Reborn in 1991: Starting as a Fashion Mogul

You don't understand the logic of luxury goods. Luxury goods sell national strength. The first question is which country the brand is from. If someone asks and you say it's an Iraqi luxury brand, you have to desperately boast about how good it is. Not only do you not get to show off, but you also get looked down upon. If you were in that situation, would you still want that luxury brand next time?

You've gone off track. Your introduction is designed to attract readers with a business-oriented mindset, but the content is increasingly dominated by women. You haven't even gotten anywhere yet, and you're already getting bogged down in romance. It's just plain disgusting.

From chapter 58 to the most recent chapter 72, it's almost entirely about the romance, with only a tiny bit of progress in the career storyline. You could say that even if you condensed it into one chapter, the progress wouldn't be too fast.

It's over 60 chapters already, author, what are you thinking? Writing about business is so slow! People who like business novels are almost all gone. If you like writing about women, fine, but hurry up and get to the good stuff! Not taking what's right in front of you is only discouraging readers. They say wealth shouldn't corrupt, but what's the point of wealth if you can't?

He started out making trunks and bags for the French Queen's court. How dare your new clothing line compare to LV? Your brand positioning is fundamentally flawed.

Dude, you haven't finished writing the romance scenes yet, have you? It's been days!

The romance arc is introduced too early, before the career has even taken off. It's discouraging.

Luxury goods are meant for the lower classes. Even though the lower classes can't afford them, they still need to be marketed so that when the rich wear them, they can be recognized at a glance, satisfying the sense of superiority in the hearts of the wealthy middle class. Moreover, France has a monopoly on luxury goods.

Too much psychological drama, and the main entrepreneurial storyline progresses too slowly; it's exhausting to watch. 😓

It's a bit too long-winded, with too many details, especially about the waiters. It feels like the author shouldn't have spent so much time on them. The writing style isn't great either, with too many repetitive, almost mantra-like phrases. The author needs more practice and to learn to control their words.