The Days of Hanging Out at Hogwarts

I have a question. The protagonist's parents were affected and died because Sirius wanted to kill Peter. From the chapters where Peter was discovered, it can be seen that the protagonist may recover his memory. So, will he take revenge?

After fully subscribing, I had enough of watching the Quidditch World Cup end. I had no idea what the role of the main character was? Obviously the protagonist knows the development of the plot and has powerful abilities, but he just doesn't do anything. He can't stand the wizard's indifference to ordinary people, and even his parents died because of it, but he still has to act and stand up, and he can't stand it and doesn't care! The book mentions more than once that the conflict between wizards and Muggles will even lead to war in the future. I thought this would be the main line, but I don't see any tendency to move toward the main line. Everyday Love is written very well but takes up quite a lot of space. Even in my opinion, the character of the heroine is not likable and has no boundaries. She clearly knows that the protagonist is better at learning than she is, but she always imposes her own learning ideas on the protagonist. There is a lack of description of big scenes. The American Inferi and the Quidditch World Cup were two battles that took a long time to prepare for but ended in an anticlimactic manner. The protagonist played the main role in the Inferi incident but his performance was lackluster. He obviously has strong strength but does not show it. Personally, I can't see how it feels better. Revealing the protagonist's plug-in to the heroine or even letting the heroine use it makes me feel like spending money to eat shit.

A very good novel, describing daily life in detail

The author has carefully arranged the plot, has good writing skills, and has good dog food🐶, so I praise it! There are no witty, bloody, or slap-in-the-face plots to advance the plot.

​​​​​​​​​​​This is a daily novel, with sweet love, the growth of friends, the funny daily life of the protagonist, and Dumbledore, Sirius, and Lupin who survived to the end. When I read the book, I seemed to have followed them to school at Hogwarts, were freshmen together, and graduated together. Yes, this is one of the few books that allows you to finish seven years at Hogwarts. I am very reluctant to leave it, to graduate, and to finish this book. Some people love great adventures, while others love this different ordinary life. I am the latter, so I can give this book 9.9 Points. (The 0.1 Points are deducted because it does not include marriage and the story of the new world, which always feels unfinished.) It is rare to order a book in its entirety, but I think this book is worth it. This book's writing style is more delicate, and the story may not be that strong (the plot is not that ups and downs), but I am very satisfied with it. Rowling sacrificed many people for the story, and I am very glad that this book did not. Among Hogwarts fan fiction, I think the daily life of this book is the best. Finally, I wish you all a happy life!

The two little ones are so sweet every day!

How can I put it... The author's writing style is very delicate. I think there is a lot of potential if he writes original works in the literary and artistic genre, but writing HP fanfiction... Gives people the feeling of watching Cao Xueqin writing Journey to the West...

It's very interesting. Please support it by voting a few monthly votes. By the way, are there any similar books?

The last book I was so fascinated by was Professor Magic, but when I read that book, it was already finished, so I read it once and enjoyed it. This time, it was better. It was my turn to read through the pain.

It's a good book, it's all settled, the boss must write it down

The writing is quite good, but the daily routine of summer vacation is a bit too much.

It's nice to look at, but I have some shortcomings. There are too many supporting roles. I think the interaction between the protagonist and Hermione should be increased, and it would be best to have a love story from time to time. Harry, Ron and other characters can cut more than half of their scenes. The main reason is that the updates are too slow. It doesn't matter if you update 10,000 words a day to write these supporting characters.

I really couldn't bear to see the end of Goblet of Fire. The protagonist was the audience the whole time. All the plots were not changed at all, and I didn't participate in it. Isn't this bad for me to watch the original work? You might as well just copy everything from the original work to save yourself the trouble of writing! I'm really convinced, can this be considered a fan?

Why do modern time-travelers like to fly around on broomsticks and play Quidditch? Isn't it much more interesting to like flying carpets, Weasley's flying car, Sirius's flying motorcycle, and Snape and Voldemort's flying spells?

Is Loren the protagonist or Hermione the protagonist? After watching it for so long, I have always wondered how powerful Hermione is, and how incompetent some of the boys are, and the real protagonist is written like a fw, and the cheating training for so long is still a fw If you want to write a heroine story about Hermione, please tell me in advance, don't waste our readers' time, and if you write a female channel article, please submit it to the female channel, okay? Also, the daily life of gangsters also needs to be more enjoyable. The premise of gangsters is that the protagonist has the ability to control the overall situation. He usually fishes for fun, but he will always let the development of the situation be under his control, eliminate hidden dangers in advance, and will not cause trouble for himself Or usually fish and turn the tide at critical moments Instead of fishing in ordinary times, it is useless at critical moments. If you have no ability at all, you are just a bastard and a marginal observer who has no decisive influence on the plot. If the author wants to write about the life of a fw, he can write a personal biography of the author instead of writing a female fan novel and posting it to a male channel to waste readers' time.

The writing is very good, and it's one of the few fics that portrays the look of a child. But it's a bit funny, it's the Book of Abraham, and I'm talented enough to practice opening the door into a blasting spell a month before school starts, and then I'm very busy at the beginning of school and often go to the library to practice fighting with Nicolés Flamel's clone. Then he and the trio were seriously injured by a troll and went to the hospital. Of course, the author patched it up and said that it was unreasonable to hit the head with a big stick for the original floating spell. It's quite funny. I'm very busy but I don't know what I'm busy with. Although there are patches, my magic power hasn't grown. Now I'm still young and haven't practiced any powerful magic. I just learn alchemy. It's very reasonable and logical, and there's nothing wrong with it, but the protagonist seems very humorous. Even if you put aside this paragraph, there's nothing that shows the progress of the protagonist. He usually says he doesn't want to be in the limelight in class. Learning potions with Snape, learning alchemy and fighting with Nicoléme, it felt like learning, was it really learning? It felt like learning. Of course, regardless of the growth aspect, it is excellent as a daily novel, the characters are very vivid, and the characters are not deliberately black. Just ignore the fact that the protagonist is reborn. The childish behavior of many characters will make people smile. This book is more in line with the positioning of the original fairy tale.

After reading 500 chapters, I can only say that the first 200 chapters are okay. The protagonist becomes more and more confused later on. He basically flirts with Hermione or rapes Harry. It makes me feel like I am watching the original novel. The protagonist is like a transparent person. It makes me feel that the protagonist is Harry. No matter what the protagonist knows or what Dumbledore knows, it will develop according to the original plot. The protagonist is like a narrator who says a few words from time to time and then watches. There is another poisonous point. Originally, I thought there would be a different plot when a school was added to the competition, but the result is still the same as the background board. I called out an additional name for each project, which has no effect on the plot. The project has not changed, the process has not changed, and the results have not changed. It can only be said that there is no difference whether this school is added or not. Maybe the author also wants to do something original. I have almost forgotten the previous content. There is nothing that I can remember. It is just a simple addition of an audience based on the original work. Harry appears in more pages than the main character.

This book gives people a feeling that it can be read, but it feels boring while reading.

I have only read a few dozen chapters, but I still want to say it. This is a novel that expresses its own soul. It is not just a fan of the original work, but has many thoughtful ideas.

These two are very good

First of all, my answer is: good-looking, readable This is a good daily article, not too OOC, and does not deviate from the main line. The structure of the writing is also good, the writing is smooth, and it will not make you tired just reading it. There are always some scenes that make you smile, which is very warm. After reading the comments left by everyone, I actually think that Loren's performance in this story can be said to be remarkable. He can be said to be one of the best representatives of HP's daily male protagonists. He has IQ, emotional intelligence, and can be naughty from time to time. In other words, in your daily life, it is not an exaggeration to say that he is a little expert in adjusting the atmosphere. With him, you will never be left alone. This kind of daily male protagonist also often appears in Japanese animation. Whether you like HP's daily writing is hard to define. Everyone has their own direction and what they want. The following words are just my thoughts. I like this book very much. ——⊙▽⊙—— I also started to read HP articles in the past few months, and I have read a lot of them. I read this book through QQ for free for ten days as a new user. I like this book very much, so I am here to leave a comment and share the surprise of discovering the treasure. First of all, I understand that there are only two main categories of HP articles now: 1. It is a self-original series, which may deviate more or less from the main line. 2. Follow the main line and fill in some side stories, which usually appear in the form of daily novels. After famous series such as Professor's and Bloodline Wizard, most people actually have a certain understanding of the story that follows the main line flow, so that a large part of HP articles are the same. If you look at the beginning, you will actually know the thread of the entire story. Another very embarrassing issue is involved here. HP novels are actually more like semi-propositions. They need to make use of the relevant characters given in the original work, as well as the character's personality and the context of the main line to create. Moreover, most HP novel authors are not strong enough to support the original plot stories they create. If they write too much, they will disappoint fans and audiences. Under this situation, daily novels become more interesting. Since you already know the plot of the original work, you must want to see more different endings, different stories, and whether the person in your heart has a different life. I haven't read too many similar daily novels, but I can feel that every character written by the author of this book has grown to varying degrees. Without OOC, their growth or change does not happen overnight, but grows with the unfolding of the plot and the transition of time. It makes me sigh, yes, he (she) is like this, he (she) is like this. Finally, let me talk about my viewing style and experience When reading this book, you can bring in some funny conversational tones from some dramas that you see in daily life. To put it bluntly, you are a fun person, and some happy tones of someone who makes jokes, and read it. In this way, your perception will be greatly improved. Speaking of the viewing experience, I won't say much, and I will share a scene with you: Lying on the bed, rolling left and right, letting out some laughter from time to time 😄 This book is not perfect, I personally think it is very beautiful, it also has its own shortcomings, and it is large and full, and the author is very stable in updating. This book is quite good, everyone is welcome to come together and discover the treasure

After thinking about it, the reason why I like reading this novel may be that I envy the relationship between Loren and Hermione. I really like that light, quiet feeling of time.

An explanation about Loren's memory problem. The memory problem involves the main plot of the book, and will be dug up in the second grade to tell a big plot. Before this, I always cue Loren's memories from time to time. Some readers think this looks very unappetizing. After reflection, I found that the foreshadowing is indeed too long, and I am also slow to update it, which is very unappetizing. Without changing the plot, some modifications have been made to the previous text to make the memory problem less appetizing. Thank you for reading, newbies, new books, if you have any questions, please give me a hard whip!

Loren's portrayal is very good. Regarding love, equality, and strength, he shows sound thinking and personality, and dares to love and hate. His treatment of Malfoy and Sirius is not limited by the original concepts. He rarely pays attention to the perspective of the 12 ordinary people who were bombed, and is not immersed in the "adventure among wizards". Each character has his own thinking and character logic, which is very complete. Dumbledore has the arrogance of being the White Devil who arranges everything, Loren has the arrogance brought by the time traveler, Sirius has the arrogance of being a pure blood, Harry has the emotional changes of teenagers, Hermione's mother has the experience of being promoted as a female, and even the Basilisk has its own inner activities. The protagonist has a measure of revenge, no red beans and no forgiveness. He has desires but is not a puppet of desires. The other characters are also good, with no backstory (Seamus:?). Voldemort has plans, Malfoy is involved, Goyle also has feelings for Crabbe, Hermione has her own secrets, plans, opportunities and growth after leaving the protagonist. When meeting Hermione Swordmaster hhhc for the first time, the protagonist also respects Hermione. Loren is not "worried about Hermione" when something happens, and Hermione will take care of the protagonist and take her own plans. The environment is beautifully described, elegant and elegant, and the hot air balloons complement each other with exquisite details. The daily life of Loren and Hermione is also interesting. Sometimes they are stunned, but sometimes they subconsciously consider each other. As the relationship deepens, Hermione's reaction to being teased by the twins also changes. Others also have their own adventures away from the protagonist. The original plot is unique and the cheating strength is reasonable. ps: Stop kissing you Hermione, activate the fantasy book and start the refining!

Learning magic relies on plug-ins. The mixed college cup relies on licking the protagonist group. I thought the title was self-deprecating, but I didn't expect it was actually a joke!

To be honest, I really want to see Loren participate in the battle for hegemony. I have barely read the exciting chapters of Loren's battle. I loved this book from the beginning, but now it is actually becoming more and more boring... Quite disappointing.

As a Harry Potter fan work, this book basically maintains all the basic settings of Harry Potter without introducing a larger and broader world like a magic or secret treasure. Overall, on the one hand this maintains the style and feel of HP, but on the other hand it also brings some problems. Just like the title, the biggest feature of this book compared to other HP fans is that it is "Hong Kong". The protagonist Loren is a very pure time traveler. He came to this world just to live a good campus life. He does not care about fame or fortune. , Does not care about power, even the exploration of magic is only due to inner curiosity (rather than a desire for power), but to enjoy Harry Potter-style campus daily life; therefore, for some book friends who want to see the show off and show off, this book may not meet your needs. At the same time, the "mixed" protagonist and the copy of the world view give this book a lot of opportunities to portray supporting characters. In this book, the author focuses on describing Loren's character influence on other characters in the original book - This brought me a lot of surprises - when current time-travel novels depict the impact of the protagonist, they often focus on it. Macroscopic things like "country" and "society" ignore the impact of detailed character. In many HP fan works, in order to grab the spotlight and lift up the only protagonist, the authors often focus on the protagonist's twisting of the tragic story. This undoubtedly brings a sense of heroism, but after tasting it too much, I can't help but experience aesthetic fatigue. In this book, seeing the emergence of Loren makes the characters with different personalities in the original work grow, which is a very novel experience in my opinion. Of course, this book also has many shortcomings. Regarding the plot, the author is too cautious - before the third grade, the process of this book is not much different from that of HP, which inevitably leads to doubts about "What is the use of the protagonist?" What I am personally dissatisfied with is the final handling of the "solution" to the conflict between Muggle wizards, which is the "wizard migration". I don't have much dissatisfaction with this plan. As long as it is written well, the issue of "necessity and sufficiency" can still be solved. However, the author is too vague on this plan. "What does the plan look like specifically?" "Why does Loren prefer this plan the most? What are its advantages?" And " How did each country pass this plan? What struggles did it bring about? How were they solved?" These questions only have vague answers in the book, which makes me feel that the author is not confident about this plan, which greatly affects my perception of the ending. To summarize, as a daily novel written by HP, "The Days at Hogwarts" is a book that maintains the world view and character settings of the original work, implements the idea of ​​"mixing" with daily life, and is very surprising in the details of the character's personality transformation. Reading after the book is finished also avoids the trouble of being tortured by the daily "water" and the lack of updates in the process of catching up on the book. But it is not suitable for those Hogwarts Legacy players who like to conquer and transform, and who could chew a dozen big melons in the last school (just kidding).

I would like to make a small suggestion, you can add more battle scenes of Loren

Come on, author, write more. I really have no other books I want to read.

In the last two hundred pictures, Hermione's character changed so quickly. From an emotional little girl, she suddenly became less talkative and cold-hearted. She no longer had that kind of human touch.