Elf: Encounter the Star of Victory at the Beginning

Hatsune Miku

Known fast dragon, true earth dragon😏 and Zeraora What else?

I don't know why I always think of the protagonist's name as Regulus

Squeezed in the corner The small one looks like a reptile Not as good as the boss cat Which one do you get?

Your support is my biggest motivation for updating!

Sirona

Xx nodded, and a hint of approval flashed in xx's eyes This sentence pattern appears 4 or 5 times in a chapter. The author should pay attention to it, as it is easy to get bored.

How should I put it? The author is following the main line of daily writing. Now I feel that there is no clear main line. When the writing level is not that high, it is a bit difficult to think of the data.

Signed👍👍👍

Pokémon

After reading ten chapters, there is no main plot. The protagonist seems to be a local. The writing style has a rather strange literary style. The strange Pokémon writing gives me a feeling of the backward countryside of Europe in the 19th century.

Pokémon

Pokémon

These two paragraphs are repeated!

According to the story line of the light novel, it's pretty good. It's a light novel so far. If it's a little more serious, you might not be able to stand it. So I suggest you don't take it too seriously when reading this book.

After reading the first 20 chapters, the author likes to repeatedly use "some" + emotions when describing his expressions. It is a bit complicated and a little awkward after reading it for a long time. If possible, use other formats to describe, at least remove "some", so that it doesn't look so awkward.

Oh, hey, are you trying to survive again?