
I'm in American Manga, and I Get the Horse Talisman at the Beginning.
人在美漫,开局获得马符咒
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- 196k Words
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- Infinite Flow
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- 1y ago
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- Qidian
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Starting from letting the clone do evil, there is no need to write this book anymore. The massacre of civilians has exceeded the bottom line of most readers. Author, if you continue to write, you will be reported and blocked that day.
Author, as an item, the horse charm is too wasteful, and there is a risk of being stolen and lost. Can you come up with it later in the article and make the horse charm a skill that the protagonist has forever?
The Horse Talisman at the beginning is just the Horse Talisman, but there are twelve more at the beginning? Even if you only give the Horse Talisman at the beginning, it still costs money to upgrade.
The character of this protagonist is too unlikeable, a hypocritical and pure evil person The person he killed had to remove the little pearl, and the clone was not created by him.
Become the villain yourself, Chapter 28 is already poisonous
The protagonist of Unlimited Evil is not likeable.
I'm speechless. The protagonist is just like a passerby.
After reading the first three chapters, I felt that the protagonist just took advantage of the system, which was boring.
The logic of the protagonist's behavior is a bit contradictory, and I felt a bit uncomfortable while reading it.
I feel like I won't be able to write much longer.
His ability was exposed in public, and he didn't hide the cure at all. He was cured with just a brush. If the logic is not rigorous, it will be difficult to maintain it for a long time.
How can you live so well and suddenly become a terrorist?
It's boring and the main character has no sense of existence! Looking at you, I might as well go watch a movie
Watching the protagonist suddenly become the villain
The early stage was pretty good, especially when I started to treat civilians who were kidnapped and no one could help. I thought there was some foreshadowing or something, but I overthought it, and there was a way of writing that made the characters stand out and I decided to write it as a hydrology. . . I couldn't stand it after seeing Natasha give it to me for nothing. It's true that the characters started to fall apart after getting the Tiger Talisman. The author interpreted the evil clone as the opposite of good, so that's the author's interpretation. But when the protagonist saw the massacre by the clone, he said that he still had some conscience and a guilty conscience, while at the same time he kept encouraging the clone to resort to tricks. It was a little bit. . . There is also the love line. According to the author's understanding, Natasha longs for a family. . . Then the author committed suicide and gave it to Natasha without thinking. . . She only appeared in a few chapters, and even the space like the background board was given to her for nothing. It would be better to just abandon the friendship and write it, leaving the father and leaving the son. I couldn't stand it anymore, so I withdrew~
After chapter 40, there was a change of person, or the author went crazy without an outline after chapter 40, and he and Natasha wrote two chapters, one chapter diary, one chapter prose, and then there was a running account of the outline.
2. Is it possible for the protagonist to use the rat charm to turn static into motion to resurrect Dr. Erskine's sculpture, and then obtain the super soldier serum formula to create a super soldier serum to strengthen the protagonist himself and the protagonist's women?
In the comics, the leader of the Ten Rings Gang always had his rings removed and his hands chopped off. In the end, he was patched up and had the Ten Rings embedded on his spine.
Author, can you let the protagonist make seven dragon balls? Of course, they are just seven glass balls that have the same appearance as the seven dragon balls. Then the protagonist uses the rat charm to turn static into movement, turning them into real dragon balls, and they are strengthened by Dandi, the new god of heaven. The Earth Dragon Ball can realize three wishes after transformation. As for why it is not a stronger Dragon Ball and Shenron, it is because the Rat Talisman is not so powerful now. At most, it can only allow the Earth Dragon Ball and Shenron after being strengthened by Dandy to have the power of the original Dragon Ball anime. The real power is that the protagonist uses the rat charm to turn silence into motion and turn the seven glass balls into the real seven earth dragon balls strengthened by Dandy. Then he summons the dragon and fulfills the protagonist's three wishes. After the seven dragon balls are scattered, the protagonist takes back the seven dragon balls attached to them. With the power of the Rat Talisman, the seven dragon balls that were dormant and turned into stone turned back into glass balls, but the wishes that have been fulfilled will not disappear. In the original Jackie Chan Adventures anime, Quetzalcoatl and Lope were resurrected by the Rat Talisman and the damage they caused did not disappear after they turned back into statues! The most important thing is that the Earth Dragon strengthened by Dandy has limited abilities. Even if the protagonist's wish is fulfilled, it will not make the protagonist invincible. Even if the protagonist makes a wish to the Earth Dragon strengthened by Dandy and let the Dragon maximize the protagonist's strength, the protagonist's strength will only reach the level of Ancient One and Odin, let alone The wish the protagonist makes to Shenlong is not to improve the protagonist's own strength, so let the protagonist use the rat charm to turn silence into motion and turn the seven glass balls into earth dragon balls that are strengthened by Dandy and can fulfill three wishes. Then he makes three wishes to Shenlong, then withdraws the power of the rat charm, and turns the seven dragon balls that were scattered into stone back into glass balls?
At the beginning, all the pieces of his heart were taken out, he also brought a reactor and was poisoned with palladium.
The more I write, the more nonsense I get
To be honest, I can still watch if the avatar becomes the villain. After all, if the avatar has a scene with the protagonist in the later plot, it will be a hit. Mainly because of the world where the clones often live, and then the reincarnator's main god space was pulled out, and I didn't want to watch it for a moment. It feels like eating shredded pot-wrapped pork. 🙂
3. The protagonist is a time traveler. He must have watched a lot of anime in his previous life. The power of the Dragon Talisman is the ability of fire. If the protagonist only uses the power of the Dragon Talisman to breathe fire and fire dragons, the fire skills would be too few and too weak! Can the protagonist develop the fire skills and ultimate moves in the original anime: 1. Fire escape ninjutsu in Naruto, 2. Fire escape skills in Bleach, especially Yamamoto Genryusai Shigekuni's skills and tricks, 3. Ace's skills in One Piece, especially Ace Si's three unique skills: Great Flame Ring: Flame Emperor, Ring of Fire, Great Flame Ring: Will-o'-the-wisp, and four. The skills of Natsu, the fire dragon-slayer mage in Fairy Tail, can the protagonist use the power of the dragon spell to develop various fire skills in these four worlds?
Why not directly obtain the ability of the twelve talismans?