Traveling Through Time and Space, I Became Senior Sister Xiao Yan

(I'll just read it if I'm not very good at expressing myself) This is the first book I've read from beginning to end in so many years. Most of the books were either very well written and failed midway through, or they were so bad that I couldn't stand it. Although Senior Sister has too many shortcomings, and I wanted to give up the book at one point, it is indeed a rare good book. The author has his own ideas about the plot and has a lot of clever ideas. The world view and settings are written very seriously and in detail. It's just that the characterization of each character is relatively superficial, and the motivations of the characters are often a bit forced. The emotional line between Xu Wei and Xiao Yan is a mess. The late plot, which is supposed to be a huge turning point in the relationship between the two, is so rushed that the outline is simply thrown out as the main text, and there are too many foreshadowings that cannot be recycled. But the description of the protagonist is really quite comfortable. There are very few protagonists who are not pretentious or pretentious, are super powerful, do whatever it takes to achieve their goals, but also have their own bottom line and are kind and righteous. What I like most is the plot in the early and middle stages where Xu Wei controls the overall situation and arranges everything for Xiao Yancao. She feels particularly safe and charming (the twin loli moms are amazing!) The various jokes and jokes that are often interspersed are also very interesting and often make people smile —————— Goodbye Xu Wei, thank you for your story, I will definitely miss you.

Xiao Yanzi is eating so well now. I recall that a few years ago, there were people who competed with Xiao Yanzi for the harem, but now they are all cheating, and they even bring their own dry food 😏😏😏😏

She was said to be a strong woman with far-reaching plans, but she was easily deceived by Han Feng for several years, resulting in the same fate of Yao Lao She was said to be war-loving, but it did not reflect her heroic spirit She was said to be decisive in killing, but she was too tolerant to Han Feng, and she was too rational She was said to be affectionate and righteous, but she almost ignored Yao Lao's kindness to rebuild her. However, in order to maintain the plot, Xiao Yan has to kill Han Feng It is said to be a blood feud, but it is a bit flattering to the ancient race. For the sake of the plot, the ancient race is allowed to win The author's heroine has a half-hearted idea and has no clear stance and character traits. As a result, I only speak for myself and it seems that the heroine has no personality charm.

I can only say that the first part was fine. When I wrote about Han Feng, it was just a mess, and it ended up being a mess. Do you understand? First of all, the heroine is a time traveler. She knew that Han Feng was a traitor, but she did not kill Han Feng after her master was killed. She was like a transparent person. Everything must be according to the original work, and everything must be killed by Xiaoyan. It can't be said that he is a wolf-hearted person, or it can be said to be a bit meaningless. Moreover, when Yao Chen died, he did not ask for help from Master Feng, nor did he ask for help from the Fighting Saint of Danta. I ran off to the northwest road in a hurry. I suspected that the author had no outline at all and wrote whatever came to his mind. Anyway, this heroine traveled to the past and accomplished nothing, nothing changed. The author only dares to follow the original work. What has been gained, what has been harvested, what growth and accumulation, foreshadowing, what new places and dungeons have been explored, there is nothing. Except for the foreshadowing in the front, I suspect that the rest of it is basically written around Xiao Yan. If you want to watch it, just watch it. Anyway, I don't recommend watching it, so go ahead.

Why are all Dou Po fans now licking anti-inflammatory drugs? In the past two years, some people said that anti-inflammatory drugs were a copper-smelting pervert who was pierced by the soul of a thirty-year-old uncle. There are many old people who abuse anti-inflammatory and anti-inflammatory drugs. Why is it that anti-inflammatory drugs are now used by people like a father to catch a train? There are a lot of people praising his stinky feet. Why don't you bully a young man who is poor and hypocritical?

The setting that cannot be broken through is a bit alienating

Children, don't you run away when you see the young author who limits his comments to 100 followers? The protagonist's setting is interesting, but the plot is a piece of shit. I won't say anything about Han Feng's backstabbing. The reason for staying with Xiao Yan is "Master Feng believed that Yao Lao was stabbed to death by the protagonist." Are you human to make up a lie that can be exposed casually? You are also a god if you forcefully follow the original route. The reason given is not as good as the world line closing. I hope you will stop writing this book and go home, kid, go home, okay?

I was watching your introduction to the harem, so why should I change it to pure love?

Marry into a harem? You and prison 💊 sit at the same table

In order to forcefully stick to the original plot, the protagonist was made so disgusting! Wouldn't you be able to write without the original plot?

Yun Yun's shame as a Dou Huang can make someone like the protagonist who can kill Dou Zong vomit blood 🙄. Do you want to read what you are writing? And why don't you kill Furukawa when he bites his nose and face like this? Is there anything that Furukawa can't kill?

In the past, although many of the fans who watched Dou Po changed their wives, the main perspective was on Xiao Yan, and the heroine was Xiao Yan's harem from the perspective of our readers. This is a book that is obviously more emotionally delicate. The author writes a lot of emotional details that are usually ignored, but the most important thing is that the author brings the perspective of the female protagonist, not the anti-inflammatory, so some people feel weird when reading it. But I have a unique taste, and I can read whatever I write is reasonable 🤓 I must finish it.

Are you coming to the male channel again to beg for food?

Xiao Yan: "Haha! Han Feng, is Senior Sister Xu Wei so aloof in your place? It's completely different here~. If you still have the courage to stand up, just keep reading."

When marrying into a harem, will the protagonist be with multiple men, or will the protagonist be with multiple women serving the men? ?

Author, you'd better think carefully about how to write next. The protagonist's character is too confusing. The latest two chapters are completely different from the character you wrote before. Also, I don't understand why you insist on bragging about Yun Yun. How can this guy be so tough? Will the tough young Dou Huang be ignored by the elder Dou Wang? Did you feel guilty when you wrote it? You wrote that the protagonist resisted Yun Yun's sword, but your body was quenched by the power of wind and thunder? At the beginning of the Dou Wang level, he could counterattack the Zhongzhou Dou Huang, but at the peak of Dou Huang, he was defeated by the bumpkin two-star Dou Huang with the high-level garbage of Xuan level? A strong man who physically traveled through space was breached by the basement. It was hilarious to watch!

Can the author respond? How did you come up with the idea of ​​marrying into a harem?

Which one is it? Is Xiaohuohuo so delicious?

... After reading it, I can only say that not many Dou Po fans started writing before Han Feng killed his master. There is a reason If you don't deal with Yao Chen's death, you will be scolded. If you deal with Yao Chen's death, the subsequent plot will be greatly changed. It depends on the author's writing skills. It's painful to watch

I have read many Dou Po fandoms of this type, and this is the first time I have seen Xiao Yan confess his love for the first time and be rejected in public. Furthermore, the author's control over the emotional drama is really not very good, and the heroine's character is not likable either.

1. It is clear that the protagonist has become stronger from the peak of Dou Wang to the peak of Dou Wang; but it seems that he has become weaker and is limited everywhere, so that the emphasis is always on how strong you are, but it feels very strange. 2. The protagonist is obviously stronger than Xiao Yan and can even be called the "chess player" of his destiny, but he still feels like a cook doing this and that for Emperor Yan. (Is this the influence of the Son of Destiny? Even the author cannot interfere with Emperor Yan...) 3. The protagonist's character charm declines as the plot progresses, instead of rising as the plot progresses. After the episode of worshiping the Medicine Master, I always felt that something was missing. It seems that the edges have been smoothed by life, and it lacks the boldness that made me see it so passionately at the beginning. In terms of the pleasure of pretending to be 🖊️, in the later stage, although the pretending was actually bigger, the pleasure felt lower. 4. Also, the protagonist's character charm did not increase because the villain's character charm declined. On the contrary, the villain's character charm increased because of the decrease in character charm (it is true that a victorious army must be arrogant, an arrogant soldier must lose, a defeated soldier must mourn, and a mournful soldier must win). It is obvious that Han Feng only kept the experience pack, and made a lot of clown remarks, but because he has not appeared to be stabbed, he has a mysterious sense of humor, and he seems to be unwilling to let him go.

Now that the plot has progressed to this point, it feels like 1v1 is better.

No one has posted a post to congratulate me, so let me do it Finally there is a book that I didn't like, it ends normally, let's spread the flowers~~

After you finish writing it, can you consider writing the mysterious one? I really like it.

The latest chapter won't be about "resurrection, my love" kind of work, right?

Is this book a harem or a 1v1?

Who is Lord Qinghuo? I don't remember him in the original novel, and I don't remember there being a second Qinglian Earth Heart Fire either.

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I persisted until chapter 113, I couldn't stand it anymore