Hogwarts: This Professor Is Too Muggle

It is a warm daily novel, the plot advances slowly, and the interactions and characterizations of various characters in the book are very heartwarming. The writing is good, my favorite is the part where Dumbledore recalls his sister. Vote two monthly votes, start automatic subscription, and keep it first. Come on, author!

The first impression is that the writing style is more delicate and not jerky, but I always feel that there is a bit of Professor Mowen. Although it is different, I feel that the framework is somewhat similar and the style is relatively similar.

JK once said that there are 3,000 wizards in the British wizarding world, but judging from the number of young wizards in Hogwarts and the life span of wizards, it is not right. It may be about 20,000. Did you know? Uruguay has a population of 3.457 Million, while Australia alone has 47 million kangaroos. If kangaroos decided to invade Uruguay, every Uruguayan would have to kill 14 kangaroos. "In 1991, when Harry Potter entered school, there were 5.383 Billion Muggles in the world, which means that each wizard had to deal with about 53,000 Muggles." - "Muggle Professor/Wiccan Joke Collection"

Nowadays, online writing is not suitable for this kind of writing. Most people come to read the story, not the setting. Long paragraphs of settings and extensions that are not found in the original work will only make readers upset. The story is too poor, and it feels like there are no actions in the story to advance the plot. For example, if I write a chat with Nico, I have to withdraw a lot of famous books, and talk about the content and analysis of a lot of foreign stage plays. I thought I was doing reading questions. This Hermione's father wrote a lot about dentists. I think it's not advisable to show off writing skills and accumulation. These things have nothing to do with the readers, and have little significance to the plot of the story. We only need a Hermione whose father is a dentist and who has a happy conversation with Nick. I don't think the things that are derived are suitable for online articles.

The writing is a bit showy and the plot is a bit bland.

Thirty chapters a day, Hajidou, I believe you can do it

One is the introduction issue. I have written a million words but haven't touched on the relevant content yet. One is the positioning problem between Hermione and the protagonist. Hermione messed around with the time turner and caused more trouble than the original work. There was no criticism. The protagonist, as a professor, guided all this. There was no self-summary and reflection afterwards, and no teaching to the students. The plot of the third grade was a mess.

I'm very happy to hear that CP is not Hermione. It's hard to accept that the professor's character is Hermione. No matter how well written the male protagonist is, if the character is so certain, Lockhart would not be so outrageous.

The Harper fandom itself is a niche, and the slow-paced substitution flow is even more niche within a niche. The Harper fandom where Hermione is not the heroine is also a niche within a niche. If you insist on going to a dead end and the results are not good, don't blame the fans for not buying it😓. Of course, authors have autonomy, and if they do not need grades for their own literary pursuits, there is nothing wrong with that. It's just a pity as a Hermione fan.

The meaningless show-off will only make the readers feel that they have stepped on the past in the connection of chapters, completely breaking the coherence of reading. The tips with unclear meaning and long length are really confusing.

The author likes to write HP settings at the end of each chapter. Like a textual research party. But the results obtained from the research are very bizarre. A professor of Muggle studies can actually scare Borgin Bock, and even talk about the status gap. 6 Oh my god, that's Bo Jinbok. He's a famous figure, right? Voldemort worked as a clerk in his place.

The writing is quite good, you can read it with confidence. No poisonous points. There was a previous post that slandered a teacher-student relationship? There are no relevant words at all. The purpose of the poster is unclear.

The introduction is very interesting. I'm going to try it out. It's good that the heroine is not Hermione (read the comments?). After all, there are too many heroines named Hermione. .

This book is much better than the previous one. The previous one had to strengthen the pressure on Hermione by making Ron a clown and holding the Holy Sword for Hermione. Otherwise, the author would be treated as a dog by Hermione. If it weren't for this book's favorable impression, I wouldn't have been able to read the troll at the front of the previous book.

What is good is that Harry Potter is presented in detail, but what is bad is that it lays out the settings in a long and cumbersome manner, with various explanations and deconstructions, and occasionally descriptions of the environment, without the excitement of plot advancement. Those who can watch without falling asleep are talents.

The author is in the wrong direction. What we want is online writing, not reading comprehension.

Everyday life is daily life, but the plot is so bland that it won't affect you even if you skip it.

The protagonist is the same age as Charlie Weasley or one year older. The girl is Fleur Delacour, which is good and the age is right.

What an amazing introduction. Many authors write fan fiction of foreign works, with a strong Chinese flavor. Very few try to integrate Chinese and Western styles. Your introduction has a subtle sense of harmony. Did you ask a big boss to help you write it, or is the author the future big boss?

If you write 2 million words, you will be the first HP fan.

I don't understand, is it Hermione? Hermione is currently in her third year, and Ron has basically been marginalized. This has been decided since Ron chose 1,000 Galleons gold coins instead of the protagonist's private tutoring. Too many descriptive perspectives of Hermione. Even the protagonist's summer plot can be written about Hermione fighting against dark wizards. So Hermione is the heroine?

? Why did you become a eunuch all of a sudden? Damn it, and you wasted my money again.

It's okay, but there are too many words for water, and a lot of people in the comment area scolded her. It's inexplicable. I don't know how to tell that Hermione is the heroine. Hasn't she ever been a good student? Have you never been liked by your teacher? Furthermore, why does a person like Wormtail still seem to be exploring the advantages? Don't do anything to clear his name later. Just let him accept a kiss from a dementor and accept a kiss from a dementor. It's okay to give his grandma some comfort. I don't know if this person exists in the original work.

Why hasn't it been updated yet?😭

I just happened to see the chapter on the shelf and abandoned the book. How do you feel about reading it? You can read it or not. You can read it or not read it. There is nothing attractive about it. Many of the previous free parts are incomprehensible and inconsistent. For example, the professor analyzed the reason why Snape brought daffodils to class during the meal, and then deliberately described it so that Malfoy could hear him sending a letter to his father, and then finally said that he was wrong. The daffodils were not Malfoy's mother, but Lily. What is the meaning of this description? Another example is his female assistant. He came to Hogwarts to be a professor and had an arrangement for his female assistant, saying that she would go to Hollywood to develop her career. However, this part was just mentioned, just like a casual mention, and there was no coherence in the plot at all. This part is okay, it can be a foreshadowing, and there may be a coherent part in the future. I am mainly uncomfortable with why it is a female assistant? I have been reading books for about 10 years, and I find that these places are all about women. For example, the mysterious disaster of Wen Chao Gong, he went to another world and saved two female priests. Yesterday, I read the two recommended books of the day. One is a two-world type. The male protagonist has two perspectives, one is about slimes and the other is about cultivating immortals. Then the slimes also saved a woman who was being hunted. In another book, the male protagonist awakens in another world, and then the plot is that he meets a group of villagers and catches a murderer they think destroyed the orchard. Then the murderer is a female orc, who is tied to a pillar and tried. Then the male protagonist goes up to save the woman. I am confused. How come it must be a female when someone is being hunted or has a capable assistant? As far as I can remember, it seems that all the characters are female without exception. Can literary works not be too enamored of women? There is also a very uncomfortable part in the early stage, that is, there are too many descriptions of Hermione Granger, and they are still written in the direction of CP love. Can you who write fan fiction realize that you are writing fan fiction about Harry Potter and something, not her Hermione Granger and something. There are too many storylines about Hermione Granger, and the things you describe are in the present. It is indeed feasible in real life. As a teacher or professor, if you see a female student having some problems on her own, you go up to comfort her and help her. This is no problem, but the problem is that what you write is a literary work. You are a literary work. When you describe this thing, your readers will think about it. So in which direction do you think your readers will think? To look at it? I don't know when the trend started. Nowadays, whether literary works or film and television works, they are all closely related to love. Is it possible to realize that literary works do not require CP or love? Especially non-female literary readers do not need to fall in love. Let's take Harry Potter as an example. Harry Potter is Harry Potter and something, not Harry Potter and Hermione Granger and something. The female character Hermione Granger does not need to exist, at least it cannot be described on the same level as the protagonist. We are not female love literature, and we do not describe plots for the purpose of falling in love. All authors need to realize that literary works, especially male-oriented literature, can do without female characters.

The latest chapter is called Resurrection. Where did the Resurrection go?

Are there any other Hogwarts fan recommendations 😅 that I have no time to read.

I'm a little disappointed. The first part of "Third Grade" was actually pretty good, but the rest of it was very watery with no plot to jump around. I hope it can end well. It's a theme I like very much.

Well written, it will end after Voldemort's death, don't stop it

No? What about this in-and-out card bug? ! ! If you have no inspiration, just cut it off. Don't embarrass the readers and don't embarrass yourself