The Yellow Turban Empire

Shennong, I've only read two chapters, and the poison hasn't taken effect yet. Before the uprising, they ran away due to disagreements. During the uprising, they went into seclusion in the mountains. After the uprising failed, they came out to show off, saying that they shouldn't have done this or that. Didn't you listen to me? Now you're in trouble. If you ask him what he's doing, he's lying at home.

This book has a problem. You're writing about the Yellow Turbans, but you're mingling with the aristocratic circles. What, trying to poach talent? Writing about the Yellow Turbans is difficult because it's hard to effectively recruit talent.

After dying, he came out of seclusion to become a political broker, mingling in circles of literati, pretending to be a wise man and being patronized. He spent his days engaging in philosophical discussions, occasionally spouting cynicism to intimidate people. What's the point of writing about the Yellow Turban Rebellion and empires? He'd be much better off as a Zen master offering witty remarks to the literati. He's the epitome of hindsight, all cloying and pretentious.

You've just come out of seclusion. You've traveled to a pig's lair.

Shennong is dead, the Yellow Heaven shall rise. It is only because you poisoned me, Shennong, that your Yellow Turban Empire exists.

Who are our friends? Who are our enemies? The author's bias is obvious. He claims to be working for the poor, but in reality, the protagonist is just like most online novel protagonists, achieving upward social mobility by attaching himself to the powerful and wealthy. In essence, it is still a variation of the "elite route".

As a reader of Laozi and Zhuangzi for over ten years, I honestly had some doubts at the beginning of this book about whether the quality of Laozi and Zhuangzi had declined. But after patiently reading on, I found it endlessly enjoyable. It's still the familiar recipe and the familiar taste.

This is even worse than a female-oriented novel. Playing politics in the Three Kingdoms period, do you even know the meaning of "aristocratic families"? Who the hell wants to listen to your babbling?

Go wash up and go to sleep. If you don't know how to write about the Yellow Turban Rebellion, go read "The World of Yellow Heaven".

A true master is a true master. That's very well written. It's a pity that readers may be tired of the traditional Three Kingdoms stories, and the results are often not so satisfactory.