The Legend of the Condor Heroes: Exiled from Peach Blossom Island

When I read the fanfic, I only watch the original heroine, not the original heroine. It's boring. Goodbye.

1. The pace of the first few dozen chapters is slow, the cheat is not obvious, and the three names are changed. It is acceptable even if it is carefully written, but the serious martial arts style is suddenly inserted into modern features. The various spoof notes and nonsensical names of the skills of Golden Finger are deliberately designed to make people jump from the scene, such as Bear Infestation, Eel Kung Fu, etc. The quality has seriously declined since returning home. 2. On the way home, a strange plot of three encounters with the female costar suddenly appeared. It was smelly and long and incomprehensible. 3. The protagonist goes home to practice kungfu and simply writes it as a fusion of kung fu techniques. In a few months, he becomes a master in three years. The heroine is directly written as a big fat man, and the protagonist is written as a giant who is more than 1.9 Meters tall. 4. There is a problem with the positioning of the protagonist of this book. The protagonist, Golden Finger, who uses Taoist skills to eradicate injustice, is dragging down his family and assassinating high-ranking officials. His methods are sinister and his personality is impulsive. It is obviously different from the witty begging at the beginning of the novel. It can be said that they are two people who can bend and stretch. They are deliberately trying to outwit and the plot is blunt. 5. The journey of chivalry and righteousness has not yet begun, but he is suddenly involved in a court battle. The peace talks between Song and Jin Dynasties used poisons, aphrodisiacs and other methods, but they talked about getting rid of traitorous ministers. Wasn't it the emperor who negotiated the peace? Why not destroy it? One moment he writes like a villain who is afraid of his own death and will bring harm to his family, and the other moment he writes like a dead soldier who is impulsive and schizophrenic. There are many other details that are deliberately arranged for the sake of the plot. It makes people understand the drama at once. It is a bloody mess. I just gave up on the assassination of the person who took the elixir and jumped into the river. The martial arts did not go into detail. The martial arts did not say any big events, and the Xia did not do much. It was all about laying the foundation for the family. It seems that they want to dominate the world. You are not prepared to conquer the world, but instead engage in assassinations. It is so confusing and poisonous!

The protagonist doesn't tell the descendants of the Yue Family Army where Wu Mu's suicide note is because he is afraid that the descendants of the Yue Family Army will go to Qiu Qianren to die... Descendants of the Yue Family Army: Are we so like idiots? I couldn't stand it anymore after seeing this, so I came out to take a breath and read the comments... I didn't expect that there would be a spy war later... Stop the loss in time The most annoying thing is that the protagonist trains hard and then arranges a sister with amazing talent. It makes people feel that the entire combat system has collapsed. Just finding a beggar sister is worse than the protagonist cheating. How ridiculous are the characters in the whole book?

I have been reading books for more than ten years and this is my first time posting. It was really frustrating to write. The protagonist of martial arts does not reflect the joyful grudges at all. So there is no point in learning such good martial arts. Let's not talk about whether you can become a decent knight in terms of your behavior. Even when practicing martial arts, you must pay attention to one thought. The superior cannot serve the country and the people, and the inferior cannot punish evil and promote good. Now that you have practiced Gou Ba, your book friend's evaluation is absolutely correct. It is indeed the bloodline of Murong Fu. He is both decent and established. He is indeed a descendant of Xianbei and has no Han style at all.

A surprising start. The predecessor can still control the protagonist. Will the protagonist need to control the predecessor to help push the protagonist into the bridal chamber in the future🤣

Why are there so many masters of mechanical deity for the Zhao Song royal family? There are even five-level ones... Then it's still a fart fight. Can't Zhao Song just implement the beheading strategy? After all, in the original work, it was written that the Kingdom of Jin recruited martial arts masters, and the results were average. You write fan fiction and create so many original characters. It causes the plot to break up.

Does the author think that the Kingdom of Jin was founded by the Koreans? I'm so confused about the dog-blooded bibimbap😱

Obviously I can just write ordinary martial arts novels, but I have to write fan fiction. As a fan fiction, I want to write my own story. The most important thing about fan fiction is that it is fun, fun, fun.

I have read Chapter 50, and it is extremely poisonous. There are all kinds of stinky plots, it is difficult to protect yourself, and you are still a virgin bitch.

It has the shortcomings of a literary and youthful abuse of the main text. The author is advised to pay attention. Life is depressing enough now. They all read cool articles to relax. It is also suggested that the author jump directly to four or five years later. Teenagers have a stronger sense of empathy than children. Always a child. The sense of immersion is too bad. And after adolescence, you can look for opportunities or meet confidants. The main character's family is pretty good. The tribesmen are also very kind to the protagonist. You can find a few good internal and external martial arts to teach your family. After all, this is the world of martial arts. Martial arts is the foundation of one's life. The one from Murong's family is pretty good. Very suitable