Cultivating Immortality for Longevity, Starting with Talisman Drawing

This is a good Mortal + Immortality style work. The author's writing style is relatively sophisticated. There is no poisonous point in the overall view. The protagonist "Gou" is in place, and he is also quite happy when he should be happy. In my opinion, it can be used as an eternal replacement work.

I think what the author writes is actually pretty good. Although some places are a little bit toxic, most of them are acceptable. Moreover, the author has a very good attitude. If readers point out typos, the author will correct them. He often discusses with readers in the comment area. Come on, author, I think you can write better.

Keep it up, it will be a masterpiece 😡

Monthly Pass

1. Prehistoric myth level (unbounded ability, Tao transforms all things) Core features This is the source form of the immortal cultivation system. The power comes entirely from the ultimate conformity to the "Tao". There is no clear cultivation path and realm division. The ability is manifested as the direct control of the original rules of the universe, which is in line with the imaginative core of "immortals are omnipotent" in traditional mythology. Specific abilities 1. Creation and good fortune: Top beings can create the world (Pangu splits the chaotic world, and his body turns into mountains, rivers, sun and moon after death), creates humans out of clay (Nuwa shapes humans from clay and gives life), and even evolves new laws of the universe (Yuanshi Tianzun controls the creation and dominance of the universe in the Hunyuan period). 2. Control of rules and cause and effect: It can determine the order of heaven and earth, such as Fuxi created the Eight Diagrams to deduce the laws of all things, Hou Tu controls the birth of yin and yang and the control of disasters; it can directly intervene in the cause and effect of life and death, Si Ming Xingjun can determine the length of human life and the direction of destiny, and Due Xingjun can resolve various disasters in the world. 3. Reshaping of the global environment: Easily move mountains and reclaim seas, call for wind and rain, control the movement of stars (Arctic Emperor Ziwei controls the sun, moon, stars, thunder, lightning, ghosts and gods), adjust the changes in the four seasons (the five elders correspond to the five elements, control the vitality and climate of the four seasons respectively), and even create an independent time and space where "one day in the mountains, thousands of years have passed in the world". Ability Limitations There are almost no hard restrictions, only restricted by the vague concept of "balance of heaven". For example, the foundation of the universe must not be excessively damaged, but its behavior itself is part of the will of heaven, and the constraints are more towards self-awakening than external coercion. Autonomy Ultimate freedom, the ability to display depends entirely on the will, without relying on skills, resources or magical weapons. The magical power comes from the integration of oneself and "Tao", and can be derived from unlimited uses according to needs, with no fixed paradigm. 2. Medieval Divine Court Level (the first appearance of levels, binding of powers and responsibilities) Core Features A clear divine hierarchy system and division of powers and responsibilities are formed. Power is still centered on "enlightenment", but hierarchical differences begin to appear. Abilities are deeply bound to divine positions and responsibilities, and the miraculous attribute of "omnipotence" is still maintained for mortals. Specific abilities 1. Continuation of core magical powers: retaining basic omnipotent abilities such as creation, flight, and time control. For example, the Antarctic Immortal Emperor can directly grant blessings, extend life, and cure diseases. Ordinary immortals can also easily achieve rejuvenation and change things out of thin air. 2. Differentiation of fields and combat power: The power level is divided according to the divine order (such as Three Pure Ones > Four Imperial Guards > Five Elders > Six Divisions). High-level ones can open up exclusive areas of laws (Lingbao Tianzun uses Lingbao Ruyi to reconcile yin and yang and cultivate all things). Low-level gods cannot resist the suppression of laws by high-level gods, and their abilities are mostly corresponding to their responsibilities (the Emperor of the Upper Palace dominates human warfare and maintains the order of the three realms). 3. Education and inheritance: Master the core cultivation resources and inheritance keys. For example, Taishang Laojun is good at refining elixirs and refining weapons. His elixirs can directly improve cultivation and prolong life. You can directly confer immortality to others by giving elixirs or magic weapons. Ability Restrictions 1. The barriers to the gods are tight. The upper limit of the abilities of low-level gods is restricted by the god's position, and they cannot interfere with the core rights and responsibilities of high-level gods (for example, the Sixth Star Lord cannot control the movement of stars and needs to obey the dispatch of the Four Emperors). 2. Major intervention actions must abide by the rules of heaven. For example, when changing the fate of a dynasty or rewriting the fate of mortals on a large scale, they must go through collective discussions or follow the instructions of heaven, and cannot do it arbitrarily. Autonomy Higher, gods of the same level can freely develop and use their abilities. For example, the five elders, who are also in charge of the five elements, can focus on promoting vitality or killing and warding off evil according to their own direction of enlightenment; and they can practice a variety of Taoist skills without clear attributes or career restrictions. 3. Classical Xianxia level (the foundation of spiritual roots, the prototype of realm) Core features The cultivation system has moved from vagueness to concreteness, and "spiritual roots" have been introduced as the entry threshold for immortality. The division of realms has initially taken shape, but no strict ability lock has been formed. Spiritual roots affect the speed of cultivation more than restrict the type of abilities, leaving a certain space for independent exploration. Specific abilities 1. Realm-binding basic magical powers: With the core line of "refining Qi - refining Qi to transform God - refining God to return to the void", during the Qi training period, you can absorb spiritual energy to temper your body and release basic spiritual energy impact; during the foundation building period, you can condense spiritual energy shields and control low-level magic weapons; during the golden elixir stage, you can achieve air-control flying and initially control the laws of single elements (such as fire and water). 2. Diversified skills: There are no attribute barriers to skills such as alchemy, talisman painting, and weapon refining. Even monks with five spiritual roots can learn alchemy and create exclusive effects by improving elixir recipes and optimizing talismans and seals. Although branches such as sword cultivation and physical cultivation have appeared, they are not completely separated from the main system, and can be practiced across branches. 3. Life and auxiliary functions: Reiki can be widely used in life scenes, such as cleaning, storage, and sound transmission through magic, and even using reiki to nourish plants and treat injuries and illnesses. It is not limited to combat purposes. Ability Limitations 1. Ability strength is strongly related to the realm. Low realms cannot display high-level magical powers (for example, if the golden elixir cannot be condensed during the Qi training period, it is naturally impossible to use the golden elixir level spells). 2. Due to resource and environmental constraints, for example, rare medicinal materials are needed to make alchemy, special spiritual paper is needed to draw talismans, and areas with thin spiritual energy will greatly slow down the progress of cultivation, but there are no ability restricted areas caused by attribute binding. Autonomy Medium, spiritual root qualifications (such as Heavenly Spiritual Root, Pseudo Spiritual Root) only affect the efficiency of spiritual energy absorption. Monks can independently choose the direction of spells and skill specialization. For example, monks with golden spiritual roots can practice offensive sword moves and defensive techniques, so there is a lot of room for innovation. 4. Modern gamification level (attribute locking, module solidification) Core features The system is completely digital and modular, spiritual root attributes are directly locked to the scope of abilities, realms and skills are strictly bound, professional division of labor is clear and cannot be crossed, power is reduced to "upgrade fuel", autonomy is greatly lost, and it is close to the "skill tree" growth model of game characters. Specific abilities 1. Spiritual root attribute binding spells: Single spiritual root monks can only practice 1-2 types of spells with corresponding attributes (Fire Spiritual Root specializes in fireball and flame slashing), and cross-attribute spells cannot be learned at all; high-level spells need to reach a specific level to unlock (such as level 20 of foundation building to master the big fireball), and their effects are fixed and there is no possibility of derivatives. 2. Separation of occupations and skills: Alchemists, array masters and other occupations are completely separated from the combat system. Alchemists can only use fixed formulas of the current level. After promotion, they need to replace them with new formulas and cannot improve independently; combat monks cannot also practice skills at the same time, and resources must be obtained through transactions. 3. Narrowing of ability uses: The core uses of aura are only realm breakthroughs and combat. Traditional abilities such as creation and time manipulation have almost disappeared. Life needs must be solved by storage bags, market purchases, etc., And the practicality of spells has been greatly weakened. Ability Limitations 1. Triple locking mechanism: spiritual root attribute determines ability type, realm level determines ability intensity, and professional division of labor determines ability usage, leaving no room for breakthrough. 2. Double bind of resources and rules: Not only is it limited by resources such as rare materials, skill secrets, etc., But it also needs to abide by the fixed rules within the system (such as the efficiency of elixir refining is fixed, and the formation steps cannot be changed). Autonomy Extremely low. The growth path of a monk is completely set and solidified. For example, the five spiritual roots are judged to be "wasted spiritual roots". Due to the slow cultivation speed and the inability to specialize in high-level spells, there is almost no possibility of counterattack; the usage of abilities is also standardized, and there is no room for independent innovation.

Quwen, logically, with such a plug-in, the combat power should be incredible, and the combat plot seems to be missing. It feels like playing a game of cultivating immortal literature. Today I have upgraded to one level, and tomorrow I will find materials to upgrade to the next level. In summary, the plot is boring. The author wrote this plug-in, but he didn't even know how to use it.

Update is too slow🙂

I took advantage of the starting point activities and booked them all. I just finished it today. Overall, it is very good. Except for the early stage, which was a little dull, I felt that the progress of the practice was a bit too slow. I will get used to it later. The overall pacing is very good, and the setting of the world view is also very good. There are no major logical flaws. Friends in the book world can read it and recommend it.

The author's left and right brains are fighting each other, and he has never been able to figure out the number of words. One moment he says that his life is valuable and he would rather spend spiritual stones to buy things. The next moment he buys array disks to go out to hunt level 2 monsters (foundation building). It's really difficult. If you have money and spend three thousand spiritual stones to buy array disks and go out to hunt for keys, you won't use this to buy materials? It's really too witty, and the previous ones about prices, and there are a lot of details that I'm too lazy to dig out, but now I just can't help it, it's really too watery, I haven't seen it on the shelves and it's already like this. After it's on the shelf, I estimate that a small realm will be worth dozens of chapters, and with low-grade spiritual roots, the promotion will definitely fail, and it will be watery when the time comes. I have already seen the future of this novel, so I won't read it.

Okay, okay, I'll give you a two-month pass

Generally speaking, people who borrow from other people's novels will be criticized, but if they borrow from timeless works, readers will not only applaud them but also criticize the original author.

Good writing, but slow. By the way, there is a person called Fast Food Restaurant who plagiarized you by writing "I am Eternal in the World of Immortal Cultivation". I have reported it to you.

Multiple heroine harem stories to protect you from lightning

Author, is there a female protagonist? It would be boring to be an impotent slave all the time.

It seems that the protagonist Yuanying has quite a few wives, including Yuan Yao's wife, Swordsman's wife, Nishang's wife, Bingdie's wife, and probably the First Palace Master's wife, the Second Palace Master's wife…

You can't read the reviews when reading this book. As long as it's about the heroine and the supporting characters, the comments will explode. They all jump out one by one. I don't know why I'm so excited. I think these women are helpful to the protagonist, right? . . . . . . . . Shouldn't there be female characters in Qidian Xiuxian's novels now? If there is a clear description, and the female character has a lot of plot weight, and the female character is confiscated in the end, it will be really poisonous.

A little uncomfortable. A great monk in the late stage of Qi refining. Great foundation building power! I'll go. How can you make other great monks in the late Yuan Ying stage feel uncomfortable? How could a powerful being like a god be embarrassed?

Cultivate immortality and return to the harem, becoming invincible. . . It's not that there can't be more female protagonists;

Ever since Xuanjian leaked out of the immortal cultivation system. I really can't stand this traditional system of cultivating immortals. I can't explain the reason. I just feel that the system of cultivating immortals is so weak.

Where is Shennong? He came here by introducing poison every day.

There are more than 200 chapters, and Yunyao is the only female protagonist at the moment. I personally think this book is very good overall, but I hope the author doesn't overestimate the number of words.

Let's talk about Shen Nong. What's the content of the story?

Judging from the current environment of online literature, there are too many low-qualified mortals in the immortal cultivation world. Everyone writes a lot of plots in the two low-level stages of Qi training and foundation building. The homogeneity is serious. Then when you get to high levels, you can only change the set of maps. In fact, it is not necessary. Sometimes I always feel like a real ordinary person is struggling while watching an ordinary person in the immortal world struggling You can completely put the plot back, Qi training and intercourse The background of the generation, this 30-50 chapter foundation building (I personally think the plot of the foundation building pill is disgusting), the foundation building period should not exceed 120 chapters, After the golden pill period, you can write more, the map is expanded, as a strong person but not so strong, there is something cool about it, but it is not obvious that the weak chicken still participates in the struggle of the boss to survive The reality is already very miserable, in the novel, it is still obvious that it is cool.

Does it look good? 1. Not good-looking. 2. Ordinary. 3. Not bad. 4. It's pretty. 5. Good looking.

You bunch of casual cultivators are nothing more than low-class goods.

The author writes slowly, don't be anxious, don't jump too much in terms of overall combat power, keep your IQ online, don't be too smart, there will definitely be a chance to find a way out, there are fewer and fewer books to read, so I'll give you the vote, if conditions permit, I can add more words.

The male protagonist is so good!

This book is one of the rare masterpieces among fairy tales, as wonderful as Tianhai Xiantu and Haoyu Zhenxian. Although it borrows from some mortals, Long Bottled New Wine has its own style and characteristics. The realm, combat power, and characters throughout the book are all very firmly controlled. But I feel that the author controls the protagonist too tightly. His skills are basically on the same level. His skills, magic weapons, and magical powers are either inherently deficient or promising in the future. The protagonist's combat power can only be considered first-class in the same level, but not the top. The author intentionally uses this method to affect the protagonist's resource acquisition speed, which feels a bit less satisfying.

The reason may be sneaking into the spiritual world. I think mortals have a fixed mindset. Those who achieve spiritual transformation in the lower realm and then ascend are the most prodigious among the geniuses. Those who sneak into the spirit world without even transforming into gods are little losers. Because it is not the same difficulty for both of them to prove the transformation of gods. I watched one mortal series after another, and they repeatedly emphasized the difference between ascended monks and local monks in the spiritual world to strengthen my idea.

The talismans of a Qi training period are divided into so many details. The lower grade of the first level corresponds to the early stage of Qi training, the middle grade corresponds to the middle stage, and the upper grade corresponds to the later stage. The lower, middle and upper talismans are divided into ordinary, high-quality, and top-grade. Is it interesting that they are all matryoshka dolls? How about not using ordinary talismans and continuing to use matryoshka dolls divided into Class A, Class B and Class C?