I Became a Saint in the Prehistoric Game

Saw this book on Writer's Assistant🙂

It's rare to find a book that suits my liking. It's very nice and I highly recommend it!

If you catch a cold, you must have gone out to play. Take him out and hit him with twenty sticks. He should take care of himself as soon as possible. When he is cured, he will write the code immediately!

It looks good so far. This genre is a bit similar to the book I read about Taoist Master of Shushan before. I hope I can keep writing.

Have you ever practiced immortality? Some things are written randomly and taken for granted

The author didn't listen to the advice at all and insisted on accepting Chu Xinyue. It's not that Chu Xinyue is disgusting or anything. It's just that the writing is very abrupt. The upgrade flow was so well written that it turned into a stallion flow. Anyway, I couldn't accept it and gave up. I don't want to miss this book 🙄

It's a bit like food mixed with poison. It looks interesting, and I have the desire to read it, but will I be offended by some of the clown behaviors of the protagonist? I don't know if the author didn't consider intermittent dementia enough, or if the details written by the studio didn't match up.

If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, don't write them. If you pretend to be loyal there, you'll start cheating here. 6

Author, I'm afraid if I don't tell you, you won't be able to figure out why no one reads it even if you think about it. 1. The core of data flow is not the number of words, but the ability to intuitively compare the strengths and weaknesses of the data, which bypasses the constraints of writing and most worldviews. 2. Your pure numerical value has never been reflected. For example, in the realm of swordsmanship, you can write it like this. For example, you have just broken through, but the speed reaches or exceeds the heroine's sword energy. You can digitize it, such as Mach 3 and Mach 6. I still don't know what the protagonist's stats are because I've never seen anyone else's stats. 3. The essence of online game novels is not your strange guild, but this is the only real world. It is enough to have a sect. You make the sect look stupid, and the elders of the sect look like NPCs. 4. In addition to being digitized, the essence of online game novels is to fight bosses, grab bosses, fight dungeons, spawn monsters, drop treasures, as well as interesting main and side plots. You guild, second brother, and a bunch of plots are like daily life. 5. Does your plot advance quickly? You have two magical skills in your hand: one pet can transform into another, and just killing monsters will give you a lot of experience. Moreover, at this time, you have to show the ability to double the damage. Running around with nothing to do, even if you have to collect five fairy bones, you think what you are doing is meaningful. 6. Speaking of immortal bones, you have improved so many innate attributes through other means. Do you need to prepare so much for your first tribulation? Isn't your brother expected to become an immortal? In what way do you think your brother is better than you now? According to your preparation standards, no one can survive the disaster. Please, this is an online game novel, and basic fairness is required. It is not like any other high-level martial arts novel. If you cross several major realms, it is like slaughtering a dog, and the difference between the natural disasters is thousands of times. Finally, in conclusion, apart from the plot, the biggest problem is that the data flow and doubling are not reflected at all. There is data but no comparison.

The demon elixir released by a boss of more than 100 levels is sold for hardware. Are you kidding me?

Since hundreds of people invested here and there, I have been chasing it, and I have been chasing it since it was published. Overall, the writing, plot design, etc. Are good, the writing style is also excellent, the rhythm is often slow but the control is very good. To be fair, it is a very good online article, no one is perfect, of course this book also has flaws, The biggest bug is that the author gave the protagonist too much cheating but couldn't grasp it. He made the cheating smaller, which makes it look forceful and insufficient. In fact, I have commented on this problem in the book at the beginning. The protagonist is very lazy when playing ranked matches in the guild. The author may want to show that the protagonist is working hard to make progress, step by step, etc., But the cheating doubles the protagonist's stealth level, doubles attributes, doubles the increase, doubles battery life, doubles experience gain, almost doubles all aspects, at least 8 times the growth rate! At least 6 times the combat power is in the same realm! How can others chase me? How to fight? It's understandable that the second generation is faster and stronger than the protagonist at the beginning, but how will the second generation of the guild catch up after level 60 or 70? The Sanxian's father does nothing but takes his son to fight hundreds of level monsters every day? The experience gained is at best comparable to that of the protagonist, but cannot be far superior to that of the protagonist. It is said that at this time, the protagonist's growth rate can almost be regarded as the first echelon in the world. If it goes on, the protagonist's growth rate will be the first in the world! There is no need to wait for Loose Immortal or even Earth Immortal Queen, after all, it is too big. In terms of combat power, after passing the initial stage, at level 60 or 70, the attributes are comparable to those of the second generation, but with 6 times the combat power! Not counting the swordsmanship skills, before there are advanced magic weapons, I can barely explain that the second generation has magic weapons and magical powers. But after adding the magic weapons later, it is very powerful to win with difficulty. After entering the sect, along the way, the protagonist's 8 times growth and 6 times the same level of combat power are not at all. Now I am writing In the Secret Realm of the Sword Palace, everyone is forced to have a blank slate. They have the same mentality, and it is purely based on swordsmanship skills. They are in the same situation. The protagonist's swordsmanship skills are almost the same as them, but at least 6 times the combat power remains unchanged. The result is that he cannot beat Luo Qingchan who does not use swordsmanship, but is on par with opponents who do not use swordsmanship? What about doubling the bonus? What about doubling attributes? What about 6 times the combat power? Eaten by the author? To sum up, the author may be a bit of a literary youth, probably a liberal arts student. He wants to cheat but subconsciously feels that cheating is shameful. He needs to work hard on his own to make progress, hahaha😁. He feels like a simple college student who has not been beaten by the society. Although the author prescribes it to the protagonist but does not use it, overall, the book is a good book and popular. It should not be a problem to achieve wealth and freedom for ordinary people. I wish the author a lot of money and happiness every day.

Oh, Huang, you are so cruel! A sacrifice after only a dozen chapters?

Don't write about female videos in game articles. You can just play a sect trial behind closed doors. Look at the design. Licking the sect is also licking. Licking a dog will not lead to a good death. I advise the author to be kind.

What's wrong with this golden finger? It's okay to get some side jobs. I have to play with swords. I really vomit. Now, does cultivating immortals have to be bound to a sword? Refining weapons, refining elixirs, and refining life. Also, the Tao magic bonus is so high that I don't want to play it. You have to be obsessed with this sword.

The data is fake, right?

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To be honest, it looks good at the front and is fun to watch, but things start to go wrong at 40%, and after 50%, it becomes just plain disgusting. There are too many kinds of data, and the data reported every time you upgrade is purely copied and pasted. The main reason is that these data are all useless data, and there is no reflection later. The most important thing is that the golden finger almost disappears in the later stage and is not mentioned anymore.

The golden finger was still activated before, but now the golden finger adds nothing. Originally, the bonus of taking the panacea was doubled, but now it is not doubled.

Data Monster Since it's all data, who will read it if you don't update it ten times a day?

I feel like this charade is just for the sake of word count and has no use in the key plot. In other words, the charade is directly sealed. But the problem is that if a charade with overwhelming numerical value cannot be given away, the protagonist has to work hard, so is this charade not in vain?

Such young books have been sacrificed, Ah Huang, you really can't bear it😁

You, the True Dragon City Earth Immortal, have great combat power. If you don't kill a few loose immortals from the Celestial Gods Association, and sneak attack one every month, the Celestial Gods Association will beg to apologize to you.

Don't write too much about your feelings. There is no woman in my heart. He's so awesome at wielding a knife

It feels like Ai was cleaning the manuscript and then manually proofreading it. The plots are very similar, and the plot is not interesting. To put it bluntly, the author does not have the ability to be a high-quality product. I feel that either I bought it or, like me, I paid for the past feelings, Shushan, Intangible Avenue, Qingcheng, and A Lost (four words, I forgot what it was called, xxxx of online games - a four-letter idiom). These books are really unforgettable classics.

Don't look at it, everyone. I thought this was Shushan, but in the end, I became a physical practitioner, and even forced a harem, which was a waste of my starting coins.

Upgrading with thousands of experience in the early stage will add 300 blood, and upgrading with tens of millions of experience in the later stage will add 300 blood.

The author's thoughts and ideas in the early stage are very good, but the plot of opening a harem is inexplicable. I feel that many readers talk about this issue realistically. The author later did not deliberately describe this plot that left me speechless and inexplicable. Now he has returned to his early stage and returned as a top author who has produced hits. The writing is getting better and better.

The main reason is that the word count is low and a lot of the content is too interesting to grasp. There are also many plots that can be covered in one sentence but it takes a lot of words to write. I can only say that the only praiseworthy thing is that the world setting is quite interesting, and the rest is just average. It's not quite like AI writing, but it's true that the author has a lot of inconsistencies in the plot, and it's full of flaws. Generally speaking, I like the setting very much, but the writing style of the novel is indeed inferior to the mainstream.

It's too watery. It's okay to watch in the front, but not interesting in the back.

Normal level. This author is an unfinished professional. The book is completely unfinished.