
I'm in Yugakure, and My Ninja Civilization Is Far Ahead
人在雨隐,我的忍者文明遥遥领先
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- Ongoing
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- 300k Words
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- Light Novel
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- Male
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- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 1y ago
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- Qidian
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Where did this extraterrestrial devil come from? It has an indescribable smell.
Hitler's speech was based on the completion of basic education. The people were living and working in peace and contentment before they could not afford bread. The ninja world had not yet completed the popularization of basic education at that time 😅 and also had extraordinary power. It can only be said that the formula was wrong.
I guess the following plot should be a fight with Konoha. Konoha is dead and a lot of supporting characters are killed, but the famous ones are fine. After peace, advance to science and technology, then dig into Konoha's walls, kill the other four ninja villages, then conquer Konoha, give various benefits and rights, and build a new empire with Konoha ninjas. Because I have read a lot of Naruto fanfics, but I have never seen the protagonist killing famous characters in Konoha other than F4, no matter which ninja village the protagonist is from. It can be said that the village of flowing water is the iron-clad Konoha ninja.
The subject matter is right, the setting is right, and the pace is too fast. You can't treat this as a one-time thing, it should be written as a real drama. The opening speech should be delivered several times, and Hill did not succeed in just one speech. This requires a long-lasting battle to awaken the people and gather supporters. Now it seems that the protagonist can achieve it overnight. Another point is that depending on the situation, the protagonist is dominated by personal power and lacks group power. In fact, the strength of the protagonist in Naruto fan fiction represents too much. There should be a protagonist as a leader and commander, giving some content to the forces. Everyone else has guessed in the follow-up, that is, how the protagonist can kill everyone by himself, and the combat power is too strong. From a personal point of view, the protagonist's combat power should be controlled to be able to fight but not end himself, develop unique poison gas soldiers to provide deterrence, and then develop.
House-changing tactics
If there is really no way to retreat, implement the strategy of changing the family, select a country (such as Konoha), disperse all ninja and civilian units, sneak into the enemy country, and carry out indiscriminate destruction at multiple points. The equipment used includes: Konan's paper detonating talisman, the poisonous gas of Sanshou fish, artificial gas bombs... (All are convenient to manufacture or obtain materials) High-end combat power can carry out hunting or decapitation operations against Konoha's ninja teams who are out on missions, forcing Konoha's low-end combat power to find it difficult to carry out economic activities to perform tasks, forcing it to enter a competition for survival resources with the remaining troops of the Land of Rain. Both tunnel warfare and guerrilla warfare can be used, and the advantage of switching tactics is that this is on the enemy's territory, there are no survival resources to directly grab, and Konoha must not act to destroy its own base. If Konoha implements a guard policy of dispersed deployment of troops to small villages, then it can just gather the top troops to hunt down these effective forces. We must pay attention to sustainable development. To a certain extent, we only seize materials and personnel, not territory, so as to avoid returning to the disadvantaged competitive situation of turf competition. We must consume the enemy's resources and manpower to the greatest extent, so that if we cannot defeat you, we will bring you down. It is recommended to read "On Protracted War". Bare feet are not afraid of those wearing shoes. I don't believe that Konoha dares to take such a risk to fight against the Kingdom of Rain (of course this is based on the premise that the people's hearts are on the side of the protagonist and the Kingdom of Rain is united)
Killing Tsunade at this time is absolutely incredible. Konoha is finished. I remember that it was Tsunade who solved Chiyo's poison and then sent people to support other lines. And in the end, Konoha won because Tsunade proposed that medical ninjas must be equipped. Konoha can only win if the living force of Konoha loves others, right? It's just that Tsunade changed her attitude towards medical ninjas, and that's probably the main reason why Konoha won in the end! It's just that no one in Konoha knows Tsunade's strategic role now.
In fact, I read a lot of fan fiction now, but I don't read it at all. It's too magical, because it gives people the impression that you are using someone else's worldview, and then killing the protagonist of someone else's story, just to show how your protagonist is, and using other people's plug-ins. Most of the fan fiction I read now is to make up for regrets, not to show off, especially the kind of show-off and slap in the face that have no technical content.
Okay, okay, I didn't expect to kill Tsunade. I thought she would let her go by accident. I'm glad.
It's another scammer. It would be great if Qidian could launch a function to block the author.
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If not one of the important characters in Konoha dies before this book hits the shelves, there is no need to read it.
The protagonist does not look like a leader or an initiator;
It's too awkward. You have to force gold fingers. It's better to go back in time to gain part of the rule of the rain ninja. Hitler also joined the party. You, an ordinary person, have nothing. It's too fast and unnatural.
When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you are on the third watch, the slightest praise begins to sound and the number of dead harvests begins to decrease. When you update five times, readers' support will form spontaneously, and the voices of praise will become louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch The great Confucian scholars' debates are deafening, and their tolerant attitude is implemented both inside and outside. When you are in your twenties, the bookworm's memories have a place for you. Even in the long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. Updates may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of the problems come from insufficient updates.
The two Naruto books on the list this time are so awesome. One is looking for meteorites to explode, and the other is killing you. How awesome!
Speaking of which, is there a female protagonist? Xi'er has a wife and the main character cannot be left out. At this time, Yuyin is Xiaonan, I guess.
Danzo cannot be killed!
Danzo's death would reduce the burden on Konoha. A living Danzo would be worth at least three Kage levels. If the third generation is killed and crippled, and there is more pressure from the outside, there is no doubt that Danzo can destroy all the shadows in Konoha. The ninja clan is so ineffective that it is even worse than the blood mist.
Do you know what chakra equals? Chakra equals life force. Consuming chakra is equivalent to consuming lifespan.
All I can say is that for the protagonist of the Rain Ninja Village, the first hook is the Sharingan, Izanagi, and the Demonic Image! Everyone knows if you have the desire to continue watching it!
Hahaha I knew he was a eunuch. I could tell from the Kong Ninja part that he was so procrastinating that he had nothing to write.
Obviously my grades are still good, so I just cut it off like this.
Cut to chant ambition🤭
It's rare to see a person who dares to kill someone and get mutilated 🙄