It's Bound to the Rebirth System, but I'm Not Reborn!

If you don't do your best, the teacher-student relationship will be beheaded. (It seems to be very strict recently. Teacher relationships are prohibited. Please ask the editor quickly to see if it can be changed.)

Haha, I finally saw a protagonist who only had half a day off a week in high school like me 🙂

Even after rebirth, he rides on the horse system to send money. He is also drunk.

First of all, the main problems in my personal opinion 1. The current system does not have a high sense of existence and rewards cash RMB in most situations. Money basically has no role in promoting the plot and is not of much interest to readers. If the protagonist does not take the road of business, money will not be of much use. I prefer to replace money with rewards such as knowledge, abilities, skills, and special items. 2. As for the skill-type rewards, the existing memory improvement, perception improvement, etc. Are good, but they have nothing to do with the various heroine branches. It feels like a hammer here and a stick here, and the rewards are very random. I suggest that the system gives special task rewards based on the task lines of different heroines (corresponding rewards can reflect the intelligence of the system and emphasize the main purpose of the system's existence, which is to help the male protagonist guide the female protagonist to make up for her regrets). It can be skills or knowledge or items to make it closer to the heroine's strategy needs, so that the protagonist can use this Some rewards can bring the relationship closer to each other, such as: After completing the Qingmei Xu Siyi quest line, you can be rewarded with a high-quality milk tea recipe. The protagonist can find opportunities to make it for Qingmei to drink, and can also contribute to her family's milk tea shop to generate income. Then, giving her an ambiguous name such as "Xiangsiyi" or "Sianyi Nong" can bring the relationship between the male and female protagonists closer. After completing the mission line of Little Angel Liang Jingyun, you can be rewarded with sketch proficiency, so that the male and female protagonists can write and draw together after school, and get closer to each other. My best friend Xiao Qin's line can give me proficiency in Japanese. Not only can I help Xiao Qin teach, but I can also design plots using Japanese to make the two-dimensional fat man fall behind and give up. For Teacher Shen, what she cares about most is definitely the academic performance of the class. The rewards for this line of tasks can be memory enhancement, learning bonus, comprehension improvement, efficiency doubling and other active and passive AOE-type abilities. The protagonist is still a study committee member. The protagonist can lead some poor students or the overall performance of the class to reduce the burden on Teacher Shen to enhance the relationship with Teacher Shen, etc. The underlying logic is to design more weak points or trouble spots for female characters, so that the male protagonist can help the female protagonists through this ability and form positive emotional feedback. There is also the need to strengthen the system's help in making up for regrettable events. At present, the system's help only provides the male protagonist with information that caused regrets, allowing the protagonist to consciously change and make amends. I think it is not enough. The current regrets are all within the protagonist's ability and can be done proactively. If possible, I hope to strengthen the contradiction, or even create regrets that are force majeure under normal circumstances, and then successfully make up for or redeem them through the help of the system, which will stimulate the readers' nerves. What I said requires more careful thinking about the plot, and the role of specific mission rewards in the subsequent plot, or even a foreshadowing, such as giving a seemingly useless item reward, but it plays a vital role in the subsequent mission plot.

Giving money is not as good as giving skills. Skills can also be subjectively priceless. If the money is too little, it will make people complain. It is not as good as Rich Brother's monthly allowance. If there is too much money, it will not create any pressure in the plot.

There is no problem with the quality and standard of writing, but you don't know how to publicize it. Go to other groups to advertise, and py with other authors. You should at least create a group or something. It's a pity that the monster was cut off. We can promote it more and try to rescue it.

After reading it, I am very happy to see that the high school life of the protagonist written by the author has many similarities to mine (but I have no childhood memories), but it is very bland, really too bland, and the plot has no ups and downs at all. This may be life, but it is not a novel.

Liang Jingyun's writing is very good, Qingming and the teacher's writing are just average

The author has already cut it, looking forward to the next book📕

Let's start a new book, it's a pity that this one

This novel won't always be in high school, right?

Good boy, I'm here to help you, I like this fearless spirit

The writing style is good, the logic is smooth, and the writing is okay. However, the jokes in the front are too abstract. Occasionally, one of them is quite interesting, but too many will make you tired. After the second dozen or so, I started to skip reading. It is too abstract and boring.

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It has been more than 20 days since I updated, and the starting point is also recommended. Now I am thinking whether to watch it or not 😅

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