The Final Giant

I'm really afraid that the protagonist's organs will be awakened by others. The protagonist with all kinds of incredible abilities can only bite wild dogs on the roadside and lose.

I originally planned to start an automatic subscription, but after reading the testimonials, I knew that this book was going to be unfinished, and I didn't want to continue reading it, even though it was pretty good now. The author has no idea what is attractive about his book, and he has gone in an unpopular direction and never looked back. I estimate that there will be two to three thousand subscriptions in these two months, and then one thousand subscriptions in another two months. After that, it will be unfinished with about 500,000 to 800,000 words. First of all, there is the issue of positioning. This book gives the impression that it is an interstellar policeman who constantly earns passive expertise and attributes his power to himself, and then constantly fights against other aliens and goes to other planets to get better expertise, similar to "Super Mechanic". As a result, the author is positioned on only one planet, similar to protecting the earth. . . Those who retreated from the trap are right. It is too weak now, there is no crisis at all, it is extremely procrastinating, and it does not even have a big goal. For example, overthrow the world government and make the world a better place, so find some stronger NPCs. For another example, if the big boss in the next version is going to destroy the planet, there are already signs of this cultist showing signs. You need to hinder them in advance, save the persecuted NPCs, and then accept him as an assistant. Now it's like a travel article. You have to read it here and there. You have to write about a legendary brave man to be attractive. If there is a book that tells how this brave man washes his face and brushes his teeth when he gets up every day, walks with his left and right feet first, and saves one person today, two people tomorrow and three people the day after tomorrow, then this book must be a history textbook, not a novel!                                                                                                                       The problem of food and clothing has been solved, and the second is to get the internal organs, these two have been published on the shelves. And when I saw this congressman's description, I knew that something bad was going to happen with this beautiful congressman again. I want to increase my strength. Strength is the foundation of everything.                                                                                                                                                                           but may 1.4 Billion Heirs to the Kingdom could be read by me read the book. The purpose is clear at a glance, and the main line is to improve yourself. The old woman saving her granddaughter's robot gives the impression that the protagonist is taking advantage of the injustice and making two dollars by the way. If the problem is to describe the foreshadowing of the robot, but it is not described enough and the character is not developed, it can be said that the number of words is just water, and it is meaningless in the Legend of the Brave. Some authors say that the protagonist has powerful power and can do things as he pleases, so he seems to be grinding away (roughly meaning). But have you ever thought about writing this because you want your readers to see a little kid teasing ants? This does not mean that writing a diary is completely unnecessary. This book's success in the beginning was entirely due to my patience with new books and my good drawing. According to the author's outline of the book's acceptance speech, it completely deviated from the original drawing. Coupled with this procrastinating travel writing style, it became a bad book after a few months.

Draw cards and draw out a bunch of real players. In the end, the protagonist is just an NPC. This world and the lives and emotions of the indigenous people in this world are just a joke. It's a pity that I can only say goodbye.

The world view is a cyber world, and the ability system is the star abyss. The protagonist has Ultraman's 5 seconds🌚, and even has cyber's super scientific research ability (brought by the system) Others don't know the identity of the protagonist for the time being (Ultraman doesn't know either) Why is there such an innocent lady in the cyber world view? Don't worry, I'm blindly guessing that there is something wrong with the family.

I'm running away, I'm here to see the Cyber ​​Titan. What do you mean by "player"? I originally thought that the following would be the dependent farming style to develop its own power. Players are so funny.

Game planning king? 🙂It's such a big name😰

The dog plans to be reborn as the protagonist, but the idea is wrong. No matter how he writes it, he is still the protagonist.

I thought he would die together with the Avengers later, but it ended like this. He was said to be guilty, and then the protagonist let him go. It seemed like he was just a piece of shit.

You told me earlier that you wanted to write about the fourth natural disaster. You have to throw away the settings now.

It's a player stream. Couldn't you explain it earlier?

No, brother, is the fourth natural disaster about to come in? I thought you were just playing cards by yourself. After the fourth natural disaster comes in, more than 60% of the books will collapse because they cannot control it. For example, they will directly kill some people and leave the protagonist passive. Many people will blame it. , There are also some strange operations that have caused public outrage, and the introduction of the fourth natural disaster brother will dilute the role of the protagonist. Then someone who is describing the fourth natural disaster every day will be playing a copy of a certain monster, directly out of the main line. If it is written well, it will be a super god group portrait story, but if it is not well written, it will be like a roadside eunuch.

At this point in time, the players are really a bit () It happened suddenly and unexpectedly, and it also occupied the protagonist's card drawing resources. Originally, one month was enough for the protagonist to finish the first phase of the pass CD, but now you say that the protagonist has been saving for so long and then drew cards to draw a group of players () No brother, have you really stepped in and seen how frustrating this kind of operation is (x) See you again (x)

What does it mean for players to do it?

When you went to junior college and wrote about it, your mentality collapsed and you cut out a new book. It didn't matter. Here you are mentally depressed again? Your writing is interesting and good-looking, so it's understandable that readers will buy into it But in the end, it's not the reason for you to cut the book willfully. Readers' tolerance is limited Block and say goodbye Infertility with talent but no morals

It makes no sense to engage in players. If you want to write a more interesting race, you can just write about the Breadman race, because the advantages you mentioned can be the advantages of this race (fast growth, will not die, always passionate); you want to open up other perspectives, those dependents from different civilizations and different races are enough for you to write, but in the end you just treat them as NPCs, and you don't see any effect at all; you want to use the fourth natural disaster to save trouble, but what is the use of just a few people? It doesn't make much sense to give them some repetitive work; you also added absolute control, what's the point? Just remove the player's consciousness and it's over. If you want to write the fourth natural disaster article, you should reflect it at the beginning, but then you start writing the paid chapter. You can't recruit people who like this kind of thing, but you will only drive away people who don't like it. Come on, I really don't know what you are trying to do. Originally, you had no main plot, many perspectives, scattered branch plots, and the content was too watery. You also added some player content from time to time. In the chapters of Wei Lan, we were fighting a war, and suddenly added a player chat room, and the content couldn't be connected. You don't rely on players to attract readers. You can use them as supplementary materials, don't think of it as the main plot.

The author should be an old gamer and knows the game industry very well. The subtle description of the protagonist's identity as a game planner has caused strong discomfort among readers who play the game. As a second-game player, I am even more uncomfortable. The author uses classic planning techniques to whitewash and superimpose armor. The description of the ugly image is exquisite 🙂 and the writing is too similar, so I can't stand it. I have seen Chapter 8 so far. There is no big problem except that the protagonist should be shot.

The author kept throwing away the setting and world view in the first few chapters. It was a bit too dense and gave me a headache 😅

After a few days of updating, it seems to be working again. Maybe it's true this time

I can only say that the more you write, the more you write. If you don't break through yourself, you will let readers vote in a referendum whether to cut the book or not. We are here to watch the battle and enjoy it, not to watch your dialectical stuff that looks like a stone. Sure enough, there are many geniuses in the liberal arts.

It's been 26 years and I'm still waiting for Lord of Annihilation to be rewritten? No confidence either

Only then did I realize that the Titan was not referring to Ultraman, but Idian

It was really right to stop the loss in time

Can anyone tell me where to join the book club? I can't find it.

I only see nothing, single, and it offends me, please ask.

I haven't read it since it was put on the shelves. It's too correct. The author is amazing. The creativity is very good and there are many small thoughts. It's still bad.

I looked for the categories of science fiction, fantasy, urban, and all kinds of things. You classified it as light novels, right?

What is the final giant? Isn't that Tiga?

Will you be publishing new books? I enjoyed reading them.