Cards: I Hold the Investiture of the Gods and Guard the Globe

To be honest, it is a very normal thing for any world to have organizations. But, the worst thing about your official career is that your official career and the protagonist's career are on the same level. This is also why it is most difficult to write about the official version of the revival stream. The official version is not that useful to the protagonist. On the contrary, the official version is subject to various threats. If your official team is harmonious and works together as one without having too many ideas, then it's okay. After all, there are also novels that wholeheartedly support the protagonist's potential. But instead of writing like this, you actually plot against the protagonist in various ways. Who can stand this? You started off on the wrong foot. I don't understand you very well. You have patriotic sentiments, but why do you want to write that the protagonist is in conflict with the authorities? Isn't it okay for the official to develop the protagonist honestly and harmoniously? There are also novels that reveal talents at the beginning and receive strong official support. Why not write them like this? Is it because there is no conflict? Is it because you don't know how to write? This is a very strange point. You want to write that the protagonist has patriotic feelings, but you also write that the official side wants to hinder the protagonist and plot against the protagonist. I don't even know why you wrote this. Don't you think it's funny? It is because there are so many articles like this that almost most of them hate the protagonist and join the officialdom. Join an organization that is of no use to you. You pay unilaterally, but the other party doesn't appreciate it at all. Instead, it wants to scheme against you and control you. Who wouldn't be disgusted by this?

Seeing that the complaint about "official" posted by Jia Xu has a lot of likes, I will reply to it one by one: 1. First, let's talk about why the official setting must be introduced. Because as some book friends said, as long as it is a domestic background, the official background must be unavoidable. Some books completely weaken the power of the government, as if the protagonist is the only one in the world who is awesome. I think that is very unreal, so I introduced the setting of the Special Administration Bureau. After all, in the context of the advent of extraordinary beings around the world, there must be officials to protect civilians. But I won't write about the "workplace routine" of joining the officialdom directly and completing various tasks to get promoted. The protagonist's idea from the beginning is to be independent and develop on his own. The change in thinking and willingness to participate in the Spark Project grading test, in addition to changes in external pressure, also include some factors of "feelings for family and country". But that chapter was revised several times due to review reasons, and some content was not allowed to be written, so it was emotionally broken and could not be expressed clearly. 2. The protagonist will still break away from the official system in the future, whether he sets up his own business or joins a non-governmental organization, there is some foreshadowing ahead. So the official leader is set up to be willful and self-willed, so that conflicts of ideas may easily break out in the future. Later, other book friends also mentioned that they did not want to read the official content, so adjustments have been made starting from Chapter 47, speeding up and diluting the official plot. As for the expression of "feelings of family and country", we will refer to the opinions of book friends in the future and display it in other flexible ways. 3. Other details. For example, why go to such trouble to recruit these people? The official purpose is not only to replenish combat power, but also to control, monitor, and maintain stability (high-quality cards have great growth potential) Including the dispute between Shen Xinghe and Lin Jianxia in Chapter 51. Shen later became paranoid, and Lin gradually left the official and entered the protagonist's team. There may be some lack of foreshadowing and it seems sudden. There will be opportunities to make up for it in the future. Another brother complained that the official writing was like that of a grassroots team or the imperial court. I did not write this well enough because it involves a sensitive issue: what is the PLA doing when the mutation comes? Shenhe changed it for me several times, and I couldn't even figure it out anymore. Fortunately, I can quickly skip this part now. Thank you again for your pertinent comments. Anyone who is willing to leave a long comment must have at least read the book carefully and hopes that the book will be better. As long as it's not mindless, I will seriously look at it and think about how to change it. 🤝🤝🤝

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Although the dozens of chapters before the release were not very toxic, they were far less exciting due to the author's vacillation of ideas. However, the four chapters after the release were more exciting and I look forward to subsequent updates.

The subject matter is very good, and the writing style is also good. Unfortunately, I have not determined my audience. I wrote too many official poisonous points in the early stage, and the results after it is now on the shelves are also tepid. The most obvious poisonous point in the early stage is that the protagonist holds an impromptu meeting at home and gets angry with the leader after being angry. This is a meeting of great importance to formulate a national follow-up action plan. How could someone in the officialdom be so weird about a small role in a meeting of this level, fearing that his position is too secure. It feels like the author was influenced by the audience of mindless white readers. I hope the author can find his audience well and write better in his next book.

The subject matter is very good, the copy is good, and the writing is good. The biggest problem is a logical paradox. When the cards first came, there was no explanation that real-life weapons could not be used. The protagonist also brought real-life armors into the dungeon for the first time. In this case, the country could not be so weak, especially in the early stage when the cards were so weak. It stands to reason that thermal weapons would have an absolute advantage. In the early stage, all cards have restrictions, regardless of function or time. In this case, it is impossible for the officials to leave no traces and the officials cannot control the situation.

I feel that the golden finger is too big, and the difference in strength between the Fengshen List and other cards that are legendary as soon as they come out is too big. I understand that the strength of the Fengshen List lies in the system, but the system in the early stage is not perfect. Is it really that strong? The chief and the boss of Guixu are also legendary. At present, it seems that they are similar to other supporting characters, although the protagonist has not bet against them. It doesn't feel like it's a high-level card. At any rate, the card holder is at the same level as the Complete God List, but it's still a Complete Legend card that doesn't need to be promoted from ordinary. It seems very unattractive right now.

I have read about 10 chapters on the shelf, and there are several problems so far. The setting of the God List is that it can grow into a legend, but it is not in the early stage. Therefore, it is not reasonable to be able to summon the legendary Nezha at the rare level. What if it is directly set as a legend? Let's talk about Nezha, if the highest level is legend, then Nezha is far from reaching the legendary level in the list of gods. He is not even in his strongest state, let alone the boy Nezha. Finally, the hang-up is too big. The list of gods has always been on a different level from other people's legends. The list of gods in this list is outrageous, and it can continue to produce legendary cards. Is this really reasonable?

I hope the protagonist is more decent. Watching Yi Shao Song recently, I feel like I still can't forget that we grew up under the red flag.

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