Marvel: Writing Eulogies on Paper

Be decisive in killing, don't care about the protagonist or not, and don't lick the protagonist group. Now Marvel books have to do the opposite. Look at the better ones now, basically they have nothing to do with the protagonist group, and they all have grievances. Except for Eunuch Mi's, basically all of his are eunuchs. In the future, the protagonist can develop into a dimensional demon, leading the underworld and heaven to come to Marvel and devour the Marvel world.

When I came up and saw a woman, I couldn't walk. It was disgusting.

You don't know Marvel, you only know a little about it. Have you never read the setting collection? MCU has comics to complete the setting. It is a derivative comic of MCU and is used to complete the setting. It is not the kind of 616 you understand, it is a derivative of the movie.

I endured two volumes with nearly 60 chapters, and I'm sorry that I can't stand it anymore. At first, I came here for Marvel, but then I read the introduction and said it was slow to gain steam, and Marvel was in its mid-to-late stage. Then I read the first three chapters and thought it was okay. I wanted to say it was slow to gain steam, so let's just treat it as folklore. Then, I found out that only the first three chapters were interesting? It doesn't matter if you write something original about the world of fandom, as long as the plot is exciting, or if you write about daily life, it's okay. I really like watching interesting daily life of fans. But has the author ever considered a question: Who reads fan fiction to see the daily life of the protagonist and a bunch of original characters? How much of the nearly sixty chapters are occupied by daily life? How much space does it take up, including various over-and-over-explained settings and inexplicable psychological activities? In addition, the portrayal of the protagonist before time travel is a bit interesting. After time travel, he is a young aborigine and a female ghost has made him unable to speak? Don't talk about how a wife suddenly appeared and was at a loss. Even if you say that he felt guilty towards the female ghost because he was forced into a ghost marriage to save his life, wouldn't it be more reasonable? Isn't it realistic that he lived as an orphan for so many years in his previous life? No matter how much love you lack, you will become so humble? I read in the comment section that they didn't react when being targeted by Braised Eggs later. Are you feeling aggrieved by all the conspiracies and schemes? I won't comment on the rest of it until I see it. As far as the current summary is concerned, the author's control of the rhythm of the plot is just like the control of the priority of each chapter. He has completely failed to grasp the key points. He clearly has good writing skills, but after writing it, it is like a running account, giving people a feeling of eating but eating. The feeling of the air, it is said that folklore does not have the atmosphere of folklore, and that Marvel does not have the refreshing feeling of Marvel. When I look at the protagonist's character every day, he shrinks like a licking dog. The whole story is also filled with all kinds of completely unnecessary explanations and repeated psychological descriptions, and other small things will not be mentioned. Although I haven't read it, I hope the author can work hard. His writing skills are good. I suggest you look at those who are not as good at writing as you but have good grades and learn about their rhythm control and character creation. You are not a slow-burner, you are just weak.

It can only be said that the bull's head is wrong and the horse's mouth is wrong. Are you really writing about Marvel? After reading it all, it seems that it has nothing to do with what is happening in Marvel, and then the power system does not match up. If it is this kind of setting, the early writing must be linked to the original plot to make it not feel blunt. It has been written for so long and is completely irrelevant. After watching it all, I feel like I can't find the main mission. What is the final goal? I interacted with my family and chatted with NPCs in Novice Village throughout the whole process. The writing is mediocre and not a novice, but you can't say it's good. Can't find a professional counterpart. Your writing method should focus more on the scope of Eastern cultivation, not the Western side. It's like you read a book about architecture and then you come to stir-fry. This method means that you know the basic principles of stir-fry, but the food you stir-fry will never be delicious. Your writing style reminds me of the books written by Wu Jiu when I was studying. Maybe you don't know him, but he wrote about the Shixiu Immortal style. My suggestions are twofold. First, write about folklore ghosts. A little Taoist is a bit more cliche. The goal of upgrading is to become a great monk. The story is a bit old-fashioned, but the method is not afraid of being old, and the most important thing is that some people will suffer. Second, write Hong Kong mystery novels. Your writing style is very consistent with this. There are few people writing about Hong Kong variety shows, but many people take advantage of this opportunity to reap a lot of dividends. Now it's saturated. But I found that there are not many articles about Hong Kong. Not to mention well-written. The simplest thing is that you can follow the plot of the movie, as long as you don't be stupid and touch the poisonous points, such as giving away the girl, writing a dead date, and everyone will die. Because there are so few articles about Hong Kong, readers can tolerate you even if your writing skills are not that good. Recommend the second one

Not to mention the three golden chapters, the "past life" and multi-perspective plots in the first seven chapters can be deleted. The past life is very unattractive. What most readers click here to see is the oriental-colored paper craftsman in the Marvel world. This is not a female channel that does not like a life experience introduction or prequel of a grudge with deep suffering and a long length. The correct answer is to go straight to the topic. In the follow-up, you can briefly introduce the past life in the article to shape the protagonist. Because of the former reason, to be honest, I read the first few chapters at a glance, but I also found that after reading for a long time, I couldn't find out who the protagonist is, what his name is, what he can do, and what he wants to do...

Although I haven't read this book yet, the 800-word introduction doesn't even mention a single word about the book's content. This is the first time I've seen it.

How can I put it this way? I felt weird reading this book. If the protagonist was in an American horror or other comprehensive horror film, it would feel right and professional! But the main character, a paper maker, actually went to Marvel. No matter how you look at it, it's weird, or maybe it's just my own taste! This book is quite good in terms of writing and content, but it's not suitable for me. I still like the protagonist to go into the world of horror movies!

Wen Qingbing at the beginning 😒

The writing style is good, but the subject matter is inappropriate. Marvel is not suitable for combining too deeply with Chinese elements. It feels a bit nondescript. People who like to watch Marvel and Chinese supernatural people will not like to watch it. Such a good writing style, please write something else as soon as possible. I sincerely recommend, maybe it will become popular.