The Church Says There Are No Brave Men, but Monsters Say There Are

The editor highly recommends Chapter 7? Did you sell hooks to the editor-in-chief?

Speaking of which, many Western fantasy novels like to set the church as the villain.

The fastest human being can write is 800 words per minute. I'm not asking too much. 300 Words, 60 minutes per hour, is 18,000 words. A 24-hour day counts. You eat breakfast, lunch and 2 hours for dinner. Don't eat dinner. It's easy to become obese. If you are obese, you need to lose weight. You also need to exercise. The number of words will easily fall. If you exclude the average human sleep time, six hours is enough. Sleep too much. The time-consuming plus some trivial matters will add another 2 hours for you. A ten-hour break a day means that you only have 14 hours of typing and writing a book a day, which is 250,000 words. I will give you a zero 250,000 words, and you will write 200,000 words a day. That's it. After all, we are humanitarians. I hope the author can see my comments, be strict with yourself, and don't be lazy. 🤓

Wait, Carlos? It's broken. No wonder the church is suppressing this world. I'm afraid the knight's castle will not stand up in the later period, and angels will come to the world.

At the beginning, you just think about killing people to gain the whole family. You are very brave!

How should I put it, the main character has a big stake in it, the body and soul of the once most powerful magician in the world (without memory). The main enemy is clear, the church that smeared him, and an unknown enemy who killed him in seconds. Seeing Chapter 68, there are few typos and the language is fluent. But there are many shortcomings 1. The protagonist's behavior is seriously out of touch with his thoughts, or the protagonist has no concept of survival or adventure in another world from beginning to end. It may also be that he has a serious self-destructive tendency. He clearly knows his enemy, but has repeatedly used childish methods to fight against him. As a result, by Chapter 68, the church has identified and started to arrange to kill him. 2. The protagonist talks about improving himself and hiding himself, but the result is that improvement is a matter of picking up magic books on the roadside and learning, and there is no need to control the organized and systematic teaching in other places. I don't change my name, I know I'm not strong enough, but I just want to seek death in front of the little boss (the Queen). 3. The whole story is very petty, as if this different world only has the royal city and the border city, and there is absolutely no desire to understand and explore the world (either the reader or the protagonist). 4. There is no plot about monsters, so it is suspected of fraud in the introduction. 5. The possibility of the author establishing a government 404 is not 0. 6. The author is a normal person, but the protagonist is not, which feels very strange. The protagonist has a lot of suffocation operations, but fortunately normal people in another world can see through them, which means the author has no problem. But this makes it difficult for readers to get involved. In general, you can take a look at Shu Huang, some of which are relatively light.

A true magician creates his or her own magic rather than simply copying someone else's. I hope the author can create unique magic for the protagonist instead of simply copying and pasting previous magic.

The demons in this book have no sense of existence. It's just like it's redundant. It's better to just delete it and just have fun fighting with others.

The church of villains (gods), monsters remember the brave, and the brave pursues peaceful coexistence between monsters and humans

Play the Lost Step 100 times in a row, and the protagonist, the poet, holds

There are 4 books at level 1, let me pick them up. I have to try the salted egg

It's weird. After reading the introduction, there was an argument in the first picture, and I wanted to kill the opponent.

After reading Chapter 12, I always feel like I have read this world view in some book.

Update soon, I want to see rivers of blood!

BYD, 18th century environment, 20th century version

Chapter 91, I finally found Just Yin

Chapter 4, the twist is too abrupt. Just now it was introducing the protagonist, but suddenly it was pulled into other plots.

After reading Chapter 20, if the theme of swords and magic has delayed you, go back to writing about Machiavellian wits.

Why does it feel like I've seen it before? The beginning is very familiar.

Just because I can write so much is a bit heavy.