Chinese Showbiz's Rising Star: Making Liu Tianxian Cry from Childhood

It only accepts single female protagonists. The author writes, don't do multiple female protagonists like others. That's really boring. After all, you are writing a fanfic based on reality, not ancient times. I really can't stand modern social novels with multiple female protagonists.

It's not that roundabout, just make your own judgment. Just think it looks good. Everything has to be realistic. Realistically, you might as well just write history. I think the writing is pretty good. It's just a novel. You think it's pretty and interesting. Just make sure it brings you joy. Everything must be realistic. To be honest, to be honest, just watch a historical drama. I think his writing has a sense of family atmosphere. The protagonist is younger and the sense of substitution is not so strong. It is that the atmosphere of his family is not something that all authors can write. Especially the character Liu Xiaoli in the drama, I think I quite like it.

After reading a few chapters, it's a huge poison. It's better to give the protagonist an orphan life. The child was snatched away right after birth. Soon after the police rescued him, he was given to others for adoption without even checking whose family it belonged to. It was outrageous. Then the police came to ask for it, and it was written that according to the adoption law, the child was irretrievable. Against all odds, here comes the biggest poisonous point: Xiao Liu's mother even gave up the protagonist's bones for the sake of the adoption law. The flesh and blood are separated, they cannot recognize each other, and they are so vicious that they are inhumane. There is another story later, it is said that the protagonist's biological father opened a bookstore next to the school, just to be closer to his son. When I saw this, the protagonist's biological mother did not appear. Gu Ji died of depression. His father had previously bankrupted the family in search of his son, and had committed crimes. The family was ruined, and his wife was separated. In the book, Xiao Liu's mother and the irresponsible Ah Snake are the biggest culprits. The most poisonous woman's heart is, you call her mother 🤔 Anyway, after reading the first few chapters, don't be poisoned.

The biological parents did not handle it well and it is not in line with human nature.

Chapter 5 is a failure among failures. It would be better not to write it at all. Although the readers may be extremely self-interested because of the shooting club, they can never lack the Communist Youth League. After all, how can you read the novel if you can't provide for the feelings and emotions? You wrote the protagonist's parents so well, but it just made Liu Yi's family unreasonable and ruthless. The readers have parents. If you are so ruthless, the readers will be confused only if they can continue reading.

The main character's parents are so miserable. Just because the mother and daughter have such different views. They are human beings!

I feel like the male protagonist is so selfish and pretentious. Since you are unintentional, Sissi even said they broke up, and you are here to fall in love only in movies, hanging on to her endlessly! In order to prevent Sissi from calling other men her cousin, you rejected all the domestic costume dramas that should have belonged to Sissi. If Liu Yifei didn't film those costume dramas, would she still be Liu Yifei? Or is she the fairy sister of our memory? Hey, I don't know what the author was thinking. He made Sissi look like a nymphomaniac. If you don't love her, don't waste time hanging on her. Speak clearly! It's so exciting to watch!

It's really outrageous. It's just like her mother abducted her parents. You might as well just write that she was abandoned on the roadside and adopted. It's weird that your original parents are not good enough.

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Write about going to the United States. Please, go to Hong Kong to take some pictures? ! I have been waiting for you to go abroad. Now you are recognizing relatives, giving piano recitals, and filming affairs. I am tired of all the pulling. Don't be like Liu Jing and become a child star. I also like it if you go to the United States to write about daily life. If you write about it, it is irrelevant. It will be useless when you return to the mainland. You've already done enough, aren't you pretending to be a genius piano prodigy enough? If you have to be a child star in Hong Kong, you can't go to Hong Kong to hang out in the future, right? The key to playing the role of a youngster is not helpful to the protagonist at all. Others are downgrading their consumption. Why are you pretending to be downgraded? Even if you were to adapt the Pirates of the Caribbean novel in the United States, I think it would be better than this! There are not many books on the track of being adopted by Liu Xiaoli. I personally like it, but you write it well. You always like to go to other places for no reason. First, there is the plot of the biological parents, then the plot with the Tang Dynasty Normal School, and the setting of overclocking to transform one's body. Now it is the plot of Hong Kong child stars. Please, boss, it's just that you haven't updated enough this day. Don't always make something that is not there. This really kills your enthusiasm for reading. You are just a single seedling now. I don't want what I see when I open the catalog to make me lose my enthusiasm for this book. Come on, author. Some personal thoughts, I hope the writing will become more interesting. If something feels wrong, just pretend I didn't say it. Thanks.