Seventy-Two Transformations, Starting as a Sparrow

The daughter of a third-rank official was taken as a concubine by a seventh-rank county magistrate. What a talented person!

The realms are divided into three levels: entry level, minor achievement level, major achievement level, and perfection level. I feel that three levels would be sufficient. Too many divisions remind me of the half-step peak perfection level.

The plot itself is decent, but the way it progresses is incredibly idiotic, relying entirely on conflict to drive the story. The deduction is well-written, so why is the main storyline so frustrating? The female characters are constantly falling for every guy they meet, even willingly lowering their intelligence to fawn over them. It's neither satisfying nor enjoyable.

The deduction was a complete failure. A titmouse awakening a natural swordsmanship is utterly absurd. It's entirely possible for the titmouse's awakened talent to be transferred to a human and transform into a natural swordsman. Forcing a bird to awaken a swordsmanship is ridiculous.

There are several minor flaws. First, he's a womanizer, marrying a widow, especially one with a child. Second, the plot is ridiculous. The protagonist claims he can't enter the inner city without a travel permit, so what's the point of his Dao Fruit? And how much time has passed since he killed someone, plus countless people passing by, yet the person still finds him by sheer luck.

The author must have never seen a woman before; he's got some kind of cheat code and still manages to find someone to take him on. He's raising him for someone else.

Judging from Old Mrs. Liu's shrewd description, she probably already discovered that the protagonist wasn't her grandson. Given her tendency to kill to silence witnesses, I suspect that once the protagonist used her grandson's body to have children, she would definitely find a way to kill him. For her, this would not only ensure the continuation of the family line but also avenge her grandson. If the author really wrote it that way, that would be very interesting.

I can't stand watching this anymore. The protagonist is such a coward! If he's so capable, he should just show it! What's with all this cowering? If you don't show your skills, who the hell will know you're awesome? Where the hell are you going to get resources? Even though you have some kind of cheat ability, are you planning to just coast until the finale?

It's okay at first, but once you get to chapter 32, you'll realize it's seriously toxic.

If you're going to write a book, then write a book. Don't immerse yourself in the story. If you're going to write about a mother, wife, or other toxic burdens, you might as well write urban fiction. Why bother with fantasy or martial arts novels? Put yourself in the story and disgust the readers.