Start Cultivating Immortality from an Alchemist

There are no problems or flaws in the writing. The world is on peaceful difficulty and has a college style. As long as there are no people messing around later, it will be fine. But the biggest controversy in the comment area is what kind of alchemist is this. My suggestion is to add an introduction and background. A rubbish example is that this profession is from a novel or game set by the protagonist. First of all, all rights of interpretation belong to Party A, so that no one will come to you with their own set of alchemy templates and ask you what it is.

In the early days of western fantasy, occupations were very vague. Alchemy included potions and weapon refining, and all manufacturing and production fell into the scope of alchemy. Later, when there were more western fantasy novels, some authors subdivided the occupations, and alchemy became just weapon refining.

If you were really doing alchemy in Western mysticism, I would still be able to take a high look at it 🙂

Why is jade slip (jiǎn) always wrongly typed as jade tube (tóng)?

Hey, you and alchemy only share the title of the book.

Book quality: gray, too classic.

The druid next door wrote well, and the alchemist's comments are also good.

Sure enough, it's the panel attribute flow again, I'm speechless.

It's been seven days, I can't cut it anymore, the investment seems to be failing.

The author's writing seems to be trapped in a strange circle. The effect of the protagonist's talent and cheats in the design is too strong, which leads to many problems. First, Shilipo Sword God, this has been mentioned before, and it is getting more and more serious now, with an obvious tendency to lose control. Now that I have written about Qi Refining, I already have the foundation of becoming a god, let alone comparing it with other people. How will you write after you build the foundation? Breakthrough to become a god? To surpass the master and directly become the leader of the sect? Then after building the foundation and cultivating in depth, he will surpass the sect's highest combat power. Although it can be seen that the author set the sect very powerful from the beginning to avoid the problem of changing maps, but now the whole situation feels out of control. There are also many detailed issues arising here. For example, many of the things given before became useless before they could be used. For example, the Tianling Zhu Ling was saved at that time, but now it is of little use, giving people a very fragmented feeling. Of course, I'm glad that the author can still remember these details and use them logically, but the effect on the reader's experience is really not ideal and wasted. Secondly, there is no appropriate conflict, or there is no fascinating plot. The protagonist's experience so far is really weak, which is training and research within the sect. It does not mean that there must be some plots about going out to look for opportunities and venturing into dangerous places. I personally like the sense of stability now, but the impression given by the plot is too shallow, which leads to a sense of dislocation that the protagonist becomes very powerful in a blink of an eye. The details of the issues mentioned before are also related to this. (Maybe it's because the research and enlightenment are written too easily. It's really like eating and drinking. It gives the reader the feeling that this person becomes stronger just by eating and drinking. It's very strange) I personally like the author's handling of some aspects, such as the stable environment and the more logical use of existing resources. However, the lack of attractiveness of the content is an unavoidable pain point. In addition, the combination of using the Golden Finger is a bit too much. For example, the current recycling of the Origin Soul Crystal and Mediation of Creation can easily make the physical soul grow infinitely, and then due to the characteristics of the Chengjie Climbing Art, the mana also increases. In this case, consideration should be given to adding some reasonable constraints to individual components without being obtrusive. The above are some of my feelings after reading. Of course, due to limited level, most of them can only ask questions and cannot provide supporting solutions. There are aspects of the author's work that really appeal to me, but I hope to do better in the future.

It's too watery, like running a running account, and there's nothing exciting about it.

Except that no one has a mouth and except for the protagonist, they are all imaginary monsters, everything else is okay.

When are you going to write Swallowing the Starry Sky again?

Pirates: Alchemy to become a god, start with Create the Tree of Life

I feel like it would be a bit of fun to see artificial humans appear in the world of immortality, and if the alchemist doesn't do some human body modification, chimaera, hormonal kuluz, etc., It's just like the druid can't transform, the warrior can't charge, and the thief can't backstab.

You can refer to Kamen Rider Gochard

I don't quite understand. . . Weapon refiners can also engage in such low-level conspiracies. . . This game is so uncomfortable to watch╯╰I always feel like the author is feeding me. . . I can't stand it anymore. . .