aim to restore the backward system of the past and attempt to subvert the rule of the great "Emperor". And just today, the location of the rebel headquarters was identified by the Forbidden Army directly under the "Emperor". During further investigation, investigators even discovered... "Your Majesty, we have confirmed that the rebel headquarters is hidden in the K20 star system. The second planet, and based on the intelligence we intercepted, we can be sure that the 'blasphemer' is also there. " Chief Seraph Suzaku, who was kneeling on one knee, suppressed the excitement in his heart. In front of Suzaku, a golden sphere with a diameter of ten meters was quietly suspended, with red cipher text flowing on the surface of the sphere. "Thank you for bringing me the good news, my most powerful angel." The holy metallic synthesized voice surrounded Suzaku's ears: "Leave the next thing to me. The galaxy will finally usher in long-lasting peace. This is worth celebrating. I want to set today as the first day of the first year of the new era." "I will obey your will!" Suzaku looked pious. In the first year of the New Calendar, the Emperor Star launched a large space bridge outside the atmosphere, transmitting countless metal units directly above the rebel headquarters. They were called the "Emperor's" hands by the devout angels, and they were an extension of the "Emperor's" will to spread order. Three minutes later, the evil rebel headquarters was purified by the holy light of the "Emperor". The extremely sophisticated and precise control left everyone here alive, but deprived them of their ability to move. The criminals will be taken away and dealt with according to the law, and the innocent people who were coerced and coerced will be properly placed. Under the glory of the "Emperor", the law enforcement officers will not wrongly accuse any innocent person, nor will they spare any criminals. Among them, the most heinous "blasphemer" Zhao Moyu was punished by the "Emperor" himself. Among the ruins that were once the headquarters of the rebel army, the angels escorted all the personnel away, leaving only Zhao Moyu lying helplessly in the ruins. "What a long-awaited reunion, Master Dog." The mechanical units gathered into one face and conveyed the will of the "Emperor" through the quantum network. At this time, all Zhao Chengfu could feel was peace of mind. * Zhao Moyu woke up from his nightmare and found himself lying on a small bed, with warm sunlight shining on his belly, making him feel a little comfortable. In the kitchen, the aroma of food came, and Zhao Chengfu's voice came to his ears along with the sound of spatulas: "Get ready to wash your hands and eat, Master Dog." He sat at the table and waited. Watching Zhao Chengfu put the plates on the table one by one, took out his special plate, served him rice, poured the juice, and smiled sincerely: "Master Dog, this is to thank you for your life-saving grace last night." I will teach you which formula." Zhao Chengfu was overjoyed: "Really? Master Dog, why did the sun come out in the west today? Aren't these tricks for your good apprentice?" "Since you said so, will you become my disciple?" He asked solemnly. Zhao Chengfu was afraid that it would regret it, so Bang Bang Bang banged his head three times: "Master, please bow to me as a disciple!" "Okay! Good disciple!" Zhao Moyu said to Zhao Moyu. Chengfu helped him up from the ground and smiled happily: "As long as you want to learn this skill from me, I will teach you everything you can!" After the apprenticeship, Zhao Chengfu asked curiously: "Master, why did you suddenly agree to my apprenticeship? "Teacher?" "Um... I... I regret being a teacher... These days, I take your filial piety into consideration, but I ignore your heart and focus on Zhang Bai." Lin Najizhan, in terms of talent, is much better than him. Why didn't I realize it earlier? " "What about the prophecy of the Son of Destiny?" Asked Zhao Chengfu. "It doesn't matter. It's my own business to accept a disciple. As long as I like it, and the master's prediction may not be accurate." Zhao Moyu said nonchalantly. He had never felt so relaxed in his heart, as if he had let go of a burden. When Zhao Moyu saw the good apprentice in front of him, he couldn't help but smile like a dog. It had lived for more than 100 years. For the first time, it felt the warmth of family from someone other than its master. "The shield holder doesn't seem to be that important. Besides, my good apprentice is so talented, so a mere shield holder may not be in the bag." Zhao Moyu thought: "I will expel Zhang Bolin from the master right away. At the beginning, Am I out of my mind? I clearly know what kind of guy he is, but I still cling to him because of a prophecy." The two masters and apprentices sat at the table, looking at each other and laughing. After Zhao Chengfu finished laughing, he said, "Master. Let's eat first, and then I'll cook two dishes to celebrate. " "It's already rich enough. Don't go. You must be tired from cooking so many dishes. Go and rest." Zhao Moyu felt sorry for his apprentice: "I'll wash the dishes today... Hey, apprentice. Brother, where are you going?" Zhao Chengfu stood up with a smile and walked away. Zhao Moyu felt a little panicked and quickly wanted to stop him, but Zhao Chengfu didn't respond and walked further and further away, gradually leaving only a small dot in his field of vision. "Disciple..." Zhao Moyu wanted to chase, but suddenly felt his limbs fall through the air, and the whole dog fell into the abyss. It felt unprecedented fear. It woke up from the dream, breathed a long sigh of relief, and was glad that it was all just a dream. Looking at the familiar furnishings around him, they still looked like those of Zhao Cheng's husband's house. The rest was still the familiar small bed, which had been cleaned spotlessly. Suddenly, it felt some discomfort in its buttocks. When it turned around, Zhang Bolin's head replaced its buttocks, and the connection was sewn tightly with rough metal sutures. Filth flowed from the corner of Zhang Bolin's mouth, and he made a sound of "ummm". Zhao Moyu's thinking stagnated. But this time it was not a dream, this time it was cold reality. The reality brought it a more intense and profound fear than in the dream. It recalled everything, recalled the day when it was caught by Zhao Chengfu ten years ago, and recalled the nightmare it had experienced in the past ten years. "Get ready to eat. Whoever eats slowly is a bad dog. Bad dogs will be punished." The mercury-like liquid robot transformed into Zhao Chengfu, each holding a plate of dog food in his hands. "Do I need to say the punishment again? If whoever eats slowly, then he will be the one with the butt responsible for the excretion of the two dogs." Zhao Chengfu smiled, put down the dog food and patted the dog's head. "Are you ready to start?" The two-headed dog devoured the dog food in front of him, moving skillfully, fearing to fall behind. (End)
Abandoned
For example, Zhao Moyu is a stupid dog, Zhang Bolin is a villain, and Zhao Chengfu is a licking dog. They are all talents. I will delete the book first and polish it. You can write slowly.
The biggest problem of this author is to let some so-called "villains" live for too long. Trash like Zhang Bolin and Bai Lu, who have neither strength nor villain charm, should have received lunch a long time ago, but as a result, they are still jumping around after hundreds of chapters 😅
Hurry up and let your cousin get the lunch box
If you can't stand Master Dog's short-sightedness, let the protagonist show off and let his cousin get the lunch. This guy doesn't want to live for hundreds of chapters. If you read too much, he will become poisonous.
Did the author change after this? Why is it completely different from the previous statement? The previous one was nestled in Ninggu, and the writing was quite exciting. But since the war between Yingluo and Luo, it feels like it was written by another person. Especially the change of the protagonist is incomprehensible. After connecting to the eighth form, it feels like being taken away. Killing without blinking, killing everyone if you can. I also went to that place of pain, but why didn't I do anything? I just went in, and then came out again with some purple chains. Master Dog and the people from the academy are gone again. The cause and effect were not explained, and the missing people did not know what they were doing. How should I put it? In the past, the protagonist was a human being, with emotions, anger, sorrow, and joy. By the time we finished practicing on the eighth day, the protagonist seemed to be a machine.
The mage in the late Qing Dynasty is like this. Let's write about this type in the next book