
Immortal Rebellion: the God of Killing Returns and Marries His Wife Li Muwan at the Beginning
仙逆:杀神归来,开局娶妻李慕婉
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- 1.0M Words
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- Light Novel
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- Male
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- Fan Fiction
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- 9mo ago
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- Qidian
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Immortal Rebellion: Villain System, Starting Strategy Li Muwan
Anyone who has read Xian Ni will curse you when they see the title of your book.
This setting is too ridiculous, Xian Ni was written around the setting of Lu Mo resurrecting Li Muwan. Never read the novel? Did you write it with a brush clip?
Wang Lin reincarnated countless times just for Li Muwan. You married him at the beginning, and you had the strength to crush Lu Mo at the beginning?
If you want to write about the relationship between the male protagonist and Li Muwan, then don't have a harem. Li Muwan will not share the same husband with others. Wang Lin didn't dare to tell Li Muwan about the two clones in the finale of the original novel, let alone Lu Mo. With just one word, Lu Mo would dare to take over. In Ergen's sequel to Fengtian, Lu Mo once disliked Wang Lin for being too kind and tried to kill him twice. If it weren't for Li Muwan, Lu Mo would have taken action long ago. If you are writing about time travel, unless it is not a fairy-reverse world view, or you can ignore the rules when you enter, it would be unrealistic for you to marry Li Muwan at the beginning. Unless Lu Mo is abolished, the male protagonist in your article is obviously written like the shadow of Lu Mo.
The rare foundation of Xianni fandom is that anyone who has read it knows that Ergen is basically covered with a world view. To put it bluntly, the existence of the Xianni world was created based on Wang Lin's clone with great fortune, in order to find the heroine, or you can escape from the Xianni world. , Then it's not a fairy tale, or if you are placed in the world of Xian Ni, you have to understand at all times that there is an ultimate BOSS named Lu Mo who is monitoring the whole process. Unless logic is abandoned and Lu Mo is written as a fool, all the development of the plot will be restrained.
Hard to describe in one word
You can marry Teng Huayuan when you travel to the world of Xian Ni, but you can't marry Li Muwan. You can't marry Li Muwan, whether before or after his resurrection. If you have thoughts about Li Muwan, you'll be gone as soon as you travel in.
As soon as I saw the title, I knew this book would be a hit.
Who said that if you rob Li Muwan, you will be killed? Do you know what reverse results mean? The moment the protagonist travels through time, it is no longer the original world. After the protagonist travels through time, he will be protected by the power of the author. Then there will be a future body of the protagonist, which is better than Wang Lin. It is perfect. Just like writing about a mortal who will be killed by Taozu if he grabs a small green bottle, doesn't the protagonist have a future life?
There's a reason why this book didn't become popular.
A eunuch is practicing his writing style. I don't know why you wrote about Li Muwan and Hongdie. It seems that the protagonist is impotent. We read pure love novels, and we don't read turtle novels like yours. The protagonist is portrayed like a green-haired turtle. We girls hate this kind of person the most. Even if you write the protagonist Great Heavenly Lord, it is still a piece of trash. Even if you lick the dog, you will not be the protagonist. Only the slave has the position of the protagonist.
You were pinched to death by Lumo as soon as you had an idea. 😅 Wang Mazi is not bad in terms of popularity and character. You even copied the same style as Douluo Fans 🤔
Don't even think about touching Li Muwan when writing about immortality.
Have you never seen this woman before? Mazi's only wife can be snatched away
Demonic person
The most annoying thing about reading fan fiction is a group of crazy people who regard the original works as ancestral teachings. Why don't you complain about the bunch of bugs in the original novel? Wang Mazi's third step was actually able to infinitely copy those strong third steps in his reincarnation. And then he couldn't resurrect Li Muwan, who couldn't transform into a spirit? What a logical contradiction this is. If I were to write fan fiction, I would just treat the original work as Wang Mazi's first life, which is also his starting point. Don't write that this is his dream of countless reincarnations, and don't worry about whether there is a clone of him or something.
If I remember correctly, the future Wang Mazi should have seen that in the past, in order to resurrect Li Muwan, he specially sent the Tianni Pearl and a clone back.
If you write like this, you will be killed by Lumo.
It all depends on the title of the book to attract readers
The writing is really rubbish, the logic is illogical, and the protagonist is self-righteous and disgusting. It all relies on the title of the book to attract readers.
No, it's like returning to the harem, right? Then you are so stubborn, and your plot completely steals the content of the original work, so you are a different person?
I named this book just to get scolded.
From the author, if you change the heroine, you won't mess with Li Muwan. Xiangang Continent is a closed loop just to resurrect Li. Your start is doomed to collapse
You have to know one thing. Lu Mo is already in the Heaven-Treading Realm. Although it won't interfere with Wang Lin, if you want to touch Li Muwan, you have to be prepared to be in the Heaven-Treading Realm.
Well, anecdotal evidence shows that the protagonist seems to have no thoughts of his own. I finally understand the value of the word "writing".
The author insists not to be influenced by trolls
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Is it a harem drama? I just watched the harem drama.
Just write and don't be influenced by others 🙂🙂🙂
To be honest, I was a little speechless after reading the first 100 chapters. It felt like it was all water pattern nonsense. Just describe the harem. If you don't accept one for a long time, just write about growth. I can cultivate this to such an extent. It's not interesting at all.
Or a harem😅
Directly poisoned to death,
You, Gouba, are the same author as your neighbor Luo Chuan.
Is it true that not many people watch Xian Ni? There are only a few copies of this book, and all of them are eunuchs. But ordinary people can't finish it, which is strange.