Infrastructure in the End of the World: I Turn Waste into Treasure by Dismantling It

I have only read the first few chapters. Are you not afraid of being robbed by using black technology for construction flow? The common man is not guilty, but he is guilty of carrying the jade. This sentence must still make sense, right? It's better to get some superpowers or something, or everyone has this tool kit, and just use some talents to increase the pig's feet. This is more reasonable, after all, small skills are not considered skills.

Read the free part. The author's conception and overall outline are solid, and the early foreshadowing and later development are very smooth. And it's completely non-procrastinating and non-verbal. If it were more concise, it would be an outline. But! The writing is very poor. This is relative to the plot and concept. I guess the author is a pure scientist, so he knows nothing about the polishing of literary and artistic works. This novel is like that. The skeleton and physique are great and worth looking forward to, but there is no flesh and blood. It just looked dry. To be specific, first of all, it lacks flesh and blood, and the plot advancement and transitions are very stiff, the kind where you can hear the creaking sounds of bones colliding with each other. The plot twists and scene changes are too blunt, leaving only the beginning and the end. . . On the other hand, there is no skin or no appearance. All the characters in the story only have words and movements, and no expression, demeanor or agility at all. It's just a bunch of robots. In general, this novel could have been more than enough food but not enough fairy grass. However, the overly jerky writing style led to a very poor reading experience. However, the story and plot are indeed very attractive and it is very confusing. I am very confused. It is recommended that the author use AI such as bean bags to add more polish. Although you don't have water, you can't have no water at all😦 The dry beef jerky is indeed delicious when chewed, but can it be compared with the tender and delicious braised beef brisket? Even the beef in sauce is better than now. . . ---------------------Dividing Line---------------------- The author, your novel concept and plot are very good. The plot promotion, character design, and suspense setting are all very attractive. But writing really needs practice. More water! Oh shit, this is really the first time I hope the author can be more knowledgeable. . . .

Why can't we write about doomsday themes without playing with women?

If there is only this kind of zombie crisis that ordinary people can kill, and there are no other evolutionary elements, it will not take long for the army to eliminate the internal zombie crisis and restore basic order very quickly. It may not take more than a month at most for the national army to react.

... How should I put it? The more I go on, the weirder it becomes. I can't figure out why. Moreover, in this novel, the zombies evolve too fast. At this rate of evolution, except for the protagonist and some military bases, I feel that there will be no living people left. I can barely see it, I am taller among the short ones 😅

Even the normal physiological reactions are not included in the beginning of the apocalypse. The large area of ​​flesh and blood can make you vomit and have diarrhea even if the smell is far away. Over time, the smell can kill you alive. The protagonist has the performance of a theoretical otaku. . . . Smile politely 😁 (the two of them are reincarnated)

Have you been to the end of the world? Some things are scribbled and taken for granted.

To be honest, I don't understand that it's the end of the world. An ordinary bedroom with two iron frame beds with bunk beds is not very comfortable for four people. Even if there are no iron frame bunks and four people sleep on the floor in an ordinary bedroom, he is not crowded. It occupies three seven-story buildings, with a total of more than 50 people. There is no room for the newly added survivors. Isn't it a bit funny? It is obviously very dangerous, so we have to live in separate places. It is better to live together. It can save energy, make defense easier, and live in a dormitory with more people and it can be warmer. This is the end of the world, but we are here to enjoy it. The average person can only wish for the area of ​​​​a suite. Offices, factories, and training venues cannot be laid on the floor. They are put away during the day. They are all professional venues for doing professional things. They cannot be used to rest when not needed at night.

When it comes to fairy grass, I don't believe it myself, and when it comes to poisonous weeds, it's not that serious. It's hard to comment. There is a little bit of trouble, or the arrangement is not so appropriate, but if you ask me to say why it is inappropriate, I can't tell. I just feel itchy somewhere on my body, and I asked someone to help me scratch it, but I couldn't scratch it properly. Looking at it, it is probably tasteless, tasteless to eat, and a pity to throw away.

It's well written, good luck to the author. The only little regret is that I'm still looking forward to reading a post-apocalyptic infrastructure novel that doesn't cultivate immortality. Don't write about superpowers or anything like that. In the later stage, everyone will fly into the sky. I have read more than forty chapters in one go. I have automatically subscribed and voted for you to recommend. Come on, author, I hope you can break the stagnant atmosphere of Qidian.

Various descriptions described the feeling of exerting too much force, being agitated and irritable for no reason, which made me stunned for a while, always thinking that something big was going on. And the plot and excuses are quite blunt. Why didn't I get bitten when I woke up in the car? Why dare you run directly upstairs where the situation is unknown? Why haven't women changed? Why does she open the door to save the protagonist? Why make such a fake excuse at first glance (the grassroots level has this stuff, and the top level can't penetrate the world anymore)? Speaking of mutations or systems, it is normal for girls to treat the male protagonist as a god. What I really like about developing farming is that it feels like the words and sentences are used to pretend, but not quite. . . I feel the writing would be more concise and the description more accurate, the quality would be higher.

Is there a female protagonist in the cheating game? Can't I write without a woman? Share cheats with others?

This is the first time I see a male protagonist who promotes his system everywhere 😰 Can't walk when you see a woman?

Advantages: 1. The main line is clear, these dozens of chapters all revolve around infrastructure 2. The characters are relatively clear (protagonist, theoretical, cautious person, base person, logistics, senior thug*2, doctor) 3. The writing is good, no virgin, decisive Disadvantages: 1. Lack of excitement 2. Insufficient character depth and subjectivity (such as why the mutant zombies were not taken back for dissection) 3. Insufficient information (I haven't seen mutant animals yet), and I don't know how to strengthen zombies If you don't know the information, you can only be beaten passively (you can find mechanical items such as drones) Challenges to the author: 1. The core of this book is infrastructure, and there are certain requirements for the author to master relevant information (survival, production, entertainment, scientific research) 2. The plan for the middle and later stages of this book: after the zombies are strengthened, should they continue to stay in the same place or move? 3. In the later period, the number of protagonists will increase, how to avoid the characters becoming stereotyped Welcome to discuss I also wish the author to write better and better

At least it's better to have sex with a woman before the end of the world than 90% of articles.

In my opinion, the main threat in the apocalypse is not zombies or mutant monsters, but human nature. From the very beginning, he exposed his reliance to others. There were still two people, a woman and a timid and cowardly man. They directly attracted two big daddies to himself, and a thunderstorm was not far away. In addition, the male protagonist's golden finger is still an iris unlocking device. You can just dig out the male protagonist's eyeballs to prevent corrosion and use them. This golden finger is useless except for making things.

I can't stand the first chapter. It makes people sleepy. The apocalyptic literature nowadays is getting worse and worse. It's all the same and you don't have any sense of involvement at all.

I feel like I'm about to break down from writing, because Golden Finger is too stretched. Although I can write a few more chapters if I need different materials, it is better to mold them into ordinary materials and directly disassemble and reassemble them, and print them by myself as needed. Especially the toolbox is a failure. It is too inconvenient and has to be carried around.

It's not very good, but to be honest, with the half-dead state of the science fiction section right now, this book is already pretty good. If there aren't any big problems in the future, I will keep reading.

Just can't make weapons? They can be made in biological laboratories and have lathes, but they can't make weapons.

The author's writing is good, but there are still some thoughts that he is not happy with. The doomsday team mode has great advantages, and the brilliance of human nature can be considered spiritual support. However, the phenomenon of egoists and cliques will never disappear, which makes me more inclined to the lone ranger mode or the pure harem mode. In addition, the strength of the zombies, this magnitude, and the strength of the mutant zombies, the protagonist group with plug-ins has such a hard time living. I can't imagine the survival situation of the individual and non-troop groups. They should disappear when they meet the mutant zombies. There is no need to write about the follow-up. Humanity will be completely defeated, and all other survivors will be extinct. It is illogical to forcibly renew their lives and add follow-up plots. It is better to increase the protagonist's group combat power and survival comfort as much as possible, improve the small evolution of all human beings, form a battle line against zombies, and fight against each other.

This may have been written by a female author, no wonder the style of writing is so good.

The author makes a suggestion. You can climb some technology trees later. If you have this box, you can try exoskeletons and iron mechas. That is, exoskeletons are covered with iron sheets. The apocalypse will look like the end of the world. If the zombies are too weak, the army can solve them by themselves. If the zombies are too strong, it will be difficult to write. You can climb the technology tree to point out some technologies. The army can use firepower. To stabilize the territory, the protagonist can become a prince by climbing the technology tree, and the zombies can keep up with the pace by slowly evolving, such as evolving by eating each other, and the zombie vaccine is also very important. It is unreasonable not to do something that will prevent you from being infected with one injection. Why not change it to injections?

Forehead . . . . I can't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 20

Beautiful, love to watch 😍

It's very interesting. Come on, the author. I've given you both recommendation votes and monthly passes.

I've booked everything, so I can't be a real eunuch, right?

Stop being a eunuch and write more emotional scenes

Come on, author, the first few chapters feel very good, vote for one month 🙂 Come on

It's a pity that he is already a eunuch. The author cannot update a chapter in January.