Elf: Forged Story on the Back of the Molten Dragon

Fighting a monster will take many chapters, and the process from preparing weapons to fighting adds up to a very long time. It gives people a depressing feeling of having accumulated a lot but is extremely difficult. The protagonist has a very high level of achievement in forging, but where does he get better? Does it mean that to defeat a monster, you have to start with equipment? A true Pokémon player can master the ultimate beast with just one move, but in the case of the protagonist, he has to start by establishing a relationship with the Explosive Mosquito. A true monster hunter, my big sword can kill everything in seconds! The protagonist has to do endless tricks to show his superb skills. The main line is to collect fire souls, but the main line does not start from the collection of fire souls, but starts from the two female characters. Are you here to collect fire souls or to pretend to be young girls? It can be seen that the protagonist is the character of Leng Tou Qing at the beginning, and then in the plot of the relationship between men and women, Leng Tou Qing's attributes completely collapsed. If fans want to write realistic stories, they have to break away from game performance. As a result, the joy in the game is not shown, and it does not appear to be very real.

It's not that I can't accept the female protagonists, Sister Fireya, but author, take a look at what you wrote. I came to see the world of Monster Hunter collide with the world of Pokémon. Author, you gave me endless romance, and you also wrote like a third-rate love novel. Otherwise, the heroine is a molten mountain dragon. We dragon lovers can accept it.

There are a lot of problems that I care about 1. The protagonist is too useless. If you are a novice protagonist, forget it. He starts at the master level and ends up with no self-defense weapons. He is chased and beaten by monsters all day long. It's like a big boss that has been prepared for a long time, but the result is not as good as the monsters in the Novice Village 3. Emotions account for too much, and love between monster hunting and Pokémon novels is never the main theme. I came to watch the hunting and Pokémon battles, not the love; and you didn't write the love well, and the main theme was blunt. It was not because of this that the relationship warmed up, but because of the ✍🏻 emotional drama. Okay, I admit it, except for getting along with the Molten Dragon, this novel is almost useless

The idea is interesting, but it's a bit strange to design the protagonist as a weakling who can only rely on weird equipment.

I hope there won't be any conspiracy in Monster Hunter. There are also super-loving sisters who are scheming.

I was attracted by the title. It's okay if it's not on the shelves. After it's on the shelves, there are very few forging elements, and there are also Pokémon's racial value settings. I think the novel should refer to comics or animations, otherwise the racial values ​​will be dead, and the bond between Pokémon and trainers will basically be gone. Besides, the latest water cloud evolution is not impossible to write about, but the author obviously failed to prioritize it well. I suspect that the author has no outline at all, or the title is just a lie to trick people into killing it. If the follow-up has nothing to do with forging, I will give up.

After returning to Monster Hunting, I lost all interest in reading these chapters. The author's honey-made father situation is becoming more and more serious. Basically, the protagonist has made equipment - pretended to be cool - a monster suddenly appeared out of nowhere - the protagonist was beaten to a semi-invalidity - made equipment and then In the cycle of showing off - monsters burst out inexplicably - and the protagonist team loses miserably, who is the protagonist? These monsters can explode in desperate situations and escape with residual health, and they can even learn the ability to use titanium crystallization and Z-moves at the same time from scraps. These monsters are the protagonists, right? You really don't have to suppress the protagonist's combat power now. After all, if you continue to suppress it, the protagonist will be beaten to death by monsters. There are a lot of dung monsters and ceilings in Monster Hunter, so there's no need to keep looking for reasons to make one yourself.

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Using gorgeous words to describe the intensity of the battle shows that the monster or Pokémon's combat power is seriously beyond the standard, and its ability performance is too outrageous. In addition, the heroine is severely bound. Forget it in the Monster Hunter World. When it comes to Pokémon, you also need to bring Water Yun. It feels like Xiao Chunan is writing about girls. It is very uncomfortable to watch later.

Can Monster Hunter's money be the same as the Pokémon League's money?🤔

Believe me, the real heroine is a molten mountain dragon

What can I say, this book only attracted me to the forging, the interaction between the protagonist and Pokémon, and the Molten Dragon. The others were not so good, but these two accounted for a very small proportion Let's talk about the relationship issues between the protagonist and the two sisters, Water and Fire. First of all, I don't mind that the protagonist has a female protagonist (Fire Yun, Water Yun), but you didn't write it well, the author. You dealt with the relationship too quickly. You wrote too much, and it felt like a conflict of urgency and procrastination. It was confusing. Obviously, you can slowly warm up your relationship in fighting, forging, and daily life. (You wrote too much, squeezing out the rest of the space.)       ""，，OK，， Secondly, the battle scene is also a mess. I'm not saying that the way the protagonist and the monster fight is not good-looking (I want to see the protagonist hammering the monster, not the monster hammering the protagonist) In fact, if the protagonist is an ordinary hunter or has just come to the Hunter World and learned to forge, I won't say anything. I think it's normal for a hunter to be hammered to death by monsters. It's also normal for a hunter to have just learned to forge and not have the materials to make things so he can't beat them. But your protagonist's background is that he is already a master blacksmith (who can forge ancient monsters) in the Monster Hunter World. Dragon-level weapon) is also a master-level prop master and healer in the Pokémon world. As a result, the plot of this book begins with the protagonist being hammered to death by a monster hunter, which does not reflect the protagonist's "master-level" strength at all. The big scenes in Fire Village are supported by the protagonist's weapons, but the protagonist's own weapons and equipment reserves are not enough. Finally, there is the problem of the protagonist's economy. The protagonist's weapons can be sold for about 1 million gold coins on the black market. Of course I know that the protagonist cannot just forge a chicken weapon and sell it for 1 million, but you have to write about what kind of weapon can sell for 1 million! (This is a side description that was not written well) In the end, the portal can be built with only 5 million, and the gap between it and 1 million is too small In general, the Fire Village chapter is not good to watch (there is too little interaction between forging and Pokémon). The Pokémon chapter has improved, but not much. After returning to the Fireworks Village chapter, I feel that the protagonist and Pokémon's combat effectiveness has declined. It is obvious that the Pokémon chapter is very powerful, but it feels that it is not reflected in the Fire Village chapter That's it. I don't know when I can write this book, so I'll save it first.

The subject matter of the author may be that the equipment has side effects and is a little poisonous, but these are all minor problems, but what if the protagonist is found to be able to control the ancient dragon (Monster Hunting). In the world, people will not treat the protagonist and may offer him up. After all, the ancient dragon can be a super thug and part-time bodyguard. It can also be a human bodyguard. There is no need to be so nervous about survival pressure. After all, Laoshan Dragon is one of the top ancient dragons. The above are my personal suggestions and opinions for reference only.

Is the author the reincarnation of Lao Deng or an extraterrestrial demon?

I feel like the author underestimated the combat power of monster hunting creatures a little too much.

Is there Lie Yan? I want to see Lie Yan use a vampire knife to cut from Fei Shrine to Prison Spring Township without blinking an eye 😏

Don't let others lead you, but your current overall trend is indeed a bit lagging. It feels like the emotional line is doing a little bit, the fighting line is a little bit, the forging line a little bit, and then a little bit. You need to sort it out.

Shangxiang Hope to fake corpse

Author, please don't die. I swear I won't support you anymore. I will continue to read when you come back.

I also had some incense and left suddenly.