F1: An Uncanny Feel for the Car

Let's write less about everyday life, especially about little girls. It's a bit awkward, to be honest. Women only affect the accuracy of the protagonist's entry into the curve.

The protagonist has 5 championships and is on his way to a 5-peat, but the team is deliberately playing favorites because of a team that hasn't won for several years with 2 championships? And they're even letting him cause trouble? I can't understand it. If you were the veteran with 5 championships and the protagonist with 2, you wouldn't play favorites like that either. Why should you?

This protagonist only has this much power even with his cheat-like abilities. What kind of loser was he in his past life? This further highlights the genius of the old man and Panzi's group. Is the author deliberately suppressing and weakening the existence of cheat-like abilities? Does he not want the male protagonist to be too strong, but is also afraid of offending a group of car enthusiasts and readers? It feels like he's "having his cake and eating it too".

Because it's rare, as long as you don't write nonsense, you'll always achieve something. The real fear is that you'll write more and more absurdly.

I genuinely thought Williams' season was well-written; it was passionate, and his "cheat code" was on point. It got progressively worse afterward, and I felt the author had hit a roadblock. I thought going to Ferrari was the author finding a new punchline, but as others have said, it felt like watching a documentary.

The old man's teammates in the book are the same in real life. The protagonist in the book tolerates it, and so does the author in real life. The readers all tolerate it too. Amazing! Are they afraid of offending the old man's fans?

Currently, the protagonist is essentially an upgraded version of the old man (after he gets a power-up). The first championship season was well-written, but the later parts read more and more like a documentary. I'm not sure if the author intended to write an F1 documentary or a wish-fulfillment novel. Up to this point, the power-up is practically nonexistent.

The protagonist's current state and mindset don't seem like those of a world champion who rose through the ranks from a small team. Once on the track, it's all about competition first and friendship second. If it's just about giving way without any conflict, frankly, it's not very interesting.

Can you keep writing? F1 type is too rare.

A book about having an ambiguous relationship with an 8-year-old female protagonist is quite something.