Swallowed Star: Slashing Through Reincarnation with My Blade

I read other reviews that it was quite watery, but after reading it I found that it is indeed quite watery. Retiring from the battlefield outside the territory - Ganwu Universe Kingdom - Taking a spaceship to Chaos City - Looking at the monuments and crossing the bridge in Chaos City, you wrote more than thirty chapters

The author's family sells aquatic products. Your water level is mediocre. There is a small rhythm in three chapters and a big rhythm in five chapters. If you reach ten chapters, it will be a battle that ends with one sword. Water King, capitalized service.

A protagonist with the power of the Lord of the Universe took a female disciple and stood in his residence for seven days. The entire original universe knew about it. Not only did he say that the price dropped, but he also said how much the enemy wanted to assassinate her.

It's hard to describe in one sentence. The protagonist's background is quite good, but the plot content is a mess 1. Don't force yourself to do things that you don't have or cannot do, and don't force unnecessary opportunities. There is no need to write the plot of Locke Divine Water. This plot is of no use to the development of the subsequent storyline. After reading dozens of chapters, it is of no use at all. Instead, it has an objectionable point of plagiarizing the original plot. 2. The problem of secret method setting. There is no such thing as feudal level secret method in the original world view. There are only divisions such as non-stream, mainstream, ordinary and so on. 3. The problem of human beings in the secret realm is the size of their potential. The starry sky in the universe is greater than the secret realm, and the secret realm is greater than the Kingdom of God. It is just a question of the size of the potential. There is no such thing as a broken soul, and it is not difficult to break through immortality in the secret realm. The difficulty is to break through the Lord of the Universe. The most difficult thing to break through is the human beings in the Kingdom of God. 4. A lot of nonsense.

The protagonist is considered a human in the secret realm, right? There is no future for humans in the secret realm.

It's such a long story, there's almost no progress, and it's gone in a few sentences. It's all about how many years have passed, how many people have been killed, how many military industries have been obtained, how many layers of Tongtian Bridge have been passed, how many years have passed, and how many years have passed, the clone has been conceived, the immortal has been broken, and the slave has been enslaved. A bunch of kings, how many years passed, I went to the primitive star to purchase a batch of heavy treasures, treasures, exchanged money, exchanged treasures, it kept repeating, how many years passed, I broke through the venerable, how many years passed and created some secret method, there was no process, and there was not even a name for the secret method. Where did the fire clone go? I really just keep eating, eating, eating, I even forgot my name, why don't I just take it out for a walk? Enter the primitive star palace to compete for the treasure, kill a venerable with one blow, and then start to break through the level. In the end, the Dafa is blurred as always. How many years have passed, the treasure has been obtained, how many venerables have died, how many lords of the universe have died. There is no process, only the result. What is this if not a running account? In addition, the author always seems to like to create some inexplicable suspense. The clone at the beginning has been hidden and tucked away. What is the use of the cloud crystal inherited by the god? No beginning or end, and what kind of knife handle is there? There is no movement in the breakthrough of immortality, and there is still no movement in breakthrough of the venerable. What is your purpose of leaving these suspenses?

Crazy, The clone is really a piece of cake. A person swallows treasures and becomes stronger. It's amazing. Anyone who can come up with this thing needs to hire an expert. I'm thinking that if you don't swallow treasures, and you spend resources to upgrade after cultivating to the master of the universe, is the cost much smaller than the multiplier of your treasure-swallowing genes? How much do you have to swallow? A star tower with 100,000 times the genes cannot hold it. It is estimated that it will take two or three, not to mention the important treasures and treasures in the mid-term. The point of increasing the gene multiplier conflicts with the function of the blood sea clone. How did you design it? The second Qing Yuzhu is Tuo Zhongtuo. This clone has gone from the secret realm to almost two hundred chapters. It is really inexplicable. A group of venerables do not want to snatch the treasure of an immortal protagonist, but they still consider the protagonist as their master. Are you serious? ? ? ? Treating readers as mentally retarded? ? ? ? And this clone conflicts with the Blood Sea clone to a certain extent The third Blood Sea, this is really the only one that can make people think it is reasonable. After all, whether it is a huge divine body or a creation with divine power, it is a god, but this is in the original work, And! ! ! With Li Yan's ability to increase gene multipliers and Qing Yuzhu's huge divine body, there is really no need for this blood sea clone to exist. It's all conflict! ! ! What do you want? The fourth Sujue, this is really the only normal original clone, but the writing is slightly worse. Such an awesome clone gives me a feeling that it is not even as good as the original Demon Killer. The fifth one is Qingshou, this clone is written as a pure hook, and it really becomes a soy sauce character. I just remembered it and pulled it out to show the name to the readers, telling the readers that there is this clone. I don't know why you created so many clones? I can't write it down, and it seems like this clone has no effect. It even feels to me that the clones bring negative improvement to the protagonist. If two or three clones are cut off, the protagonist will advance faster. The clone has become a burden and the author is awesome. The second question is about slavery, I think the most intriguing thing in Devour is the secret method of slavery, Spending space writing about these things. After being enslaved for two days, I couldn't keep up with the progress, and then I disappeared. What improvement was there? It is not even as interesting as breaking through the Venerable and then collecting some kings. At least you can train your subordinates. These things of enslavement are really useless in the later stage! ! ! It just so happens that you guys love to write this stuff. The third question is about the heavy treasures and supreme treasures, and the complaints about the treatment of ethnic issues At present, I have read about 180 chapters, The protagonist has contributed about 150,000 heavy treasures and more than 2,000 treasures to the ethnic groups. Is this a plot that anyone can conceive of? ? ? Contributed 150,000 pieces of heavy treasures. The Lord of Chaos City did not question it, and the lords of the ethnic group were not surprised. You can say that the treasure house has blocked most of the heavy treasures. This means that even the Lord of Chaos City has blocked it, right? Your harvest alone is tens or hundreds of times more than the contribution of the entire ethnic group, and no one asks? ? ? Then there is the attitude towards the ethnic group. What is the protagonist's mentality? Is he threatening the ethnic group? ? ? Does this mean that if I don't give you the top palace treasure, you will defect? At this point, the Lord of Chaos City smiled with satisfaction. What was he laughing at? Ah? What are you laughing at? An immortal threatens the human race, the Lord of Chaos City still laughs? I can't tell the difference between the protagonist and Emperor Yan at all! ! ! ! Your early resources are provided by the ethnic group, the arcane group is provided, and everything is provided by the ethnic group. When you make your contribution, you come to threaten the human race. Oh my god, isn't this a replica of Yan Emperor? There is no difference at all! ! ! ! I'm curious as to why you don't just write it as being reborn into the demon clan, so that readers can clear your name when you threaten the clan.

The protagonist is too incompetent and his training speed is too slow. Apart from giving five clones to Golden Finger for the first time, he only has the ability to sense treasures and has no other abilities. He was caught up by Luo Feng tens of billions of years earlier than Luo Feng.

It's like writing an encyclopedia instead of writing fan fiction

The author is really talented. Others inject water into the plot, but your child is pure water.