Winning the Holy Grail War Turns Out to Be the Virtual Tree Universe

This is the best Bengtie fanfic I have ever read, one of the best, and it is updated stably. It is undeniable that it does have some flaws. There are flaws in both the handling of emotional lines and the description of battle scenes, but it is still a high-quality game, which is very attractive to veteran players like me who particularly like Bengtie.

I will rate it based on the lowest one star and the highest five stars, and give the reasons Overall recommendation index: ★★★☆～★★★★ Reason: This book is a comprehensive comic based on the iron-breaking, basically no obvious OOC, the protagonist is a member of the Ming Dynasty and his subsequent growth and development The plots related to the major forces in the galaxy are logical. The author's meticulousness and attitude towards the materials are beyond 90% of the starting authors. The emotional scenes are flawed (the author is most likely single or even an innocent virgin). Some plots are well designed and interesting. However, the update speed has not been very good recently. There is basically a positive correlation between the performance of online articles and the update speed Segmented phase Writing style: ★★★ Reason: Reading is smooth, basically no typos and grammatical errors. Occasionally typos or grammatical errors can be corrected in time after being pointed out Imagination: ★★★★～★★★★☆ Reason: The characters' growth adventures are novel and logical, and the plot design is not Wrong, I dare to make changes that conform to the plot logic of the book in the main story of Iron Collapsing, and there is no collapse. The funny fun also has relevant ideas. For example, using Aha as the front drill of the Star Dome Train to create the wall built by the Star Guardian God, you can have ideas Plot: ★★★ Reason: The main logic is smooth, and obviously the book has an outline. I haven't finished writing the main plot of Iron Collapsing yet, so I can't tell how deep the outline is for the time being. The growth plot is good, everything goes smoothly, and there are no crises, so I can only rate it as good, not excellent. I just mentioned the emotional scene, but it is basically normal and can be justified. However, Feixiao's handling is a bit abrupt, which is a minus point Generally speaking, it can be seen that the exit index of lv1 is low at present, and lv2 is no problem. I am willing to spend money to watch it

It's just a linkage. Xingyue is just a multi-solar system. Even if it transcends the source, it is just running to another solar system. Let alone traveling across the universe, the Milky Way has not escaped. I feel that the author's writing is a bit outrageous. There is something that the source cannot do, let alone the Holy Grail. To summon heroic spirits in other universes, you must have the spiritual foundation of the heroic spirits. There is no Hall of Valor in other universes.

I always feel that Ruan Mei is not suitable to be written as a companion. Is she really humane? Black Tower is better

The writing in the main world is okay, but Demon Slayer and Ichito are really not suitable for dungeons. They are too weak. If you want to write about breathing techniques and eight magical skills, just write a few chapters less and move over quickly. After all, the time is synchronized, and you can't ascend in place.

The main world of Bentie is a bit eye-catching. The original characters are basically non-ooc, and the original plot is also related to the original work. At least it has reached the if line feeling. The copy is also above the average level, but the updates are limited. I hope I can finish the book. This kind of non-studio novel, the protagonist is neither a coward nor a funny person, it is indeed rare. It makes me miss the environment when the fanfic was just popular. Although most of them are novice novels, each one is really paying attention to the details of the original work. I can often see the author writing details of the original work that he did not notice, which is also interesting.

Only Chu Nan likes this kind of "passive" rape of women, right?

Now there is a pit that many people step on. The popularity of Demon Slayer anime is actually not the popularity of its plot. So it tricked a lot of people. After watching Demon Slayer, I have no memories. And the world level is very low. As a result, many people don't like to see it in novels because it doesn't have to be written, and even if it is written, it is very poor.

Why write about demon slayer? If you write about demon slayer in the first world and become a novice village, it would be fine. But when you grow up, wouldn't it be too childish to write about demon slayer?

Xingtie can definitely learn a fictitious ability first. As long as others believe that this thing has power and is not exposed, it is real. It is still okay to find someone to learn a space ability Xingtie has a lot of time abilities, and his space ability is almost bad. When Huang Quan draws his sword, the color of the sky and the earth will change and the sky will change. Once you learn the Titan ability of the years, you can fish out things from the past. Mi Mi can also reproduce the past. The sealing buildings are all small spaces. You can teleport from the sea to the sea when you go to the Nether Prison. Rick can also stop and add sealing spaces. The train can also travel through space.

It's well written, but it feels like it's a bit too high-tech for the Moon and Earth. If I remember correctly, the magic of the Earth depends on the mystery. If the mystery is low, the effect will be greatly reduced or even ineffective when faced with high magic. Or is this setting gone now? Moreover, apart from anything else, the magic of the Moon and Earth has been studied by the same family for generations, so it is inevitable that the efficiency of single transmission is relatively low. It is normal for magic to be superior in certain aspects compared to other technologies, which makes people shine, but it is not to the extent of being comparable or even surpassing. It is the crystallization of the wisdom of countless geniuses. It cannot be said that these magicians often have geniuses at the level of the Genius Club. With such wisdom, they would not be able to fly out of the earth and be beaten by aliens often and rely on the dead to resist. Of course I am not ordering everything. If the author has made a balance, I can say something about it. It's okay if you don't tell me which one, just say it has been patched.

It's almost the same if I change Demon Slayer to Demon Slayer or Hakoniwa Godslayer

Personally, I think it's better to end Demon Slayer World as soon as possible. Demon Slayer World is really boring. It's better to return to Bentie Lord World as soon as possible.

Demon Slayer has no connection with Xingqiong. You should also write something related to something like the Tiger Talisman and the interaction, or even the two rituals and the interaction.

Why do you write this ghost slaying? What is the use of going to this shabby place? Or the author thinks it is interesting to write like this.

It's boring. The protagonist's main world is collapsing and he has the ability to travel through infinite worlds. With such good conditions, what is the theory of longevity? Let's not talk about the protagonist getting stronger and finding the Black Tower or Ruan Mei to give his woman immortality. Besides, there are many ways to live forever in other worlds. Like the ghost research in the first world, wouldn't it be the perfect elixir to remove the side effects?

After finishing the 3.7 Plot, it's hard to calm down! Although this is a good ending compared to the two predicted endings AB, and there are infinite possibilities for the future, but where is my golden descendant? There are also the 2 million earth creatures that Danheng Tenghuang is carrying. My earth beasts and Chimeras are gone 😭😭😭 I hope the author can use his immortal power to create an entity for Omphalos afterwards, so that everyone can become a real life!

Although the Vidyadharas are dragon-born, they seem to be a weaker group.

I feel that the Star God is a bit like the great being who will die if the monster hidden by the Yintian God is killed. The author should not let the protagonist become a dragon of eternal innovation like Su Zhou.

First, the security component of the system turned itself off - Tibao, as a network port, actively created a bunch of junk data, causing the network to time out; Heiseyin, as a security scanner, proactively turned itself off, and all security detection systems were as blind as they could find nothing; Cerudhe, the firewall, also turned itself off and cleared all interception lists. Secondly, the core system is no longer maintained and begins to actively cause damage - Aglaia, the CPU, actively adjusts itself to 100%; Nakesha, the process of guarding the system, begins to actively write a bunch of malicious code to the memory and system files; Saifeier, the logic controller, actively tamperes with the running conditions of the program, so that when you want to delete something, it turns into saving, and the result becomes deletion. Then a bunch of core processes started to commit suicide - Wandi took the initiative to delete system files and user data; Feng Jin locked the shutdown program, stuck a bunch of main programs, and the task manager couldn't kill them; Xia Die overflowed the memory, and each program crashed when opened. Even if you right-click to refresh, it prompts you that there is insufficient memory. In the end, the underlying hardware and the core system worked together to directly crash the computer—— Danheng's hard drive created a huge bad sector that could not be deleted, permanently destroying the storage space; The system clock on March 7th caused the system to run out of time. It looped backwards in time and rolled back all the records of the previous patches; When these two underlying destructive behaviors converged in the system, Bai'er, the core of the system, actively separated (or was squeezed out), so the system was completely paralyzed and the monitor had a blue screen. Xi Lian took advantage of the blue screen state of Iron Tomb and began to take over the authority. Iron Tomb finally even forced the blue screen to open once, but we were completely blown up by the wave without even pressing the space button.

It feels like I read the analysis of Ten Thousand Words on Station B. There is only the outer layer. The core cannot be written without playing the game.

If you don't understand, just ask, has this book been backstabbed? Two or three years ago, I saw that Iron Tomb was written as a female imp and lolita, but now it's hard to tell

The new storyline of "Beng Tie" is out, and the author is probably numb. Who would have thought that Pinoconi could have so many hidden threads?

Read the introduction. Has the author been stabbed in the back? Staring at your memory, which Netoko's Gundam is Star God? 🤭

Something feels wrong. Could it be the harem? !

Is there any follow-up to the places you've been? Even if you just take a look at it, at least fill the hole (°ー°)

Avalon Star spoilers ahead for Two Phase Paradise

What's going on? I feel like I'm getting better, but I haven't updated for a day

Can Lai Gu Shi and Dan Lei be together? Romantic Gu Shi and Lord Dragon God are really a pair of fateful mandarin ducks😭😍😭

This is really a joy contest, and the prize is the Star God Experience Card