The Legend of the Swordman at the End of the Century

Man, your book is really good, but I would say the main character is a bit too emotional. Of course, I haven't finished reading it yet, and my views may not be correct, so I'll just listen to it with pleasure. In the beginning, I went to a restaurant to buy steamed buns, and an imperial envoy arrived to chase them away. If the protagonist is the type who would rather have sex, then he can stay in the store and refuse to leave (of course it is very wise). Arrived at the back, I heard that the monk accepted charity loans. Of course, the protagonist can be a great hero who serves the country and the people and wants to eliminate harm for the people, but don't be surprised. Just like what a monk does is so special, aren't there only two or three ways of annexing land in feudal society? It would be better if people don't talk too much and don't let their behavior be kidnapped by morality.

When I first watched it, I thought it was similar to the routine of "The Great Success of Thunder Law, You Tell Me in the Weird World", but it turned out that it was a newborn Tyrannosaurus rex running into a pack of wolves. It has some strength but not much.

Let me tell you what you think. The book is a good book, but I feel that the plot is a bit too tight and the progress of the plot is slow. The writing is okay, and the comments in the article are quite interesting. Rating 8 points, food and grass, hope it can become fairy grass later.

Not the large intestine! Not the large intestine! Not the large intestine!

So, on earth, why is it so cold?

Nice. But let's talk about two shortcomings first. One is that the master's B level was very high before, giving people the impression that the protagonist has been practicing swordsmanship for thirteen years and should be pretty good. As a result, the three "unknown roadside minions" from the reader's perspective were beaten and beaten. In the end, the master's plug-ins were used to solve the problem, which was a bit disappointing. Second, when the system came out, it was really a bit of a disincentive. The system text was too common and clichéd, and it was a bit of a drama. Others are pretty good, and I can feel that the author has a lot of ideas. At first, I thought that only the protagonist in this book was practicing as a fairy, and the others were in the martial arts world; but in fact, although Jianghu is a martial arts world, the various methods of other characters are beyond martial arts, giving people the feeling of an undercurrent. The description of the environment is very good, especially the scene where people stay in the night rain and eat pancakes to satisfy their hunger, and every move of the Jianghu people is very atmospheric.

Depending on the opening, you can see the world as a large intestine.

I don't know if I've read too much Shuangwen. After the B frame was raised at the beginning, the subsequent plot was not what I expected. There was a gap and it was too easy to persuade people to give up.

There are too few books to read now. Author, you have to hold on. If you really can't do it, you can start a side job 🙂

I suggest changing the title and cover of the book. Looking at this title and cover, I have no idea of ​​clicking in to read it.

What kind of abstract title is this? The original title does have an air of industrial writing, but at least others will know what it is about at a glance. It is for this reason that I keep it on my bookshelf (and partly because of the metaphor of the dinosaur cub). No matter what kind of book title the author wants to change, the title should at least point out "Sword Cultivator". I can understand the implication of the end of the world, and I can also understand the pun of the sword man, but with all due respect, a novice author's anagram in the title of the book is seeking death. The unclear title of "Cloudy Sky Monster Killing" has lost a lot of readers...

Some people say that the title and cover of the book lead to less reading. Do you guys have any ideas?

This new name is innovative, but a bit unconventional

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The author should live well and live well. The article is still to my liking, I hope it can be more complete 🥺