An Elderly Immortal Cultivator Surviving in a Calamity-Ravaged World

Why not just start with an 18-year-old protagonist? Instead, you're making a ridiculous old-age beginning and emphasizing a stable and mature storyline. You're just contradicting yourself. Author, do you want to take a look at what you've written later?

What's most annoying is when a character is designed to be a cunning and experienced old man, yet acts like a naive young person or a child. What hasn't this apocalyptic old man experienced? What's there to be surprised about? And there are grammatical errors. Didn't the author even read what they wrote? Write whatever comes to mind, regardless of whether it aligns with your character and worldview, or whether the sentences flow smoothly.

This is the logic of a hot-blooded young protagonist: 18-year-old young man: You killed my personal maid's father, I'm going to beat you to death. Monster: Huh? I just casually killed a poacher and you're bothered? I have powerful backers, you dare touch me? Young man: My woman cried all night yesterday, I must kill you to get revenge. Monster: She's just a maid.

There are too many instances of forced intellectual impairment.

Well written, find more female leads.

A man in his fifties or sixties doesn't know the importance of keeping one's wealth hidden?

The way they handled the situation involving a man, a woman, and a dog was truly appalling and incredibly crude.

Why would someone who was peacefully hiding suddenly be attacked? What was the point of hiding then? Was it just hiding for nothing?

After reading the comments, I can already guess how the author will write it. Following their suggestions would be too cliché. Goodbye.

This is beautifully written, everyone come and take a look! I can't be the only one feeling down.