At Wudang, One Part Effort Brings a Hundredfold Harvest

A diary entry, upgraded, others are amazed, upgraded, others are amazed.

Too much nonsense. You'd be better off providing more data than just rambling on.

This is too stupid. First, the protagonist's intelligence seems to plummet. He eats over a dozen servings of food, attracting a crowd of onlookers, and then asks curiously if they're staring at him because there's something dirty on his face. This kind of plot isn't unthinkable, but it's only appropriate if the person in question is genuinely unaware of their abnormality.

Ugh 😓 This book is so formulaic and overly sentimental. The plot basically boils down to the protagonist leveling up 123456789.

Good heavens, I've read nearly a hundred chapters, and all I hear is that you're stunned, I'm dumbfounded, and he's yelling "freak!" Bystanders are screaming. But actually, there's only one thing: I can't beat him!

How can anyone still write crossover martial arts novels these days?! They just can't write this kind of novel! Combining multiple novels from different dynasties into one chaotic mess creates too much conflict! Even if you asked the most brilliant master of 5000 years of Chinese history to write it, he still couldn't do it! It's beyond human control.

The book is filled with chapters of amazing performances by fellow disciples, followed by two chapters of astonishment from elders, then more chapters of upgrades and more astonishment—an endless cycle. At least 90% of the book is filled with exclamations of wonder, another 9% is about meditating and leveling up, and the last 1% is just punctuation.

I couldn't continue after chapter twelve. The protagonist is portrayed as shallow, ignorant, arrogant, and greedy, with inconsistent logic throughout. While his abilities are undeniably powerful, his vision is incredibly narrow. He initially strives to gain resources by showcasing his talent, but then he's unjustly reduced to a nobody, his achievements hidden, euphemistically described as "the tallest tree in the forest catches the most wind." It's truly toxic.

I glanced at the table of contents and it was full of words like "shocking" and "sensational." Did the author previously work for UC's "Shocking Department"? Then the preceding chapters give the impression that the protagonist has leveled up, and the onlookers are like, "Wow, that's amazing!" Then they're shocked to learn that the protagonist has leveled up again...

I even suspect it was written by AI; the content is incredibly simplistic, and there's too much internal monologue—it's all very weak.