Spider of the Dawn

The ugly and rich old spider turned out to be a time traveler. In the early days, the God of Nature loved to travel through time.

If you don't come up with the new book, I'll update ten of them and act like a cute new spider here.

The thrill of farming novels is that they come from scratch, develop insignificantly, and become bigger and stronger. However, due to the setting of the Spider novel, the part of farming and cultivating God's gifts is optional or not, which directly loses half of the pleasure. Of course, half of the fun lies in doing business later. It depends on how the author grasps it. This is also the starting point of this novel. Let me share my thoughts, which may be a bit biased.                                                                   Jin's future identity is directly revealed at the beginning, causing half of the sense of anticipation to be lost. Even though the result is already known, the process doesn't seem to be very important. Because Jin is the reincarnation of a human being, and his character is very "profiteer" from the beginning, the impression is strange. It would be better to write about Jin slowly awakening the memories of some people as they grew up. Due to fate issues, they had to go into business, and the difficulty of doing business led to their characters gradually becoming "profiteers". 2. Jin's tribe is relatively wealthy. He can eat Force food or even God-given food at will, and obtain and use raw stones at will. As a result, the motivation for farming is not very strong, and it feels like Jin can just lie flat. This stage of being able to lie down normally only appears in the middle and late stages of the development of farming literature, and this stage is also the beginning of abandoning writing. 3. Phytolacca appeared too early, so that if Jin received any divine gift later, it would not be a big surprise. It's like you got a good job and celebrated by drawing a lottery ticket and winning 100 million directly. What else do you expect from the money you earn from work? 4. God-given and high-quality products are too easy to obtain. It feels like they are everywhere, like cabbage. 4. If the silver design is not good, I might as well change it to gold. The scene where Jin goes to meet Yin for the first time gives the impression that Yin is not very reliable. Later, Jin became a "brother-supporting demon", and even a gift from God was given to him. If he could support his relatives in reality, there would be no problem. However, the author did not reflect the deep feelings of brothers between Yin and Jin in the novel. For example, Yin helped Jin before Jin became prosperous. As a result, Yin may be better than a passer-by in the eyes of readers. God's gift directly to silver, which is of little help to gold, will certainly cause dissatisfaction among readers. 5. To be honest, at the beginning of the novel, I thought my mother would accompany Jin to make up for the regrets in Banbu's novel. The mother is okay with Jin, and the love between mother and child must be deeper than the love between brothers. At the same time, readers recognize that the things that belong to the mother belong to the child, but this is not necessarily the case for brothers. If God gives it to my mother, I can accept it anyway. Just like now, many people call on God to give silver to elders who are helpful to gold. 6. The setting that Gold only has one Life Seed can actually be slightly modified so that only one Life Seed can be added after breaking through the major stage. In this way, Gold can choose the best God-given Life Seeds to keep for himself. Generally, the God-given investment will be given to insects or descendants who are helpful to him as the basis for future trade. As for the setting that the Wandering Spider only has one Life Seed, can the evolution be completed in one step? It can completely go from one Life Seed for each small stage, to one Life Seed for each major stage of Gold, and then to the God of Nature who wants Gold's descendants to play around and do business. Therefore, Gold's mutation is not complete. After the offspring is fully mutated, they will only have one Life Seed in their lifetime. This can also reflect the special nature of Gold. The problem with current novels is that the beginning is not difficult and the ending is revealed early, resulting in little sense of expectation in the subsequent process. Second, Jin's character is a bit weird, and Yin's setting is a bit confusing. I hope the transition to business will be easier.

It's been a few minutes since there has been an update. Even the donkeys in the production team don't dare to do this...

The one who came after the Astral Cockroaches the most was that I could still read the Astral Ant Tribe when they first came out of the planet, but then I gave up. I no longer wanted to read this book on various financial operations. The author needs to know that your basic base is on farming small nature, and then adjust and expand based on this tone. Now it is a bit putting the cart before the horse. From a personal perspective, if you think it is right, just listen, and if it is wrong, just complain.

I still feel the joy of farming, and the joy of harvest makes me addicted. The plot of traveling as a businessman makes me unhappy.

As a reader who has been following you since Astral Cockroach, although I have never read this book to the point where I should cut the book, you actually gave up. Let me share some of my own opinions about this book First of all, this book has a big problem, that is, the characters do not stand up I don't know what other readers think, but Astral Cockroach This sense of a big family, the feeling of mutual support between Long Bai and Mo Lan of the star ant tribe, was too little reflected in the early stage of this book Originally, I was looking forward to the care for the descendants of the group after the flame spider group grew. This is also an important point that makes me think that you will not give up on your book, because many book friends just want to see how the flame spiders evolve into what they will be in the future As for the proto-spider tribe at this stage, my evaluation is that it is strange the proto-spider tribe is too smart, and such a shrewd Zerg race is too focused on interests when communicating. This makes me feel that the protagonist, his younger brother, and elders all have the same feeling of superiors and subordinates, and there is no such sincerity between insects. This book just At the beginning, my expectation for this book was that the wandering spider would travel to various areas, visit various Zerg races, open trade routes, and encounter dangers, but slowly gain fame So at the beginning of the book, the protagonist was too weak to move around. Although it was different from the imagination, the protagonist was not at the Mountain Lord level, so it was really difficult to move around But as time went by, the main character I started to feel that something was wrong. Both Bambu and Longbai were really poor. This also shows how valuable it is to help them regardless of profit when they are at their lowest point. It also highlights how good they are when they become rich and can lead everyone to get rich together (at least there is a Western Snake in this book. This elder is compared to the one who appears later. For a bug digging ruins, he still has his own personality) But Jin is too smart. He does everything by himself. He treats his younger brother Yin like a subordinate, and does not even have the special sense of interaction like the Bai Wei brothers and sisters. Similar problems I think the biggest problem and contradiction in this book is here, because the character is not established, so that the daily life that you are supposed to be good at with delicate emotions is completely reduced to a running account of accounting This is not a question of whether to farm or not, or to never engage in business, because the relevant chapters of Bai Wei from the ant tribe can also show that you are not writing about business. As for being unreadable That's all I want to say, wait for your next book. I don't know if you will respond to readers, and I don't have any expectations. If you cut two books in a row, and they are still halfway through the series, and they are not completely finished, then I believe you will lose all the fans you have accumulated in the Star World series. I hope you will finish it well when the next book comes out, that's it.

Now I am not only worried that the author will stop writing, but I am also worried that the next book will have a human protagonist It is officially finished. The two books with good reputation are both astral Zerg. It is okay to reprint the cockroach and rest on the laurels. Just don't make it too big. Aren't cockroaches and ants not too big? Many Star World fans like to make big tricks. Ant Cockroach is so comfortable to look at. The Flame Spider Gold couldn't help but collapse when it was a little too big. But in the final analysis, some of them are good to read. There are more Star Bound fanfics than the original. There are currently five of them being updated. When will you come back? Author, I really like the world view of the Star Bound Zerg, and I can't find a replacement 😒

As expected, this book was written to death. The most interesting one is the Cockroach one, the Ant Clan one can still be read before ascending, and the Universe one is the only one left with the author Zi He. This book felt wrong from the beginning, and the author couldn't handle business writing.

The author must have felt awkward. The flow of God-given plants for planting insects developed by the author is mainly about farming, and the sense of surprise of discovering God-given seeds. This book turns farming into business, which is completely different and has no sense of attraction.