Douluo Lilu: Wuhun Aili, the Order Is Nezha!

My first impression when I first saw this title was...

To be honest, as long as I just write about Honkai Impact, it would be fine, but then Monkey King and Nezha suddenly pop up, it's a bit confusing.

Well, how should I put it, it feels like milk-flavored spicy soup 😅

To be honest, I feel that the cross-talk is very serious and my combat power has collapsed.

There is a big difference between the title and the introduction of your book. From the title, there is nothing wrong with the fact that you are a plug-in for Douluo's World Collapse. But from the introduction, you have sewn up the title of Journey to the Gods West. It can be classified as a prehistoric one. You also added the label of Zhutian, which is equivalent to saying that the next part will jump to the world. This leads to a problem. Your book title, introduction and label are both fragmented. Your book title shows me that Douluo and Collapse are the two. The main body, but your introduction showed me Douluo and Primordial World as the main body, but you added the label of Zhutian, but regardless of the book title and introduction, you did not show me Zhutian. What you showed me was a Douluo fanfic, so it is best to change it and confirm the main body. If Douluo is the theme, remove Zhutian. If it has been reached, and Zhutian is the main body, shorten the story of Douluo and jump to the world 🙂

It's too weird. Our Ellie is not like this.

As soon as I saw the title of this book, I felt that the ingredients were very complicated, so I wanted to come to the comment section to share my thoughts.

Updated 3 days ago. Did he run away?

It's not bad to write the title in three or two books, but when you put it all together, it's just a pure idea.

Is he a eunuch?

The two heroines Gu Yuena and Qian Renxue

Hope the two heroines Gu Yuena and Ai Li

Hope the two heroines Gu Yuena and Ai Li

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