After Leaving the Team, My Virtual Demon King Bride Became Real
退队后，我的云养魔王娘成真了
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 846k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- Original ACG Fantasy
- Updated
- 1y ago
- English
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Synopsis
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246Chapters
5.2kRecommendations
54.7kFans
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This is the first time I've seen such a great character portrayal after leaving the group.
Well, what were all those guys who left the team before? They were all life-oriented, with all sorts of support roles. Anyway, regardless of whether the team has a female lead or not, the main character isn't the main force in fighting monsters, and her personality is definitely gentle. After reading it, something just didn't feel right.
This cover of the Demon King Sparrow's Food is amazing; even the Hero of X-Anime can't resist it.
If criticism is not free, then praise is meaningless.
My two-thousand-word essay was completely hidden, which infuriated me. Can't you even tolerate the slightest criticism in a book? If I didn't like the book, why would I bother writing such a long review? If you can't accept this, then I'll soften my tone this time. If that still doesn't work, I'm too lazy to continue.
I just watched, will the three fake people be able to absorb the power of the Star Wrath?
Don't let good women go to waste, and don't squander bad women. Apart from their personalities, no human being is better than them on a racial level. Demons want to rape, and humans want to rape; only then can it be considered wholesome.
This is a million times better than that other transmigration game novel where the disgusting female lead steals her past life's achievements. That one was utterly awful.
Have you ever been stressed out? Some of this is just random writing and assumptions.
The cover looks familiar... Isn't that the Demon King from that X-anime?! 🙂🙂
Overall impression
The author's writing in the earlier parts was quite commendable and interesting. The interactions between the protagonist and the God-like Squad, as well as with the Demon Queen, were all quite good, and the characters were well-developed. But starting with the second demon queen, I felt a sudden downturn. The story's pacing felt rushed.
It's strange. Starting with the second demon girl, they keep avoiding the important issues and pushing the plot forward frantically, like Luffy going on a training spree in One Piece. Could it be that the author forgot all his ideas after his car accident? It can only end badly.
I've never understood why the teammates who left the team were all so stupid. But after hearing the sharp sound, I felt relieved 😁 a ready-made example.