Xiao Feng Travels Through Zhang Wuji

There is no such thing as a certain person who traveled through time and became a certain person. That's right, not a single one.

I'm just talking about my personal feelings, and I only represent myself. The character design of Xiao Feng is not very tenable. It can be seen that the author is not the type of person Xiao Feng in the original novel is in reality, and there are no people around him with a similar temperament to the original Xiao Feng. Knowing that he couldn't control it, he "took a trick" to merge part of Zhang Wuji's personality into one, but there was always a great sense of separation. Example: In Xiao Feng's original work, he never calls anyone "senior", and always calls himself "Qiao" or "Xiao"; he mostly calls others by "professional titles" or common titles, such as "Mr. Murong", "Prince x", "Elder x", "Master Feng", "Miracle Doctor Even if he sweeps the floor, he is just called "the holy monk" and never loses his identity. In this book, before the six factions besieged Guangmingding, Xiao Feng did not have many memories of Zhang Wuji. With the main character being Xiao Feng, he would not be a so-called "old man" due to emotions and reasons. The older people would just say "senior" - not to mention the title of Xiao Feng's "previous life" in the original work, he is about 200 years older than Zhang Laodao. If you are just a bastard, just say "senior", there is no trace of Xiao Feng. There are many similar points of separation. For example, the author likes to have Xiao Feng perform certain actions "respectfully", etc. There are also advantages. For example, the fighting scenes are very old-school martial arts, detailed but not messy, which is what the author is good at. Personally I think the plot design is average, especially in the later stages of Zhu and Wu and at the end. My personal feeling is that it's the kind of book that "can be read and played even when there are really no good books to read."

Although this outfit is not as classic as the black and white striped outfit, this outfit has the feeling of being an outsider.

With Xiao Feng's personality, it is unimaginable for you to have a harem. The character is shattered to pieces.

The content written about Tianlongbabu is not good. The Condor Trilogy spans nearly two hundred years, and The Legend of Heaven and Dragon Slaying alone lasts for a hundred years. If we don't explore the numerous subplots and characters, what's the point of spending energy on the content of Tian Long Ba Bu? That Lingjiu City is unnecessary and has no impact on the main plot? Doesn't it have any necessary connection with the world of Yi Tian Sword and Dragon Sword? Is the additional wooden grid really necessary? Can you write this character to the same level as the four girls in the original book? There are already too many female characters in Yitian. Is adding one superfluous? I don't doubt your writing skills, nor your ability to handle the plot. Can you be more cautious in choosing your route?

Brother, I remember that there was a flaw before the completion of the Nine Suns Sutra, which is that you cannot light up the blue bars, otherwise you will be discouraged and die. For example, Zhang Sanfeng's master, Monk Jueyuan , and Zhang Wuji used the Budai monk's Qiankun Qi bag to hold his luck in Dacheng. Brother, why don't you change it a little bit?

Whatever rubbish you write, return it to Xiao Feng. There is no distinction between good and evil. If others want to harm you, you in turn help the enemy complete the skills, with the intention of turning the enemy into a friend. What kind of crazy plot is this? If the enemy is so bad despite his poor martial arts, and you try to help him improve his skills, wouldn't it be lawless?

If you're faster, it doesn't matter if you write more. It doesn't matter if you send me an original one. The worst is possible. You write so little about the relationship between the male partner and the original one with a named and surnamed Bull Demon. I really don't understand it. Yang Buhui, a twenty-year-old girl, doesn't like the male protagonist of the big succubus. Instead, she falls in love with a crippled old man👴🏻. She likes dads, so why doesn't he want to take a shower? It's awesome. I watched it all afternoon and I was so happy. Give me a mouthful of this and I'm really convinced.

It feels like I have a God's perspective. Anyone who knows about Guo Jing and Huang Rong's deeds other than guarding Xiangyang City is already relatively knowledgeable. I dare say that except Zhang Sanfeng, others may not know about it.

The more I read, the more strange I feel. It feels like Zhang Wuji and Xiao Feng are competing for the vest. It might be better if the protagonist doesn't bear Xiao Feng's name.

"Two Shus in the Snow Ridge" started out very well but turned out to be useless. It's inexplicable. If you don't accept this, why don't you accept your description? If I want to read Gentleman, I can't read the original work?

Aura recovery version? Why are there so many original geniuses, even though they are young, they all look better than Song Qingshu and Zhou Zhiruo who appeared in the original work?

The author is really being cruel. He claims to be Zhang Wuji's sworn brother. You are calling yourself Xiao Feng in front of Zhang Wuji. You are not the right person. Can't Xiao Lai have an inner monologue: I am Xiao Feng, and I am also Zhang Wuji? That is, I was Xiao Feng in my previous life, and I am Zhang Wuji in this life. Directly write that Zhang Wuji was about to die and then dreamed about Xiao Feng's life. When he woke up, he felt like Zhuang Zhou Mengdie. Because Xiao Feng has more experience, he acts more like Xiao, but his feelings with other characters in Yitian are also real. Everyone knows that I am Zhang Wuji's sworn brother, but I am flirting with Zhu Er and Zhou Qing. This seems to be a poisonous point for readers. If you say it is Xiao, then these two are in love with each other. The right thing to do is to change the title. For these two women, the male lead should always be called brother Wuji, otherwise it would be spiritual cheating. Moreover, the author has been insisting that Xiao is not Zhang. According to your statement, it is impossible to like other women after all the promises are made. The character design is purely fragmented, and it is always emphasized that he is Xiao and not Zhang. When he is seen with Simei, it is very greasy. The only way to change it to my proposal is that the last life was already the last life. I will live as Zhang De again in this life, but Xiao's habits have been formed in the previous life. Princess Xiaozhao can call him Brother Xiao, because at that time he called himself Xiao Feng. But the other two should call him Zhang Wuji. Either completely calling himself Xiao and then completely breaking away from the original person, or admitting that he is Zhang, but he was Xiao in his previous life, so he behaves like Xiao. He is both Xiao and Zhang. Even if I explain it to others, I can still say that when I was about to die, I had a dream about my past life, and my temperament changed drastically. It is better than writing like this, writing like Xiao Zhang is really a good brother, and I will support your wife. The diaphragm responds to people. Can't you write a leader Zhang who has Xiao's temperament? Even if you think of Xiao's past, you can use it as this is the past life, it has passed. According to what you wrote, A'Zhu is dead, you, King Xiao, still have thoughts about picking up girls? This is where the whole book is highly toxic.

After two lines of pure tears, I finally became an orthodox and good citizen. I am an orthodox Dayuan person. If you dare to rebel, first kill the evil Ming Cult. An angry shout outside Yanmen Pass shocked the crowd. Before anyone arrived, the sound came first. He killed the White-browed Eagle King with one palm, killed Xie Xun with two palms, killed the Persian saint Xiao Zhao through initiation, and then chased her to the light. Ming Ding broke into the battle alone and fought with more than a hundred Mingjiao people. He captured all the senior officials of the Mingjiao and took them to Wan'an Temple the next day to sacrifice them all to Zhao Min. He was evaluated by the young prince as "a great chivalrous man who serves the country and the people" and then went to Xiangyang to fight against rebels from all over the country. Finally, he was awarded the title of Eight Dragon Vajra Venerables. He devoted his whole life to the country openly and died.

Xiao Feng actually listens to Buddhism in his later period, which is not suitable for time travel, because he has nothing to want after time travel. On the contrary, it is interesting for the young Yang Guo (who has just recited the Quanzhen Dao Song version or entered the ancient tomb and still doesn't like the Little Dragon Girl version) to travel through Zhang Wuji

After reading more than forty chapters, I don't really want to read it anymore. There are two main problems. The first is that the main plot advances too slowly. The first thirty or so chapters have been wandering around Zhuwu Lianzhuang, and more than forty chapters have been connected to the original plot of Lingjiu Palace, writing here and there. The second is that some of the content is too fragmented and too detailed. A lot of ink is assigned to any character, such as the uncle who practices Seven Injury Fist. Too much ink about an unimportant character will affect the portrayal of the main character.

I can't stand it anymore. My martial arts skills are already at Zhang Sanfeng's level, and I'm still hanging out with those inferior sects.

He doesn't reject anyone who comes, and he has a harem? Too many heroines?

You write a lot of ink and wear very little when you serve Xiao Feng. If you can serve Xiao Feng once, why not serve him for a lifetime? Will they stop getting married in the future? Isn't that green?

Because this book was written by chance, some of the plots and designs in the front are either rough or unclear. Now that I have written more than 100,000 words, I have a more comprehensive and in-depth thinking about the story, and I have also received feedback from many enthusiastic readers. So I will make some: 1.The comparison with the original work is not rigorous 2. The story and character processing are not reasonable 3. The parts that I want to express that are different from the readers' understanding will be fine-tuned, added or deleted without changing the overall direction of my story. To make the story smoother and more comfortable to read, all adjustments will be summarized here, including those that have been adjusted and those that will be adjusted in the future.

The novel was well written, with enough martial arts flavor, but I abandoned it after reading chapter 69. It was okay that I didn't have Zhang Wuji's memory before, but I did have it later, but I still deliberately emphasized that I was Xiao Feng, and there were people who recognized Zhang Wuji's face, so it was like a separation.

Is this written about Xiao Feng? No matter how you look at it, he is still Zhang Wuji, the Zhang Wuji who says he is Xiao Feng

Isn't it more appropriate to write about Guo Jing than Xiao Feng? Guo Jing's whole family is fighting against Mongolia and is preparing to confront Mongolia.

It's so well written, I'll follow it. Come on, more updates.

I have finally become an orthodox and good citizen. I am a member of the Yuan Dynasty. How dare you rebel? First, kill the evil Ming Cult. Outside Yanmen Pass, I killed the White-browed Eagle King with one palm. I slapped Xie Xun with two palms. I also initiated the initiation and killed the Persian chief saint Xiao Zhao. Later, I was designed by Chen Youliang to beat Song Qingshu to death. Zhou Zhiruo, Master Miejie, was captured by the Demonic Circle of Vajra Buddha in Xingzi Forest. After five years of hard practice in Buddhism, he found the organization Minmin Temuir. Later, he was assigned to the general soldier of Xiangyang City. He fought against the rebels all his life and was named the Eight-Part Heavenly Dragon Vajra Master, leaving endless legends for future generations.

This book seems to only focus on defeating Meng Yuan, and Zhu Yuanzhang is the real protagonist later on, which is boring.

I don't understand why I keep wasting time in Zhuliu Villa

If Xiao Feng gives the throne to Zhu so easily, it will be the same as Zhang Wuji in the original novel, and there will be no good results.

Updates are a bit slow. Author😁

Can I have more?