Hogwarts: Becoming the White Devil Starts with Your Breath

After seeing the latest chapter, the author's design for magic seems to be to turn the wizard's magic into magic nets and arcana, and into a new subject with objective laws that can be explored. This is very Western fantasy But it is not magic, nor is it a fairy tale. Now that I'm done complaining, let's talk about my thoughts after watching it. The plot is still very good, Haokang😋

As long as the protagonist is smiling😊, the corners of his mouth are raised😊, and he is smiling calmly😊

I'm so stupid... Nanny stories, pure nanny stories, don't talk to me about character growth arcs, hobbies, pure nanny stories

It is rare that Daily Guide does not release poison, but the work is too small. The author will update it quickly!

I guess I'm a eunuch, this trip has been too long.

Seeing that the protagonist was sorted into Gryffindor, I felt boring and gave up.

Why do you have to be friends with those Harrys when writing HP? Mediocre, inferior and reckless. There are a lot of outstanding people in the entire academy. Isn't it good to be friends with great people? You must keep an eye on the three melons and two dates of the original protagonist? Does it stand to reason that a protagonist with an IQ in his 30s must play house with a few children?

. . . . . . There are so many "great gods" in the comment area! This book is actually very well written. There is only one reason why there is no fire: "not obscene enough"

After a break of twelve days, why did Qidian push this book to me?

The writing is quite good, but I feel like the protagonist is a bit of a passerby.

I read 40 chapters in one go. So far, this work is very good in my opinion. Here are the pros. (1) The writing style is comfortable. The author's writing always gives people a sense of peace and tranquility, the description of the scene is just right, and the depiction of the character's psychology is also very good. (2) Three-dimensional character. The author has a relatively deep understanding of the protagonist group, the three little ones. Compared with other fan works, the author's three little ones are very three-dimensional, each with their own shortcomings and great spiritual qualities, and the three little ones will only change because of the changes brought about by the protagonist. (3) The protagonist's character and plot advancement are very reasonable, and the book has a touching power. The protagonist is a top student, which is a lot of fun, but it doesn't make people feel uncomfortable. The protagonist has his own ideas and can argue with professors. In addition, he can always touch the sincerity of others and put himself in others' shoes and think about their real needs. The first time I saw a fan, the protagonist gave Ron clothes. There was also a greeting card for Ron, "This may be a little offensive, but I think clothes are the face of a man, and in my mind you are undoubtedly a real man." Ron was moved to tears. When a friend is bullied, he gets up in anger and wants to teach the bully a lesson. The plot is very well described and can make the reader's heart fluctuate along with it. This book is not entirely based on the plot. Quirrell's wand is directly shattered in the stands. Taking away the magic mirror allowed Harry Potter to see his parents from time to time. All in all, a very good piece of work so far. If the quality is the same in the future, I would personally be willing to order the entire book. I hope the author can finish writing such an excellent Harry Potter fan.

It's okay, it's a bit like HP's old nanny novels, nothing serious and not very creative.

In the first year, I felt there was absolutely no need to get involved, because many of the plots that I wanted to get involved in were deliberately written with many loopholes, just like the black magic book thrown by Lao Deng, where the protagonist threw him away and said some words to prove his innocence. This part seemed really awkward and deliberate to me. What a person is like can be better seen by what he does than by what he says!

The protagonist is so awesome, why does he have to hang out with Harry Potter and the others? What can it bring to the protagonist? It will only bring endless troubles and slow down the speed of progress. What other gains are there?

The writing is very good. I hope that no complicated, unnecessary and disgusting emotional lines will be added in the future. Please do your best.

I've only read two chapters, and 80% of them were probably written by feeding dozens of HP fics to Ai. There's nothing new.

Really, the author is too bad. The more he writes, the more boring he becomes.

Damn it, my account has been canceled. It's really dead.

Since the breathing becomes stronger, how does the magic power riot count? If it increases, does it make the system greedy? So what if it becomes less?