Tycoon: Focus Brings Returns

Author, are you annoyed? Are you not a senior in high school? Why can a woman talk so long and verbosely for so many chapters? Your novel has a good plot and a good idea. I'm here to see the novel's attention, not the high school love fantasy plot. If the author continues to write, I, as a reader, will be scolded.

When I opened the comments, they were all five stars. When I read the novel, I felt like a divine farmer again!

I really couldn't stand the chapter about Dingda G and Cullinan. The first part was okay, but the second part was really hard to describe and was pretty bad. I really don't understand why after confirming the relationship with Lin, you did this again with Wang. Even if you confirmed the relationship impulsively, shouldn't you show your cards immediately? Is cheating on both sides consistent with the protagonist's setting? Isn't this a problem with being a human being? Pure and innocent three views. There is also the part about the black protagonist of various marketing accounts. Is it difficult to send a lawyer's letter? Is it difficult to report a J? It's different from pretending to be a slap in the face for the sake of flattery. It's just like it's a lot of trouble. There are also various inner dramas, repeated descriptions and emphasis on various words, the water is like an enema 😊😊😊

Female author? No wonder this style of writing is used to write a diary

It's very comfortable to read, but live broadcasting is really forgetful. You can't make money. The audience for online articles is only male, unless you sell goods, and selling goods is not very impressive.

What's written next? It's all a running account, and the dialogue is too stiff, almost like a composition. I don't know where to start from, but this book smells like reportage.

😰Is it my imagination? It smells like a female video

Seeing that the quality has declined later on, who has nothing to do to come and see your research materials? You are still preparing for the Olympics. Your ultimate goal is to be an academician. It is boring. I originally paid for a subscription. Fortunately, I only read one chapter and subscribed for one chapter. You can slowly become a graduate student. I am looking for the next book.

The more I write, the more rubbish it becomes, and the word count is also awesome even if I am deliberately sloppy.

In fact, it's quite interesting to write about daily life at the beginning, and it's fun to interact with your girlfriends. But it's boring to write about solid-state batteries and play abstractly later. You already have other things to do, such as writing novels, practicing archery, playing piano, and live broadcasting. The more you write, the more interesting you become! Better pay more attention