I'm Stuck in the World BUG

There is a female protagonist, I chase her 😍😍😍

Chapter 15 is slightly poisonous. I won't go into the old routine of arguing and betting with experts. The main reason is that the protagonist cannot be forced to perform by the female character.

The idea at the beginning is actually quite good, but the author never breaks through the initial plot and solves the problem of what the protagonist should do. It feels like the story is going in circles more and more. I hope I can sort out the main line and logic in the future, keep it up

If you want to write about multiple female protagonists, just write about multiple female protagonists honestly. Don't be like Sword Fairy who wrote multiple female protagonists and only married one in the end, okay honey?

The portrayal of the girl in the first 16 chapters was very toxic. I think I'm not the only one who doesn't like being forced to make choices. But at the moment I'm still more interested in the main storyline.

Generally speaking, it is poisonous The story of a virgin bitch pulling a cannon fodder to save the world for the sake of justice?

Summary The woman is a troublemaker, causing trouble everywhere and also likes to make jokes when others are doing business The man advertises that he does not like to cause trouble, but at the same time he takes in and tolerates the woman causing trouble and solves the trouble for her. The process is extremely intelligent and he also likes to be ambiguous in the business The man still uses the bug at will without covering it up even though he knows that the official knows the existence of the bug, and has not been discovered for more than ten years.

Is this female character so annoying?

It's too indulgent towards the female characters, and the main character has no temper at all. She looks like a female character. All things considered, she's a female author.

I've been working on it for a long time, is it about solving crimes and picking up girls, or is it a riddle man?

Whose trumpet does this author have? Can anyone sign up for his book? I'll go take a look.

I think Su, the heroine, is okay. Don't be led astray by others. Just write whatever you think. In fact, the majority of people think that she writes well, but they are often the "silent majority".

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After reading Chapter 16, I felt it was no longer interesting. Since we can guess that the country has discovered the bug, what does it mean to continue to conceal it? Even if you don't want it to happen, everyone should at least reveal it to the experts and the director, so that you don't have to engage in such a dramatic conflict.

This girl Su is so annoying and too willful. Ll

The murderer returning to the scene of the crime is something that has been emphasized repeatedly even after reading two interviews. In this book, the 60-year-old wild correspondent of the Hat Bureau did not think of it, but the male protagonist thought of it. In fact, this alone does not matter, after all, it can be understood to create conflicts and develop the plot. There is a section in the middle because there is evidence, so a 60-year-old baker who has worked with the old man before was sent (using the evidence can read the murderer's memory and infer the murderer's state. Then I want to ask, do you believe that this is not a super power? This is not the first time that the baker and this old wild man have met. They have seen it before and others have missed it. Then this old wild man is obsessed with science and believes in science. . ) Finally, after killing the murderer, a bug bureau suddenly appeared. In the bug bureau's interrogation room, the protagonist began to perform some mysterious rituals in the eyes of others while wearing a lie detector. Then, when the bug bureau asked the protagonist what bugs he knew, the protagonist just exploded an unlocking bug, and then knew nothing else. In fact, the day before he was interrogated, the protagonist took more than 20 times from his pocket and paid more than 40 yuan to check out at a convenience store. He then repeated his trick and used the same method to pay for a hotel room on the day he killed the murderer. Oh, there is also a shared tram that transfers to 14 times a night. Each car has 10% battery, and there is no need to spend money to unlock the shared tram.

The writing is quite interesting, but what do you mean by having a single heroine and multiple heroines?

It's more daily life and more puzzle-solving. It's okay as long as you ignore the first two minor flaws and too many female characters.

It feels weird to have the protagonist deal with future news in more than a dozen pictures. It's not that the protagonist does weird things, it just feels like the plot development is weird, and then it's even weirder when an individual appears. The protagonist's own setting is not complete, so he has to recruit teammates. Isn't it too, how should I put it, so weird, it feels like the previous settings and plot are all messed up.

What is the main plot, the superpower game? If the bug is triggered to deal with the bug, it will not be long to write.

Just like the Tomato book, it's still a youthful disease, and it's still both serious and upright.

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