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The ink is written in a literary style, adding three or four descriptions to one sentence, saying similar words over and over again Pretending to be profound, I like to add commas every time, and listen to the book at a time

The setting is old, but the writing power is ok, food and grass

The writing style is so similar, as is the opening of Sword Cultivator. Is it the same author? Karami is in the same realm. There are all these lofty descriptions of cultivation, and then there are all kinds of ridicule and contempt around it. One thing can go from being mocked to being slapped in the face to the entire process and language. There are several chapters on various aspects of attitude and psychology. I reviewed the book Druid of the Immortal Cultivator several times and advised the author to make suggestions. However, the author insisted on going his own way and deleted the comments, so he left it hanging on the bookshelf. As expected, it was cut short not long after it was put on the shelf. Let's see how long this book lasts.

It feels very underworld. The plot is all about mental descriptions and the supporting characters' mental descriptions of some details. There are a lot of messy battles and there are very few battles. The routines are like they were ten years ago or even earlier, and the ghosts and weirdness have not changed before and after it was released. I relied on the settings to follow it. Later, I was so enthusiastic that I bought all the recent ones. It feels like a loss! After reading the five or six photos on the shelves, I feel that the routine is exactly the same as before, and there are so many women who are stingy and stingy. They are just trying to kill you 🤭🤭 It's very funny.

After seeing the latest chapter, I feel that the author has already started writing Xia Jiba. All kinds of messy settings have sprung up like mushrooms after a rain. Your golden finger is already very complicated. With the upgrade of various professions, there are more and more weird abilities. Not only have you not grasped the The plot focused on the core abilities (such as the Eternal Golden Bell, Spiritual Eye), but introduced new settings in other places (the Taoist book in the memory palace is gone after it is burned and needs to be replenished, and the 8x understanding is also burned away). I didn't want to watch it for a moment, it was too confusing.

It's really confusing. There are a lot of inner dramas. When I encounter a bottleneck, I have an epiphany. It's always been there. There are so many plots and the plot is not moving forward. The pace is not good. I keep reading and eating. Then I have an epiphany. It's the same over and over again.

Usually, it's just talk. This is the time to go out and cultivate immortality. Just one month after practicing, the geniuses and evildoers are running rampant all over the world. Especially this one, "Genius, evildoer." I felt embarrassed when I looked at these two words, and then I was slapped in the face with pretentiousness. What about black holes, stars, time, space? Brother Di, what do you write about this foundation building? Any woman, as long as she stands next to a pig's trotter, she is attracted to the pig's trotter. What kind of plot is this? What age are some people young? Just this fairy, that fairy. Too imbecile.

How did you sign the contract at the beginning? It's all a self-talking manual...

It's a very familiar outline, no, it's a detailed outline. The last time I saw it, it was supposed to be a proficiency system for practicing the Water Dragon Sword. The last time I saw it, it was for practicing the Water Dragon Technique. The following plot should be about the protagonist shocking everyone and vying to win over him. That's it. He is absolutely It is impossible to enter the Lower Court, the Middle Court, and the Upper Court. I was shocked again. This guy thought that I couldn't win him over, so they all clung to him. Then the sect was once glorious, very good, but it has weaknesses. From now on, it all depends on you. Start small competitions, medium competitions, big competitions, and joint competitions among all sects.

Which eunuch opened the trumpet? Written awkwardly. I owed a personal debt in the past, so why was there so much drama in my heart? If you want to take out a loan, you'll owe it. If you don't have the confidence to pay it back in the future, won't you need subordinates to do things later? It just made me angry.

I am a drama queen. Half of a chapter is about inner drama. The routine is the same as that of ancient Internet novels. There are many very blunt and slap-in-the-face plots.

Stop having so many disgusting and disgusting inner dramas, psychological words, fake wits, okay? Pretending to be so pretentious is disgusting. Real wits-type plots are not written like this. Promote the plot well, write the settings you are good at, and make the plot progress faster. Just feel comfortable. Don't do it. It's so long-lasting, watery, weak and disgusting. It's a psychological drama. I'm done with it. Do you, the author, really read the comment section? I saw someone commenting on these comments so long ago and you still responded. However, I received the suggested reply, but the writing method is still the same. I don't know how to mess with others. I feel like I will give up sooner or later.

I have stacked a lot, but I just can't reach a higher level.

No matter how you watch it, it feels like watching a brainless short drama, with a group of brainless NPCs always taunting you around.

Momojiji is all nonsense, and the plot has no advancement at all. It's a piece of shit.

This is written by an author. There is also a book about Druid cultivation and sword practice. I remember there is also a book about dragon training. Several books are of this kind. There are a lot of waterwheels and windmills to talk about. With an academy or sect assessment, it can basically write hundreds of thousands of words. Once the trial starts, it will be directly eunuch.

It feels like it's getting more and more boring, and the plot is progressing slower and slower. After watching it for a day or even several days, it feels like I haven't seen anything at all, and the plot is still stuck there.

Brother, can you change it? There were so many complaints in the comment section in the early stage, so let's try to change it. How many people have you persuaded to quit?

I have ordered it all so far. The whole story is filled with ridiculous descriptions, and passers-by look down on the protagonist and think that the protagonist has no strength and relies on trickery to get through. This has been described more than once. After it was released, the ridiculous number of words was broken. I want to say that you, a first-level author, have already started to fill in the water if you don't work hard to write a book and get results. It seems that it takes 2 days and 4 chapters to complete a small plot progress, and there are no updates. You can only support the book, and the results will become worse and then become eunuchs. So sometimes if the results are not good, you really have to find your own problems.

After reading the comment section, the summary is too watery. Where is the Water: 1. There are many psychological descriptions of the supporting characters. 2. The supporting characters have too many plots. In summary, it is probably because too much emphasis is placed on the plot of the ants, which makes it look watery.

It has the same taste as My Swordsmanship Has No Upper Limit, but the author is actually more suitable for romance and palace battles.

I said in the last book that there should be fewer bad female supporting characters, but you didn't listen at all.

Too watery! Full of nonsense, psychological activities, explanation settings!

How should I put it? It was originally a good novel, but the plot turned out to be a slap in the face. Is this because the author was too suppressed in reality, and he longed for all kinds of pretentious and slap-in-the-face situations?

No wonder the results are so poor. I admire him for being able to write so many papers for the joint entrance examination of the three colleges. I'd better find a way to watch it for free.

There are really a lot of criticisms. There are only a few lines of useful plot in one chapter. I either write a lot of settings or inner dramas. I think you are too good at word count. You are a lot of bells and whistles, but my strength is 250.

I couldn't stand it anymore, so I gave up 😜

Brother, why did it become another novel after reading more than 100 chapters? The first and second hidden chapters I wrote earlier gave me an inexplicable sense of familiarity, and the one about "To Gong Qingyue" had the same feeling as all kinds of investment regrets. I forgot which book it was.

The shortcomings of this book are the slow pace, the fact that it has never left the sect, there are no decent copies, and the plot has no ups and downs. Why was the Legend of Mortals Cultivating Immortality so popular back then? It's a good idea to change the map. The plot has changed. The highlight of this book from beginning to end is the shock, all kinds of fights, and the suppression of the protagonist. Then the protagonist won again and suffered from aesthetic fatigue after watching too much. To be honest, it would be better to write about the invasion of demons, the relocation of the sect, and the protagonist wandering to some dungeons to develop. We fight in the nest every day, and the situation is small. There is no tension in the whole book

The writing is very good, but the synopsis is a bit awkward. I read the synopsis a few times and didn't have the idea to read it. Now that I've read it, it's quite interesting. I just finished it.