Tycoon: Focus Brings Returns

Author, aren't you annoying? Are you not a high school senior? Why is a woman rambling on and on for so many chapters? Your novel has a great plot and a great theme. I came here for the novel's popularity, not for high school romance fantasies. If you keep writing, I, as a reader, am going to start cursing.

The reviews are all five stars! Reading the novel makes me feel like Shennong again!

I couldn't bear to read the chapter about the Great G and Cullinan anymore. The beginning was alright, but the later part was really hard to describe and incredibly padded. I really don't understand why you would do this to Wang after confirming your relationship with Lin. Even if you confirmed your relationship with Wang in a moment of impulse, shouldn't you have come clean immediately?

A female author? No wonder; her writing style is like a diary.

It's a pleasant read, but live streaming is out of the question. You can't make money from it. The audience for online novels is mostly male, unless you sell goods, but that's not exactly how a "super-rich" person would act.

What's the rest of the book about? It's just a rambling account, and the dialogue is so stiff, like an essay. I don't know when this book started to have this feel of reportage.

😰 Is it just my imagination? It feels like something from a female-oriented online novel.

The quality dropped later on. Who's going to read your research materials anyway? And the Olympics, the ultimate goal of becoming an academician—it's pointless. I even paid to subscribe, thank goodness I subscribed after each chapter. Keep doing your graduate studies, I'm going to find another book.

It gets worse and worse as it goes on; deliberately padding the word count is truly impressive.

Actually, the slice-of-life scenes at the beginning were quite enjoyable, and the interactions with his girlfriends were quite fun. However, the later abstract writing about solid-state batteries lost its appeal. You already had other things to do—writing novels, practicing archery, playing the piano, and livestreaming—and the more you expanded on it, the worse it got! You need to be more mindful of this.