A Rise from Humble Beginnings: The Path of Martial Arts Starts with the Seven Wounds Fist

I have seen the latest chapter, and I would like to give you some personal advice. Most of my brothers are tired of reading over-the-top books now. It is best not to over-level the book. The pace can be slowed down a little. Don't write too hastily. It will end too quickly and you won't be able to earn money. The performance of this book is not bad. It's such a pity. Okay, please be more careful. You can definitely change a little bit of the plot to ease the sense of oppression of the readers and the protagonist. They are all deputy directors of the city branch. They are the gang leaders of a street. What is there to be nervous about? If it doesn't work, just adjust the guns and adjust the weapons. Which deputy director fights alone with terrorists? Even if you are a warrior, your identity is there. If it doesn't work, I will move up. Or I will be high-level and low-level. It is like jumping through the ranks. It is enjoyable. If you take too many drugs, you will die. Now most readers will vomit when they see the jumps and trashy starts. There is no need.

The author has a strong sense of a big rural family, with relatives who love to take advantage, a sick grandfather, a hard-working mother, and a pig-footed man who is extremely filial.

The whole thing was ruined at the beginning, and it was poisonous.

It shouldn't be. Logically speaking, the experience of a novel shouldn't be that rich, right? Why does it look like it was written by a veteran?

The beginning is too templated, using such a typical routine. What I want to read is Shuangwen, not Siheyuan.

I got negative reviews just after opening the first chapter. When writing about martial arts, don't use modern terms. Modern times are a technological society and have nothing to do with martial arts.

The protagonist has a system and can see his rank, and then he goes to the martial arts gym every time to test. He is so ridiculous that he makes me laugh. Can you compare the number of words?

This gravity is a bit too written. Only 5 times. I remember astronaut training has reached this level. And it has to endure up to 8 times for a short period of time, which is normal for ordinary people. A fourth-grade warrior. The whole body is full of skills. I don't know how many tons it is with just one punch. Even the bones are many times harder than iron. They can withstand 5 times the gravity. It's so difficult and feels a bit unreasonable.

Chapter 2 35 to 36 I wonder what the protagonist thinks? Looks retarded

It's not a cool novel. Author, you should have let the protagonist practice the Sunflower Manual directly.