Versatile Mage: I Can Control You to Death

The writing is quite good, but the protagonist takes himself too seriously, and the military benefits are too good, right? In a world of demons and demons, a lot of people in the military will definitely die, even a lot of Skyhawk mages will die. If everyone pays compensation according to this rule, I feel that the country will be completely doomed.

As we all know, clothing is one type, and soul clothing is two types.

I found that the book about the full-time mage did not make any changes to the society of full-time mage in the end. I want to see a protagonist leading the people at the bottom and changing this family-dominated society. I want to see the protagonist unite all the people. The human race in the world is no longer divided into multiple countries to fight against monsters instead of fighting among themselves. There is only one voice in the world and that is the protagonist. I hope the protagonist is not trapped by emotions. I hope the protagonist will use everything to revitalize the human race. Am I crazy to think so?

If you like cool writing, don't read this. It's very frustrating. Personally, the most disgusting part for me is Chen Ying's plot around the 100th chapter. Hiding a black beast is like hiding a drug-addled and mentally unstable murderer. In reality, he will be shot. What can I say about this kind of birth? Listen to what she is forcing, and the author's mental state is not good when writing. A person who has traveled through time wants to be the light of mankind? Do you remember who the protagonist was in the beginning? He keeps swearing in every sentence, and you want to take humans off without any preparation? You also know the problem in Versatile Mage. In order to lead you away, you must clean up all the aliens (holy cities and the like) and the moths in high positions. If you don't even dare to do such a thing or even be stopped from doing it, don't write this kind of plot. Without this determination, I'm afraid you will bring all mankind into the ditch.

I'm really convinced. The target is a single female protagonist, and the male protagonist has many romantic partners, so forget it, after all, she is very charming. But what happened between him and Liu Ru. Your ambiguity is really a bit too much. Everything else is acceptable, after all, he can only pay lip service to it, but Liu Ru's one is really too much. I really liked this book. After all, the writing was quite good, but it was both serious and grounded. What they say is that only Jiang Shaoxu will be the heroine. As a result, there are a lot of ambiguous objects. Another Liu Ru appeared, this one had the best relationship and was the most chaotic.

Advantages: The writing is good, there are constant little jokes, the plot dares to break away from the original work and directly open a copy of the ancient capital, and the writing is quite interesting Disadvantages: It is a cheat but the design is very rubbish. The protagonist awakens two elements at one time but shares a nebula. The pure and pure negative improvement is just to engage in fusion magic in the early stage, but for mana, another endurance trick is required. If this trick is enabled but not enabled, it is better to directly create dual elements and find the person who studied fusion magic in the original work. There is also a plot that I personally think is very toxic. In the eyes of the protagonist, Mo Fan and Mu Ningxue are both talented and handsome, but in the eyes of outsiders, Mo Fan in the early stage was just a street kid who gave up on himself at the bottom of his grade. To be honest, it would be impossible for me to be Mu Zhuoyun and Mo Fan would have a chance to awaken. Then the protagonist of the magic assessment made a mockery of Mu Ningxue's father with Mo Fan, especially Mo Fan, who coveted Mu Ningxue's body while scolding his father-in-law's old wall lamp 😅

Zhao is at fault, Mo is at fault, and the protagonist is also at fault. Zhao resented that Mo Fan was implicated in his family because he helped Mu Ningxue leave. Mo did not at least apologize to Zhao for his behavior. The protagonist knows everything. He knows that Zhao is wrong, but he is right, but the protagonist is also wrong. He pulls his frame, he stands very high. He did not point out that the Zhao family was implicated because of Mo's actions. He did not tell Zhao that Mo was only 10 years old when he did such a thing. He was still a child. If Mo had grown up, he would never dare to do this.

The protagonist gives me the impression of a mad dog. I personally feel that he can't live long in the real world.

For this kind of male fanfic, it actually doesn't matter if you write multiple female protagonists. After all, there are still people who like this, but if you label the title as a single female protagonist and write an ambiguous article with multiple female protagonists, this is really too much. Damn, I was so happy watching that. Liu Ru suddenly appeared in front of me and I thought it was nothing. This Liu Ru was definitely not good. Xu Fang is already with Jiang Shaoxu, and they are both boyfriend and girlfriend, and you are still having an affair with that Liu Ru. Isn't this fucking cheating? Don't tell me anything about brothers and sisters. Which brother would be so ambiguous with his sister?

To be honest, this book is pretty good, but the most annoying thing is that sometimes there are always some supporting characters coming to show off to the protagonist, and then a person suddenly appears and says disdainfully to the protagonist, "Who are you?" Do you deserve it? Pretty boy, get out of here 🙂🙂It's really annoying