Taking the Reins of Power with Two Classes

The writing is alright, but I suspect the reason no one's reading it is because the author likes to include flashbacks, creating a lot of disjointedness. There's really no need to emphasize how amazing the protagonist's background is; once the ability is unlocked, it's unlocked—isn't being exceptionally talented enough? The more explanations there are, the more plot holes are likely to appear.

I've read ten chapters. The world-building is okay, and the plot is acceptable. However, the disjointedness is too severe, the transitions between paragraphs are too abrupt, making it feel strange to read. The writing style also needs improvement.

I just finished reading it. The author portrayed the protagonist as a saintly figure without any opinions. Speechless.

The author could have easily written the protagonist's journey to another world as their own idea; there was no need to portray it as such a frustrating situation, where the protagonist is forced into this other world.

It serves as a source of information, but some parts of the writing are muddled and lack context. To us readers, it appears disjointed and disjointed.

To be honest, I always feel that including gun-related professions in this kind of story is incongruous and immediately reduces my interest in what follows.

Chapter 195 produced a huge...

I really like the setting, but something feels off. There aren't many exciting plot points or the satisfying feeling of leveling up.

I read it too fast before and got sidetracked. I mistook the naive Taoist priest for a Lightbringer. I thought he was a woman. I wondered why the protagonist had two women as teammates, was he trying to build a harem? After that, I posted a comment and a thread. It has now been deleted. I sincerely apologize 🙏. I really misread it. 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏

They don't bring any high-powered artillery shells, and they haven't developed heavy firearms adapted to players with enhanced attributes. Most importantly, they don't even throw thermobaric or metal bombs into those large fog gates, let alone neutron bombs. With the productivity of modern nations, even the most barren land in these fog gates could be used for farming and rare earth mining.