Starting from Yin Feng Han Sha, the Ranger Slays Demons

I look forward to the protagonist having mastered martial arts and then entering the Central Plains, where he will try his level as a master from the Western Regions. Let's play a script about the big devil

The plot makes me feel similar to "Knives Out" but the world is more interesting. I hope that the subsequent plot settings will be equally novel and interesting.

The readers stopped updating it as soon as it was released, and didn't ask for leave when something happened. The readers expressed their displeasure! ! !

Goblins are heavily dependent on them? Although there are many Chinese elements, many small details are a bit inconsistent in the ancient setting. After thinking about it, there seems to be no problem in fantasy.

The advantage of this book should be the mythical style, such as the sharks and the long-armed tribe. Later on, as the plot follows the protagonist, the readers will follow the protagonist to see various strange races and unique mountain scenery. This is good. But at present, it has some Western fantasy colors, which weakens the magical style. The martial arts at the beginning, the Ranger Guild, the expertise of the people here. There are some embarrassments about martial arts. First, as long as the fists, kicks, and swordsmanship are not ordinary Wangbaquan or Xiajibashi, but have skills to kill more efficiently, they can all be called martial arts. You can ponder or learn them by yourself. There is no need to take the martial arts too high. Second, the protagonist's magical power is paired with the simple name of martial arts, which makes people feel a bit low. You can use true martial arts, true qi martial arts, secret martial arts, magical martial arts, etc., So that the first two problems can be solved. Those without true energy or with low skills are called ordinary martial arts.        ，，， I'm not sure if it's the same as the Guild, but even if it is, because of the backwardness of entertainment mentioned earlier, when the Ranger Guild came out, readers subconsciously thought of Western Fantasy, and they would have a sense of fragmentation and patchwork. If you can, take back the occupied vocabulary. As a person, you should do your part. However, the author is just a newcomer. You should grow up and become stronger before you can do it. What you have to do now is to modify the bluntness as much as possible to retain more readers. After that, I got up and slowly participated in the entertainment battle. Change the name of the Ranger Guild and look up what similar names were called in ancient times. Six Doors or something like that will definitely not work. First, the impression of martial arts is too strong and inconsistent with the style of this book. Second, this is an organization with the purpose of "heroes versus heroes", and the official color must be weakened as much as possible. It's not easy to check. Just go to Tieba or post on the forum and ask netizens to help you think about it. By the way, there are also era background colors, martial arts and the like are not suitable for use here. Similarly, "expertise" has a game-like feel and should be changed, such as the prototype of magical powers, in this direction (the ultimate in martial arts training, the prototype of magical powers). In short, it is necessary to capture this magical style, which is your highlight. The writing and vocabulary should also conform to this style to avoid Western fantasy style, game style, etc., Which will affect the magical color of the book. If you get stuck and don't know what words to use, then post to netizens for help.

Go and recruit a group of people to be robbers, and they will take advantage of others. Comes and goes like the wind. It feels very interesting.

The subject matter is good, but the writing power is a little behind, and I always feel that it is short-sighted.

Going to send it? If the update is interrupted for a few days without any reason, I will consider it as a cut off, and I will not follow up if I continue writing later.

Books written nowadays are all written in exaggerated, frivolous language and not serious.

He, why are there so many eunuchs now? Can Qidian official rectify it?

Is it not ideal to subscribe after it is released? ? ? Why do I update if I want to, but not if I don't? It's understandable to ask for leave if you have something to do.

It's a bit similar to the Goblin book, one from the west, one from the east, one profession, one for entry, one for stabbing, and one for spinning.

What a chivalrous spirit, waiting for updates every day. Expect

Are you asking for leave or being a eunuch? Can you tell me?

Except for the plot being a bit delayed, everything is good

It was written quite well before

It looks good and I love watching it. It will be good to keep this rhythm. However, the world view does not seem to have been developed very much at present. It is just a few small towns and villages doing jungle. I hope that the current flavor can be maintained when it is expanded later. Furthermore, the plot seems a bit scattered, and there doesn't seem to be a general main line until now. It's too difficult to find an interesting and unique book at the beginning, and it's easy to lose your temper midway 😥. I still hope to keep it up and prosper, author, cheers!

Good brothers, please help me with some data for my children's new book. If it's not well written, don't leave and just scold me. The book is at the starting point. The title of the book is Good Luck at the Beginning and Great Luck Cultivation to Immortality. I really want more people to see my book. I can only use magic means to spray.

Not bad. You can check out some new ideas.

Haha

Good looking, support