I Just Became a Necromancer, What the Hell Is the Ten Thousand Soul Banner?

Zombie your combination of Chinese and Western.

There are more than 80 chapters left. The plot is fast-paced, but the foreshadowing is average. The protagonist upgrades without any setbacks, and the balance of the reward and punishment system for system tasks is also very average. The tasks are completely passively triggered, and the task objectives are basically the same as the protagonist's objectives every time. The rewards are also outrageous, and various heaven-defying skills are used to defeat the natives, and then the plot development mode becomes [Making trouble. Receive tasks on the way→Complete and get rewards→Upgrade your skills and skills→As your skills and skills increase and your strength increases, you have to do things→Receive tasks while doing things] To be honest, the types of skills and props are given too frequently and too much, and the combat power system has begun to collapse. The three systems of three-ring mastery rules, seven-ring annihilation of gods, subspace wizards and immortal cultivation are too confusing. According to the previous book, The first ring corresponds to Qi training, second ring foundation building, and third ring golden elixir. However, the description of wizards in the book does not make people feel the difference in levels. After all, the system of cultivating immortals has a lifespan difference. It makes people intuitively feel that the higher the cultivation level, the longer the lifespan. Your wizard system is very outrageous. It was promoted from the first ring to the third ring in less than half a year. And the locals also have many outrageous levels, although the year is not specified. Age, but most second-level wizards are within forty or fifty years old, and even third-level wizards are within this age range. Their strength is also a mystery. They use the level suppression of the immortal cultivation system to apply it to the wizard system, but the reason given is just to crush them in terms of mental strength and other numerical values, not because they can master more powerful skills after upgrading. This is outrageous, and I can't understand the significance of this setting at all. The author's overall idea is quite good, but the rhythm and details are average. The rhythm could be slowed down and more foreshadowing should be written. The force system also needs to be improved. The more complicated the system is, the better, but the simpler it is for others to understand at a glance

The setting is pretty good, and it's pretty cool. There's nothing serious about it. It's just that the world view is a little less expanded. If the world view is bigger and clearer, the results should be much better!

What does the seven nail-headed arrows have to do with the immortal-killing flying knife and the devil? The seven nail-headed arrows are a curse, and the immortal-killing flying knife is a magical weapon.

At the beginning, there is a white jade corpse of a refining girl, and a soul genius of a young girl is accepted as a disciple... I don't think there is any need to say more.

The protagonist is too normal and decent to write something magical.

There are too many conspiracies and conspiracies. There are so many conspiracies and conspiracies at the first and second levels. What a joke 🤔. The protagonist has few skills but a lot of conspiracies and conspiracies, and the protagonist is not very smart either. . .

What kind of magic skill set do you want to see? I will save it as inspiration. If readers dare to mention it, they dare to write 😎

The content concept is okay, but the background design feels confusing. It felt like we were in the Novice Village at the beginning, and everyone was a big shot with great hands and eyes, but when asked what they were doing, all of them were security guards. Constantly instilling in you the high status of wizards, and then constantly telling you how miserable wizards are; constantly emphasizing the top colleges, the dean is awesome Klass, and then the dean is not even second-rate in the village.

I have always felt that the academy is not interesting. I feel that if I go to other places, the magic path is best suited for murderous soul training battlefields and the like. Don't just teach students thesis. What everyone is looking at is the combination of the two. I saw that the rhythm is a bit wrong in more than 40 chapters. Release the protagonist as soon as possible.

It seems that your introduction is too complicated. What you are traveling through is not a world of cultivation. Just keep it simple. Use the necromancer as the main body, supplemented by the magic means during your travels, and retain the soul refining, corpse raising, blood coagulation, and bone training. To put it simply, the soul has a ghost king, ghost generals, etc., With zombies underneath, and the car is surrounded by a sea of ​​blood. As for the magic weapon, use bone as the main one, then add the soul magic weapon, and the blood magic weapon and you're done. If there are too many words, you will be tired from writing, and the people around you will also be tired from looking at it. Just ergonomics will be enough, and I think it should be good.

It's okay, but it's too conservative and doesn't have enough magic flavor.

Yes, you have the capital to take off. Your name should be on the Sanjiang list.

There are also magic cultivators, wizards, and four vendors. It seems very nondescript.

Fart, reorganize the language for you. That's the Human Emperor's flag

One of the highlights of this book is that the weak have no respect for the strong.

The writing style of "One Hammer in the East and One Hammer in the West" is too confusing. It is written in real life, but it makes people particularly annoying when it appears in a novel. This kind of writing should be found in celebrity autobiographies.

It is said to be a wizard, but in fact it is an algorithm. The plug-in is a magic way, but in fact it is a spell covered in the magic way. From time to time, some game copy settings are used, the combat power is not high, and there is not much fun.

The protagonist's methods are too gentle. Looking at the opening, I thought he was going to use the Banner of Ten Thousand Souls to punish these capitalist wizards.

The magic methods in the book have no side effects at all. All humans can become invincible by training them into the Great Evil Pill.

It is also a magical way to play the necromancer and a sexual enlightenment book. Billions of dollars were donated because of this book

Not being cool enough as a cool novel is the biggest problem. Originally I came to see the collision between your magic cultivation methods and spells, but it turns out that you are still in physical collision after more than thirty chapters? Have you figured out what's so exciting about your subject matter? Researching! Researching! Why go out every day to waste money? The outline I prepared is nondescript. I can't understand it if I'm a wizard, but if Mo Xiu Mo Xiu writes it, it's like a quick spell cast in a game. Speechless 😅

The main problem in the novel is that the protagonist is getting further and further away from human beings and getting closer to God. Readers want to see a protagonist with a living soul, not a machine who only wants to become stronger. Write more about daily life, restore and update, it can still be saved, otherwise it will be gone. It's a pity that this good idea is gone 🙂

If you have already written more than 300 chapters, try your best to finish them. A journey of 100 miles can only take 90%. It will be good for you to write a book in the future.

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The writing is quite good, why is it just a eunuch?