Seventy-Two Transformations, Starting as a Sparrow

The daughter of a third-level official was taken as a concubine by a seventh-level county magistrate. What a talent.

The division of realms, entry, small success, great success, and consummation, I feel that the division of three realms is almost enough. There are too many divisions, which reminds me of the half-step peak of Dzogchen.

The writing is obviously okay in terms of plot and everything else, but it's too intellectually slow to advance the plot, relying entirely on conflict to advance the plot. The deduction is obviously well written, but why is the main plot so frustrating to watch? The female characters also fall in love with each other when they meet them, and they even take the initiative to trick others and follow them as a licking dog. I can't feel good even if I feel good, and I can't live in peace. After practicing three or four sets of the same technique, the supporting character was clearly written to have a high IQ and good skills, but when he got around the protagonist, he became jealous and resentful.

The deduction is really a failure. A tit has awakened a natural swordsman. It is simply outrageous. It is completely possible for the tit's awakened talent to be transformed into a human and become a natural swordsman. It is necessary for a bird to awaken as a swordsman.

There are constant little poisonous points. First, she is lustful. When she takes a widow, she still takes care of the child. Second, the plot is mentally retarded. The protagonist says that he cannot enter the inner city without a road guide. What is the use of the protagonist's Dao Fruit? Moreover, how long had passed since the protagonist killed someone, and there were countless people coming and going, so people found the protagonist simply by relying on their noses. Third, the protagonist is weak and has no vigilance at all. He is soft in front of the master and soft in front of the grandma. It can be said that he obeys what he says. He becomes a master when he is told and takes a wife when he is told. Goldfinger had his bones changed and was discovered by the master on the spot. The protagonist seems to have never thought about what he would do if his master covets his golden finger.

The author has never seen a woman before, and he actually found someone to take over after cheating. Help people support their families

According to Mrs. Liu's shrewd description, she probably discovered that the protagonist is not his grandson. According to her attitude of killing people and silencing him at every turn, I estimate that after the protagonist uses his grandson's body to spread his branches, she will definitely find a way to kill the protagonist. For her, not only does the incest continue, but she also avenges her grandson If the author really wrote this, it would be very interesting.

I can't stand it. The main character is a bit timid. If you have the ability, show it off. It means being cowardly. If you don't show your skills, who the hell knows you are awesome? Where do you get the resources? Even though you have a golden finger, you plan to survive until the finale.

It's okay at first, but when you get to chapter 32, you'll realize how damn poisonous it is

When you write a book, just write a book, bring yourself into it, and write about a mother, a wife, etc. Why don't you write about urban literature, fantasy, martial arts, and bring yourself into it to disgust everyone?